Repentance
The fields which with covetous spirit we sold,Those beautiful fields, the delight of the day,Would have brought us more good than a burthen of gold,Could we but have been as contented as they.
When the troublesome Tempter beset us, said I,"Let him come, with his purse proudly grasped in his hand;But, Allan, be true to me, Allan,--we'll dieBefore he shall go with an inch of the land!"
There dwelt we, as happy as birds in their bowers;Unfettered as bees that in gardens abide;We could do what we liked with the land, it was ours;And for us the brook murmured that ran by its side.
But now we are strangers, go early or late;And often, like one overburthened with sin,With my hand on the latch of the half-opened gate,I look at the fields, but I cannot go in!
When I walk by the hedge on a bright summer's day,Or sit in the shade of my grandfather's tree,A stern face it puts on, as if ready to say,"What ails you, that you must come creeping to me!"
With our pastures about us, we could not be sad;Our comfort was near if we ever were crost;But the comfort, the blessings, and wealth that we had,We slighted them all,--and our birth-right was lost.
Oh, ill-judging sire of an innocent sonWho must now be a wanderer! but peace to that strain!Think of evening's repose when our labour was done,The sabbath's return; and its leisure's soft chain!
And in sickness, if night had been sparing of sleep,How cheerful, at sunrise, the hill where I stood,Looking down on the kine, and our treasure of sheepThat besprinkled the field; 'twas like youth in my blood!
Now I cleave to the house, and am dull as a snail;And, oftentimes, hear the church-bell with a sigh,That follows the thought--We've no land in the vale,Save six feet of earth where our forefathers lie!
Words in this poem
- covetous a.
- Very desirous; eager to obtain; -- used in a good sense. [OF. coveitos, F. convoiteux. See Covet, v. t.]
- tempter n.
- One who tempts or entices; especially, Satan, or the Devil, regarded as the great enticer to evil.
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- latch v. t.
- To smear; to anoint. [Cf. F. lécher to lick (of German origin). Cf. Lick.]
- wealth n.
- Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
- sire n.
- A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
- oftentimes adv.
- Frequently; often; many times. [Often + time. Cf. -wards.]
- vale n.
- A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Repentance is 36 lines in 9 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%).
See other poems in anapaestic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABAB soldA · dayB · goldA · theyB
- 2 ABAB iA · handB · dieA · landB
- 3 ABAB bowersA · abideB · oursA · sideB
- 4 ABAB lateA · sinB · gateA · inB
- 5 ABAB dayA · treeB · sayA · meB
- 6 ABAB sadA · crostB · hadA · lostB
- 7 ABAB sonA · strainB · doneA · chainB
- 8 ABAB sleepA · stoodB · sheepA · bloodB
- 9 ABAB snailA · sighB · valeA · lieB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| The fields which with covetous spirit we sold, | 10 | ····/˘˘/·· |
| Those beautiful fields, the delight of the day, | 10 | ·/˘··˘/··· |
| Would have brought us more good than a burthen of gold, | 12 | ········/˘·· |
| Could we but have been as contented as they. | 11 | ······˘/˘·· |
| When the troublesome Tempter beset us, said I, | 11 | ··/˘/˘˘/··· |
| "Let him come, with his purse proudly grasped in his hand; | 12 | ······/˘···· |
| But, Allan, be true to me, Allan,--we'll die | 11 | ·/˘····/˘·· |
| Before he shall go with an inch of the land!" | 11 | ··········· |
| There dwelt we, as happy as birds in their bowers; | 11 | ····/˘····/ |
| Unfettered as bees that in gardens abide; | 11 | ˘/˘····/˘˘/ |
| We could do what we liked with the land, it was ours; | 12 | ···········/ |
| And for us the brook murmured that ran by its side. | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| But now we are strangers, go early or late; | 11 | ····/˘·/˘·· |
| And often, like one overburthened with sin, | 11 | ·/˘········ |
| With my hand on the latch of the half-opened gate, | 12 | ·········/˘· |
| I look at the fields, but I cannot go in! | 11 | ·······/˘·· |
| When I walk by the hedge on a bright summer's day, | 12 | ·········/˘· |
| Or sit in the shade of my grandfather's tree, | 11 | ·······/·˘· |
| A stern face it puts on, as if ready to say, | 12 | ········/˘·· |
| "What ails you, that you must come creeping to me!" | 11 | ·······/˘·· |
| With our pastures about us, we could not be sad; | 12 | ·//˘········ |
| Our comfort was near if we ever were crost; | 10 | //˘····/·· |
| But the comfort, the blessings, and wealth that we had, | 12 | ··/˘·/˘····· |
| We slighted them all,--and our birth-right was lost. | 11 | ·/˘···/···· |
| Oh, ill-judging sire of an innocent son | 10 | ··/˘/··/˘· |
| Who must now be a wanderer! but peace to that strain! | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| Think of evening's repose when our labour was done, | 12 | ··/˘˘/·//˘·· |
| The sabbath's return; and its leisure's soft chain! | 11 | ·/˘˘/··/˘·· |
| And in sickness, if night had been sparing of sleep, | 12 | ··/˘····/˘·· |
| How cheerful, at sunrise, the hill where I stood, | 11 | ·/˘·/······ |
| Looking down on the kine, and our treasure of sheep | 12 | /˘·····//˘·· |
| That besprinkled the field; 'twas like youth in my blood! | 11 | ··········· |
| Now I cleave to the house, and am dull as a snail; | 12 | ············ |
| And, oftentimes, hear the church-bell with a sigh, | 11 | ·/˘········ |
| That follows the thought--We've no land in the vale, | 11 | ·/˘········ |
| Save six feet of earth where our forefathers lie! | 11 | ······//·˘· |
On this poem
Written at Town-end, Grasmere. Suggested by the conversation of our next neighbour, Margaret Ashburner.
Notes from the edition 7
William Knight's notes to The Poetical Works of William Wordsworth, Volume 3 (1896; Project Gutenberg #12383): Wordsworth's own Isabella Fenwick notes and Knight's headnotes on composition and publication, plus his lettered footnotes (restarting at A for every poem/book; Book First of The Prelude runs past Z into lowercase a, b, c...).
- Stanza 1, line 3 1820. the delight of our day, MS. O fools that we were--we had land which we sold MS. O fools that we were without virtue to hold MS. The fields that together contentedly lay Would have done us more good than another man's gold MS.
- Stanza 2, line 3 1820. When the bribe of the Tempter beset us, said I, Let him come with his bags proudly grasped in his hand. But, Thomas, be true to me, Thomas, we'll die MS.
- Stanza 3, line 3 1836. ... chose ... 1820 and MS.
- Stanza 4, line 3 1820. When my hand has half-lifted the latch of the gate, MS.
- Stanza 4, line 4 1820. ... and ... MS.
- Stanza 6, line 4 1827. But the blessings, and comfort, and wealth that we had, We slighted them all,--and our birth-right was lost. 1820 and MS. But we traitorously gave the best friend that we had For spiritless pelf--as we felt to our cost! MS.
- Stanza 8, line 2 1820. When my sick crazy body had lain without sleep, How cheering the sunshiny vale where I stood, MS.
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