Pastoral

William Carlos Williams (1883–1963) · 1917

iambic trimeter · 25 lines · from Al Que Quiere!

The little sparrowshop ingenuouslyabout the pavementquarrelingwith sharp voicesover those thingsthat interest them.But we who are wisershut ourselves inon either handand no one knowswhether we think goodor evil.Meanwhile,the old man who goes aboutgathering dog-limewalks in the gutterwithout looking upand his treadis more majestic thanthat of the Episcopal ministerapproaching the pulpitof a Sunday.These thingsastonish me beyond words.

Words in this poem

ingenuously adv.
In an ingenuous manner; openly; fairly; candidly; artlessly.
quarreling a.
Engaged in a quarrel; apt or disposed to quarrel; as, quarreling factions; a quarreling mood.
meanwhile n.
The intervening time; as, in the meantime (or mean time).
astonish v. t.
To stun; to render senseless, as by a blow. [OE. astonien, astunian, astonen, OF. estoner, F. étonner, fr. L. ex out + tonare to thunder, but perhaps influenced by E. stun. See Thunder, Astound, Astony.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Pastoral is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Book of Poems, Al Que Quiere!, Project Gutenberg ebook #51997; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Carlos Williams, Pastoral, in Al Que Quiere! (1917), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #51997, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/williams-al-que-quiere/pastoral-2.html, id L01100.

Form and metre

Pastoral is 25 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 82%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 4.8 syllables. 10 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 80% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic trimeter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -----A------BB---------A- sparrows · ingenuously · pavement · quarreling · voices · thingsA · them · wiser · in · hand · knows · good · evilB · meanwhileB · about · lime · gutter · up · tread · than · minister · pulpit · sunday · thingsA · words
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The little sparrows5·/˘/˘
hop ingenuously6·˘/˘˘˘
about the pavement5···/˘
quarreling3/˘˘
with sharp voices4··/˘
over those things4····
that interest them.4·/˘·
But we who are wiser6····/˘
shut ourselves in5·˘˘/·
on either hand4·/˘·
and no one knows4····
whether we think good5·····
or evil.3·/˘
Meanwhile,2/·
the old man who goes about7·······
gathering dog-lime5/˘˘··
walks in the gutter5···/˘
without looking up5··/˘·
and his tread3···
is more majestic than6··˘/˘·
that of the Episcopal minister10···˘/˘˘/˘˘
approaching the pulpit6˘/˘·/˘
of a Sunday.4··/·
These things2··
astonish me beyond words.7˘/˘····

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