To His Worthy Friend Master Evelyn, upon His Translation of 'Lucretius'

Edmund Waller (1606–1687) · 1645–1668

iambic tetrameter · 44 lines · from Cooper's Hill, and Other Poems

Lucretius, (with a stork-like fate,Born, and translated, in a state)Comes to proclaim, in English verse,No Monarch rules the universe;But chance, and atoms, make this AllIn order democratical,Where bodies freely run their course,Without design, or fate, or force.And this in such a strain he sings,As if his Muse, with angels' wings,Had soar'd beyond our utmost sphere,And other worlds discover'd there;For his immortal, boundless wit,To Nature does no bounds permit,But boldly has removed those barsOf heaven, and earth, and seas, and stars,By which they were before supposed,By narrow wits, to be enclosed,Till his free Muse threw down the pale,And did at once dispark them all.

So vast this argument did seem,That the wise author did esteemThe Roman language (which was spreadO'er the whole world, in triumph led)A tongue too narrow to unfoldThe wonders which he would have told.This speaks thy glory, noble friend!And British language does commend;For here Lucretius whole we find,His words, his music, and his mind.Thy art has to our country broughtAll that he writ, and all he thought.Ovid translated, Virgil too,Show'd long since what our tongue could do;Nor Lucan we, nor Horace spared;Only Lucretius was too hard.Lucretius, like a fort, did standUntouch'd, till your victorious handDid from his head this garland bear,Which now upon your own you wear:A garland made of such new bays,And sought in such untrodden ways,As no man's temples e'er did crown,Save this great author's, and your own!

Words in this poem

boldly adv.
In a bold manner. [AS. bealdlice.]
dispark v. t.
To throw (a park or inclosure); to treat (a private park) as a common.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

To His Worthy Friend Master Evelyn, upon His Translation of 'Lucretius' is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poetical Works of Edmund Waller and Sir John Denham, Project Gutenberg ebook #12322; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

To His Worthy Friend Master Evelyn, upon His Translation of 'Lucretius' is 44 lines in 2 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBC-DDEEFFGGHHII-C fateA · stateA · verseB · universeB · allC · democratical · courseD · forceD · singsE · wingsE · sphereF · thereF · witG · permitG · barsH · starsH · supposedI · enclosedI · pale · allC
  2. 2 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLL seemA · esteemA · spreadB · ledB · unfoldC · toldC · friendD · commendD · findE · mindE · broughtF · thoughtF · tooG · doG · sparedH · hardH · standI · handI · bearJ · wearJ · baysK · waysK · crownL · ownL
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Lucretius, (with a stork-like fate,10··········
Born, and translated, in a state)8··˘/˘···
Comes to proclaim, in English verse,8··˘/·/˘·
No Monarch rules the universe;8·/···/˘·
But chance, and atoms, make this All8···/˘···
In order democratical,8·/˘·····
Where bodies freely run their course,8·/˘/˘···
Without design, or fate, or force.8··˘/····
And this in such a strain he sings,8········
As if his Muse, with angels' wings,8·····/˘·
Had soar'd beyond our utmost sphere,8····//··
And other worlds discover'd there;8·/˘·˘/˘·
For his immortal, boundless wit,8··˘/˘/˘·
To Nature does no bounds permit,8·/˘···˘/
But boldly has removed those bars8·/˘·˘/··
Of heaven, and earth, and seas, and stars,8·/······
By which they were before supposed,8······˘/
By narrow wits, to be enclosed,8·/˘···˘/
Till his free Muse threw down the pale,8········
And did at once dispark them all.8····˘/··
So vast this argument did seem,8···/˘˘··
That the wise author did esteem8···/˘·˘/
The Roman language (which was spread8·/˘/˘···
O'er the whole world, in triumph led)8·····/˘·
A tongue too narrow to unfold8···/˘·˘/
The wonders which he would have told.8·/˘·····
This speaks thy glory, noble friend!8···/˘/˘·
And British language does commend;8·/˘/˘·˘/
For here Lucretius whole we find,10··········
His words, his music, and his mind.8···/˘···
Thy art has to our country brought8····//˘·
All that he writ, and all he thought.8········
Ovid translated, Virgil too,8··˘/˘/˘·
Show'd long since what our tongue could do;8····/···
Nor Lucan we, nor Horace spared;8·····/˘·
Only Lucretius was too hard.10/˘········
Lucretius, like a fort, did stand10··········
Untouch'd, till your victorious hand8˘/··˘/˘·
Did from his head this garland bear,8·····/˘·
Which now upon your own you wear:8········
A garland made of such new bays,8·/˘·····
And sought in such untrodden ways,8········
As no man's temples e'er did crown,8···/˘···
Save this great author's, and your own!8···/˘···

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