Bronze Trumpets and Sea Water— On Turning Latin into English

Elinor Wylie (1885–1928) · 1921

iambic tetrameter · ABAB · 12 lines · from Nets to Catch the Wind

Alembics turn to stranger thingsStrange things, but never while we liveShall magic turn this bronze that singsTo singing water in a sieve.

The trumpeters of Caesar's guardSalute his rigorous bastionsWith ordered bruit; the bronze is hardThough there is silver in the bronze.

Our mutable tongue is like the sea,Curled wave and shattering thunder-fit;Dangle in strings of sand shall beWho smooths the ripples out of it.

Words in this poem

shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
bruit n.
Report; rumor; fame. [OE. bruit, brut, noise, bruit, F. bruit, fr. LL. brugitus; cf. L. rugire to roar; perh. influenced by the source of E. bray to make a harsh noise, Armor. brud b]
dangle v. i.
To hang loosely, or with a swinging or jerking motion. [Akin to Dan. dangle, dial. Sw. dangla, Dan. dingle, Sw. dingla, Icel. dingla; perh. from E. ding.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Bronze Trumpets and Sea Water— On Turning Latin into English is in the public domain. This text is taken from Nets to Catch the Wind, Project Gutenberg ebook #6682; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Bronze Trumpets and Sea Water— On Turning Latin into English is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.8 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 58% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB thingsA · liveB · singsA · sieveB
  2. 2 ABAB guardA · bastionsB · hardA · bronzeB
  3. 3 ABAB seaA · fitB · beA · itB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Alembics turn to stranger things8·····/˘·
Strange things, but never while we live7···/···
Shall magic turn this bronze that sings8·/˘·····
To singing water in a sieve.8·/˘/˘···
The trumpeters of Caesar's guard7·/˘·/˘·
Salute his rigorous bastions7˘/·/˘/˘
With ordered bruit; the bronze is hard8·/˘·····
Though there is silver in the bronze.8···/˘···
Our mutable tongue is like the sea,8//˘·····
Curled wave and shattering thunder-fit;8···/˘/˘·
Dangle in strings of sand shall be8/˘······
Who smooths the ripples out of it.8···/˘···

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