Part I

Joanna Baillie (1762–1851) · 1790

common measure · ABAB · 112 lines · from Poems (1790)

"The wild winds bellow o'er my head,And spent eve's fading light;Where shall I find some friendly shedTo screen me from the night?

"Ah! round me lies a desert vast,No habitation near;And dark and pathless is the waste,And fills the mind with fear

"Thou distant tree, whose lonely topHas bent to many a storm,No more canst thou deceive my hope,And take my lover's form;

"For o'er thy head the dark cloud rolls,Black as thy blasted pride.How deep the angry tempest growlsAlong the mountain's side!

"Securely rests the mountain deerWithin his hollow den,His slumber undisturb'd by fear,Far from the haunts of men.

"Beneath the fern the moorcock sleeps,And twisted adders lie;Back to his rock the night-bird creeps,Nor gives his wonted cry.

"For angry spirits of the nightRide in the troubled air,And to their dens, in wild affright,The beasts of prey repair.

"But oh! my love! where do'st thou rest?What shelter covers thee?O, may this cold and wint'ry blastBut only beat on me!

"Some friendly dwelling may'st thou find,Where, undisturb'd with care,Thou shalt not feel the chilly windThat ruffles Marg'ret's hair.

"Ah, no! for thou did'st give thy wordTo meet me on the way;Nor friendly roof, nor coastly boardWill tempt a lover's stay.

"O, raise thy voice, if thou art near!Its weakest sound were bliss:What other sound my heart can cheerIn such a gloom as this?

"But from the hills with stunning soundThe dashing torrents fall;Loud is the raging tempest round,And mocks a lover's call.

"Ha! see across the dreary wasteA gentle form appears!It is my love, my cares are past,How vain were all my fears?"

The form approach'd, but sad and slow,Nor with a lover's tread;And from his cheek the youthful glow,And greeting smile was fled.

Dim sadness hung upon his brow;Fix'd was his beamless eye:His face was like the moon-light bowUpon a win'try sky.

And fix'd and ghastly to the sight,His strengthen'd features rose;And bended was his graceful height,And bloody were his clothes.

"O Marg'ret, calm thy troubled breast!Thy sorrow now is vain:Thy Edward from his peaceful restShall ne'er return again.

"A treach'rous friend has brought me low,And fix'd my early doom;And laid my corpse, with feigned woe,Beneath a vaulted tomb

"To take thee to my home I sware,And here we were to meet:Wilt thou a narrow coffin share,And part my winding-sheet?

"But late the lord of many lands,And now a grave is all:My blood is warm upon his handsWho revels in my hall.

"Yet think thy father's hoary hairIs water'd with his tears;He has but thee to sooth his care,And prop his load of years.

"Remember Edward when he's gone,He only liv'd for thee;And when thou'rt pensive, and alone,O Marg'ret call on me!

"Yet deep beneath the mould'ring clodI rest my wounded head:And terrible that call, and loud,Which shall awake the dead."

"No, Edward, I will follow thee,And share thy hapless doom:Companions shall our spirits be,Tho' distant is thy tomb.

"O! never to my father's towerWill I return again!A bleeding heart has little powerTo ease another's pain.

"Upon the wing my spirit flies,I feel my course is run;Nor shall these dim and weary eyesBehold to-morrow's sun."

Like early dew, or hoary frost,Spent with the beaming day,So shrunk the pale and wat'ry ghost,And dimly wore away.

No longer Marg'ret felt the storm,She bow'd her lovely head;And with her lover's fleeting form,Her gentle spirit fled.

Words in this poem 18
fading n.
An Irish dance; also, the burden of a song.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
pathless a.
Having no beaten path or way; untrodden; impenetrable; as, pathless woods.
blasted a.
Blighted; withered.
angry a.
Troublesome; vexatious; rigorous. [See Anger.]
wonted a.
Accustomed; customary; usual.
shalt
2d per. sing. of Shall.
stunning a.
Overpowering consciousness; overpowering the senses; especially, overpowering the sense of hearing; confounding with noise.
dreary a.
Sorrowful; distressful. [OE. dreori, dreri, AS. dreórig, sad; akin to G. traurig, and prob. to AS. dreósan to fall, Goth. driusan. Cf. Dross, Drear, Drizzle, Drowse.]
sadness n.
Heaviness; firmness.
beamless a.
Not having a beam.
corpse n.
A human body in general, whether living or dead; -- sometimes contemptuosly. [OF. cors (sometimes written corps), F. corps, L. corpus; akin to AS. hrif womb. See Midriff, and cf. Corse, Corselet, Corps, Cuerpo.]
hoary a.
White or whitish."The hoary willows."
sooth a.
True; faithful; trustworthy. [OE. soth, AS. s, for san; akin to OS. s, OHG. sand, Icel. sannr, Sw. sann, Dan. sand, Skr. sat, sant, real, genuine, present, being; properly p. pr. from a root]
clod n.
A lump or mass, especially of earth, turf, or clay. [OE. clodde, latter form of clot. See Clot.]
hapless a.
Without hap or luck; luckless; unfortunate; unlucky; unhappy; as, hapless youth; hapless maid.
ghost n.
The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
dimly adv.
In a dim or obscure manner; not brightly or clearly; with imperfect sight.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Part I is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, &c. (1790) Wherein It Is Attempted To Describe Certain Views Of Nature And Of Rustic Manners; And Also, To Point Out, In Some Instances, The Different Influence Which The Same Circumstances Produce On Different Characters, Project Gutenberg ebook #14617; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Joanna Baillie, Part I, in Poems (1790) (1790), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #14617, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/baillie-poems/part-i.html, id L09851.

Form and metre

Part I is 112 lines in 28 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 19 of its 28 stanzas. The metre is common measure, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.0 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 20% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB headA · lightB · shedA · nightB
  2. 2 -A-A vast · nearA · waste · fearA
  3. 3 -A-A top · stormA · hope · formA
  4. 4 -A-A rolls · prideA · growls · sideA
  5. 5 ABAB deerA · denB · fearA · menB
  6. 6 ABAB sleepsA · lieB · creepsA · cryB
  7. 7 ABAB nightA · airB · affrightA · repairB
  8. 8 -A-A rest · theeA · blast · meA
  9. 9 ABAB findA · careB · windA · hairB
  10. 10 -A-A word · wayA · board · stayA
  11. 11 ABAB nearA · blissB · cheerA · thisB
  12. 12 ABAB soundA · fallB · roundA · callB
  13. 13 -A-A waste · appearsA · past · fearsA
  14. 14 ABAB slowA · treadB · glowA · fledB
  15. 15 ABAB browA · eyeB · bowA · skyB
  16. 16 ABAB sightA · roseB · heightA · clothesB
  17. 17 ABAB breastA · vainB · restA · againB
  18. 18 ABAB lowA · doomB · woeA · tombB
  19. 19 ABAB swareA · meetB · shareA · sheetB
  20. 20 ABAB landsA · allB · handsA · hallB
  21. 21 ABAB hairA · tearsB · careA · yearsB
  22. 22 -A-A gone · theeA · alone · meA
  23. 23 -A-A clod · headA · loud · deadA
  24. 24 ABAB theeA · doomB · beA · tombB
  25. 25 ABAB towerA · againB · powerA · painB
  26. 26 ABAB fliesA · runB · eyesA · sunB
  27. 27 -A-A frost · dayA · ghost · awayA
  28. 28 ABAB stormA · headB · formA · fledB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against common measure. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
"The wild winds bellow o'er my head,8···/˘···
And spent eve's fading light;6···/˘·
Where shall I find some friendly shed8·····/˘·
To screen me from the night?6······
"Ah! round me lies a desert vast,8·····/˘·
No habitation near;6··˘/˘·
And dark and pathless is the waste,8···/˘···
And fills the mind with fear6······
"Thou distant tree, whose lonely top8·/˘··/˘·
Has bent to many a storm,7···/˘··
No more canst thou deceive my hope,8····˘/··
And take my lover's form;6···/˘·
"For o'er thy head the dark cloud rolls,8········
Black as thy blasted pride.6···/˘·
How deep the angry tempest growls8···/˘/˘·
Along the mountain's side!6˘/·/˘·
"Securely rests the mountain deer8˘/˘··/˘·
Within his hollow den,6···/˘·
His slumber undisturb'd by fear,8·/˘·˘/··
Far from the haunts of men.6······
"Beneath the fern the moorcock sleeps,8········
And twisted adders lie;6·/˘/˘·
Back to his rock the night-bird creeps,8········
Nor gives his wonted cry.6···/˘·
"For angry spirits of the night8·/˘/˘···
Ride in the troubled air,6···/˘·
And to their dens, in wild affright,8······˘/
The beasts of prey repair.6····˘/
"But oh! my love! where do'st thou rest?8········
What shelter covers thee?6·/˘/˘·
O, may this cold and wint'ry blast8·····/˘·
But only beat on me!6·/˘···
"Some friendly dwelling may'st thou find,8·/˘/˘···
Where, undisturb'd with care,6··˘/··
Thou shalt not feel the chilly wind8·····/˘·
That ruffles Marg'ret's hair.6·/˘/˘·
"Ah, no! for thou did'st give thy word8········
To meet me on the way;6······
Nor friendly roof, nor coastly board8·/˘·····
Will tempt a lover's stay.6···/˘·
"O, raise thy voice, if thou art near!8········
Its weakest sound were bliss:6·/˘···
What other sound my heart can cheer8·/˘·····
In such a gloom as this?6······
"But from the hills with stunning sound8·····/˘·
The dashing torrents fall;6·/˘/˘·
Loud is the raging tempest round,8···/˘/˘·
And mocks a lover's call.6···/˘·
"Ha! see across the dreary waste8··˘/·/˘·
A gentle form appears!6·/˘·˘/
It is my love, my cares are past,8········
How vain were all my fears?"6······
The form approach'd, but sad and slow,8··˘/····
Nor with a lover's tread;6···/˘·
And from his cheek the youthful glow,8·····/˘·
And greeting smile was fled.6·/˘···
Dim sadness hung upon his brow;8·/˘·····
Fix'd was his beamless eye:6···/˘·
His face was like the moon-light bow8········
Upon a win'try sky.6···/˘·
And fix'd and ghastly to the sight,8···/˘···
His strengthen'd features rose;6·/˘/˘·
And bended was his graceful height,8·/˘··/˘·
And bloody were his clothes.6·/˘···
"O Marg'ret, calm thy troubled breast!8·/˘··/˘·
Thy sorrow now is vain:6·/˘···
Thy Edward from his peaceful rest8·/˘··/˘·
Shall ne'er return again.6··˘/˘/
"A treach'rous friend has brought me low,8········
And fix'd my early doom;6···/˘·
And laid my corpse, with feigned woe,7·······
Beneath a vaulted tomb6···/˘·
"To take thee to my home I sware,8········
And here we were to meet:6······
Wilt thou a narrow coffin share,8···/˘/˘·
And part my winding-sheet?6···/˘·
"But late the lord of many lands,8·····/˘·
And now a grave is all:6······
My blood is warm upon his hands8········
Who revels in my hall.6·/˘···
"Yet think thy father's hoary hair8···/˘/˘·
Is water'd with his tears;6·/˘···
He has but thee to sooth his care,8········
And prop his load of years.6······
"Remember Edward when he's gone,8˘/˘/˘···
He only liv'd for thee;6·/˘···
And when thou'rt pensive, and alone,8···/˘·˘/
O Marg'ret call on me!6·/˘···
"Yet deep beneath the mould'ring clod8········
I rest my wounded head:6···/˘·
And terrible that call, and loud,8·/˘˘····
Which shall awake the dead."6··˘/··
"No, Edward, I will follow thee,8·/˘··/˘·
And share thy hapless doom:6···/˘·
Companions shall our spirits be,9˘/˘·/˘/˘·
Tho' distant is thy tomb.6·/˘···
"O! never to my father's tower9·/˘··/˘/˘
Will I return again!6··˘/˘/
A bleeding heart has little power9·/˘··/˘/˘
To ease another's pain.6··˘/˘·
"Upon the wing my spirit flies,8·····/˘·
I feel my course is run;6······
Nor shall these dim and weary eyes8·····/˘·
Behold to-morrow's sun."6˘/·/˘·
Like early dew, or hoary frost,8·/˘··/˘·
Spent with the beaming day,6···/˘·
So shrunk the pale and wat'ry ghost,8·····/˘·
And dimly wore away.6·/˘·˘/
No longer Marg'ret felt the storm,8·/˘/˘···
She bow'd her lovely head;6···/˘·
And with her lover's fleeting form,8···/˘/˘·
Her gentle spirit fled.6·/˘/˘·

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