To My Lord Admiral, of His Late Sickness and Recovery
With joy like ours the Thracian youth invadesOrpheus, returning from th'Elysian shades;Embrace the hero, and his stay implore;Make it their public suit he would no moreDesert them so, and for his spouse's sake,His vanish'd love, tempt the Lethean lake.The ladies, too, the brightest of that time(Ambitious all his lofty bed to climb),Their doubtful hopes with expectation feed,Who shall the fair Eurydice succeed:Eurydice! for whom his numerous moanMakes list'ning trees and savage mountains groan;Through all the air his sounding strings dilateSorrow, like that which touch'd our hearts of late.Your pining sickness, and your restless pain,At once the land affecting, and the main,When the glad news that you were admiralScarce through the nation spread, 'twas feared by allThat our great Charles, whose wisdom shines in you,Would be perplexed how to choose anew.So more than private was the joy and grief,That at the worst it gave our souls relief,That in our age such sense of virtue lived,They joy'd so justly, and so justly grieved.Nature (her fairest light eclipsèd) seemsHerself to suffer in those sharp extremes;While not from thine alone thy blood retires,But from those cheeks which all the world admires.The stem thus threaten'd, and the sap in thee,Droop all the branches of that noble tree!Their beauty they, and we our love suspend;Nought can our wishes, save thy health, intend.As lilies overcharged with rain, they bendTheir beauteous heads, and with high heaven contend;Fold thee within their snowy arms, and cry--'He is too faultless, and too young, to die!'So like immortals round about thee theySit, that they fright approaching death away.Who would not languish, by so fair a trainTo be lamented, and restored again?
Or, thus withheld, what hasty soul would go,Though to the blest? O'er young Adonis soFair Venus mourn'd, and with the precious showerOf her warm tears cherish'd the springing flower.
The next support, fair hope of your great name,And second pillar of that noble frame,By loss of thee would no advantage have,But step by step pursue thee to the grave.
And now relentless Fate, about to endThe line which backward does so far extendThat antique stock, which still the world suppliesWith bravest spirits, and with brightest eyes,Kind Phoebus, interposing, bid me say,Such storms no more shall shake that house; but they,Like Neptune, and his sea-born niece, shall beThe shining glories of the land and sea;With courage guard, and beauty warm, our age,And lovers fill with like poetic rage.
'Nation spread': the Earl of Northumberland, appointed Lord HighAdmiral in the year 1638.
Words in this poem
- thracian a.
- Of or pertaining to Thrace, or its people.
- orpheus n.
- The famous mythic Thracian poet, son of the Muse Calliope, and husband of Eurydice. He is reputed to have had power to entrance beasts and inanimate objects by the music of his lyre.
- lethean a.
- Of or pertaining to Lethe; resembling in effect the water of Lethe. Milton. Barrow.
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- scarce a.
- Not plentiful or abundant; in small quantity in proportion to the demand; not easily to be procured; rare; uncommon. [OE. scars, OF. escars, eschars, LL. scarpsus, for L. excerptus, p. p. of excerpere to pick out, and hence to contract, to shorten; ex (see Ex-) + carpere. See C]
- intend v. t.
- To stretch' to extend; to distend. [OE. entenden to be attentive, F. entendre, fr. L. intendre, intentum, and intensum, to intend, attend, stretch out, extend; pref. in- in + tendere to stretch, s]
- beauteous a.
- Full of beauty; beautiful; very handsome. [Mostly poetic] -- Beau"te*ous*ly, adv. --
- snowy a.
- White like snow.
- faultless a.
- Without fault; not defective or imperfect; free from blemish; free from incorrectness, vice, or offense; perfect; as, a faultless poem.
- languish v. i.
- To cause to dr Shak.
- lamented a.
- Mourned for; bewailed.
- relentless a.
- Unmoved by appeals for sympathy or forgiveness; insensible to the distresses of others; destitute of tenderness; unrelenting; unyielding; unpitying; as, a prey to relentless despotism.
- phoebus n.
- Apollo; the sun god.
- niece n.
- A relative, in general; especially, a descendant, whether male or female; a granddaughter or a grandson. B. Jonson. Wyclif. [OE. nece, F. nièce, LL. neptia, for L. neptis a granddaughter, niece, akin to nepos. See Nephew.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
To My Lord Admiral, of His Late Sickness and Recovery is 60 lines in 5 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 90% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 30% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKK--LLMMNNOOOOPPQQ-- invadesA · shadesA · imploreB · moreB · sakeC · lakeC · timeD · climbD · feedE · succeedE · moanF · groanF · dilateG · lateG · painH · mainH · admiralI · allI · youJ · anewJ · griefK · reliefK · lived · grieved · seemsL · extremesL · retiresM · admiresM · theeN · treeN · suspendO · intendO · bendO · contendO · cryP · dieP · theyQ · awayQ · train · again
- 2 AABB goA · soA · showerB · flowerB
- 3 AABB nameA · frameA · haveB · graveB
- 4 AABBCCDDEE endA · extendA · suppliesB · eyesB · sayC · theyC · beD · seaD · ageE · rageE
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| With joy like ours the Thracian youth invades | 10 | ···/·/˘·˘/ |
| Orpheus, returning from th'Elysian shades; | 10 | /˘˘/˘····· |
| Embrace the hero, and his stay implore; | 10 | ˘/·/˘···˘/ |
| Make it their public suit he would no more | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Desert them so, and for his spouse's sake, | 10 | ˘/·····/˘· |
| His vanish'd love, tempt the Lethean lake. | 10 | ·/˘···˘/˘· |
| The ladies, too, the brightest of that time | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| (Ambitious all his lofty bed to climb), | 10 | ˘/˘··/˘··· |
| Their doubtful hopes with expectation feed, | 10 | ·/˘···˘/˘· |
| Who shall the fair Eurydice succeed: | 9 | ·······˘/ |
| Eurydice! for whom his numerous moan | 10 | ······/˘˘· |
| Makes list'ning trees and savage mountains groan; | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Through all the air his sounding strings dilate | 10 | ·····/˘·˘/ |
| Sorrow, like that which touch'd our hearts of late. | 10 | /˘····/··· |
| Your pining sickness, and your restless pain, | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| At once the land affecting, and the main, | 10 | ····˘/˘··· |
| When the glad news that you were admiral | 10 | ·······/˘˘ |
| Scarce through the nation spread, 'twas feared by all | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| That our great Charles, whose wisdom shines in you, | 10 | ·/···/˘··· |
| Would be perplexed how to choose anew. | 10 | ··˘/˘···˘/ |
| So more than private was the joy and grief, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| That at the worst it gave our souls relief, | 10 | ······/·˘/ |
| That in our age such sense of virtue lived, | 10 | ··/····/˘· |
| They joy'd so justly, and so justly grieved. | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Nature (her fairest light eclipsèd) seems | 9 | /˘·/˘···· |
| Herself to suffer in those sharp extremes; | 10 | ˘/·/˘···˘/ |
| While not from thine alone thy blood retires, | 10 | ····˘/··˘/ |
| But from those cheeks which all the world admires. | 10 | ········˘/ |
| The stem thus threaten'd, and the sap in thee, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Droop all the branches of that noble tree! | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Their beauty they, and we our love suspend; | 10 | ·/˘···/·˘/ |
| Nought can our wishes, save thy health, intend. | 10 | ··//˘···˘/ |
| As lilies overcharged with rain, they bend | 10 | ·/˘/˘/···· |
| Their beauteous heads, and with high heaven contend; | 11 | ·/˘˘····/˘/ |
| Fold thee within their snowy arms, and cry-- | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| 'He is too faultless, and too young, to die!' | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| So like immortals round about thee they | 10 | ··˘/˘····· |
| Sit, that they fright approaching death away. | 10 | ····˘/˘·˘/ |
| Who would not languish, by so fair a train | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| To be lamented, and restored again? | 10 | ··˘/˘·˘/˘/ |
| Or, thus withheld, what hasty soul would go, | 10 | ··˘/·/˘··· |
| Though to the blest? O'er young Adonis so | 10 | ······˘/˘· |
| Fair Venus mourn'd, and with the precious shower | 11 | ·/˘····/˘/˘ |
| Of her warm tears cherish'd the springing flower. | 11 | ····/˘·/˘/˘ |
| The next support, fair hope of your great name, | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| And second pillar of that noble frame, | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| By loss of thee would no advantage have, | 10 | ······˘/˘· |
| But step by step pursue thee to the grave. | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| And now relentless Fate, about to end | 10 | ··˘/˘····· |
| The line which backward does so far extend | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| That antique stock, which still the world supplies | 10 | ·˘/·····˘/ |
| With bravest spirits, and with brightest eyes, | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| Kind Phoebus, interposing, bid me say, | 10 | ·/˘·˘/˘··· |
| Such storms no more shall shake that house; but they, | 10 | ·········· |
| Like Neptune, and his sea-born niece, shall be | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| The shining glories of the land and sea; | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| With courage guard, and beauty warm, our age, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·/· |
| And lovers fill with like poetic rage. | 10 | ·/˘···˘/˘· |
| 'Nation spread': the Earl of Northumberland, appointed Lord High | 15 | /˘········˘/˘·· |
| Admiral in the year 1638. | 6 | /˘˘··· |
Notes from the edition 2
George Gilfillan's notes to the Poetical Works of Edmund Waller and Sir John Denham (1857; Project Gutenberg #12322).
- Stanza 1, line 18 'Sea-born niece': Venus.
- Stanza 4, line 7 'Nation spread': the Earl of Northumberland, appointed Lord High Admiral in the year 1638.
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