The Night-Piece; Or, a Picture Drawn in the Dark

Edmund Waller (1606–1687) · 1645–1668

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 42 lines · from Cooper's Hill, and Other Poems

Darkness, which fairest nymphs disarms,Defends us ill from Mira's charms;Mira can lay her beauty by,Take no advantage of the eye,Quit all that Lely's art can take,And yet a thousand captives make.Her speech is graced with sweeter soundThan in another's song is found!And all her well-placed words are darts,Which need no light to reach our hearts.As the bright stars and Milky Way,Show'd by the night, are hid by day;So we, in that accomplish'd mind,Help'd by the night, new graces find,Which, by the splendour of her view,Dazzled before, we never knew.While we converse with her, we markNo want of day, nor think it dark;Her shining image is a lightFix'd in our hearts, and conquers night.Like jewels to advantage set,Her beauty by the shade does get;There blushes, frowns, and cold disdain,All that our passion might restrain,Is hid, and our indulgent mindPresents the fair idea kind.Yet, friended by the night, we dareOnly in whispers tell our care;He that on her his bold hand lays,With Cupid's pointed arrows plays;They with a touch (they are so keen!)Wound us unshot, and she unseen.All near approaches threaten death;We may be shipwreck'd by her breath;Love, favour'd once with that sweet gale,Doubles his haste, and fills his sail,Till he arrive where she must proveThe haven, or the rock, of love.So we th'Arabian coast do knowAt distance, when the spices blow;By the rich odour taught to steer,Though neither day nor stars appear.

Words in this poem

mira n.
A remarkable variable star in the constellation Cetus (o Ceti). [NL., from L. mirus wonderful.]
graced a.
Endowed with grace; beautiful; full of graces; honorable.
splendour n.
Great brightness; brilliant luster; brilliancy; as, the splendor ot the sun. B. Jonson. [L. fr. splendere to shine: cf. F. splendeur.]
friended a.
Having friends;
unshot v. t.
To remove the shot from, as from a shotted gun; to unload. [1st pref. un- + shot.]
unseen a.
Not seen or discovered.
odour n.
Any smell, whether fragrant or offensive; scent; perfume. [OE. odor, odour, OF. odor, odour, F. odeur, fr. L. odor; akin to olere to smell, Gr. Olfactory, Osmium, Ozone, Redolent.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Night-Piece; Or, a Picture Drawn in the Dark is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poetical Works of Edmund Waller and Sir John Denham, Project Gutenberg ebook #12322; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Night-Piece; Or, a Picture Drawn in the Dark is 42 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.2 syllables. 17% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQRRSSTTUU disarmsA · charmsA · byB · eyeB · takeC · makeC · soundD · foundD · dartsE · heartsE · wayF · dayF · mindG · findG · viewH · knewH · markI · darkI · lightJ · nightJ · setK · getK · disdainL · restrainL · mindM · kindM · dareN · careN · laysO · playsO · keenP · unseenP · deathQ · breathQ · galeR · sailR · proveS · loveS · knowT · blowT · steerU · appearU
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Darkness, which fairest nymphs disarms,8/˘·/˘·˘/
Defends us ill from Mira's charms;8˘/···/˘·
Mira can lay her beauty by,8/˘···/˘·
Take no advantage of the eye,8··˘/˘···
Quit all that Lely's art can take,8········
And yet a thousand captives make.8···/˘/˘·
Her speech is graced with sweeter sound8·····/˘·
Than in another's song is found!8··˘/˘···
And all her well-placed words are darts,8········
Which need no light to reach our hearts.8······/·
As the bright stars and Milky Way,8·····/˘·
Show'd by the night, are hid by day;8········
So we, in that accomplish'd mind,8····˘/˘·
Help'd by the night, new graces find,8·····/˘·
Which, by the splendour of her view,8···/˘···
Dazzled before, we never knew.8/˘···/˘·
While we converse with her, we mark8··/˘····
No want of day, nor think it dark;8········
Her shining image is a light8·/˘/˘···
Fix'd in our hearts, and conquers night.8··/··/˘·
Like jewels to advantage set,8·/˘·˘/˘·
Her beauty by the shade does get;8·/˘·····
There blushes, frowns, and cold disdain,8·/˘···˘/
All that our passion might restrain,8··//˘·˘/
Is hid, and our indulgent mind8···/˘/˘·
Presents the fair idea kind.8˘/··˘/˘·
Yet, friended by the night, we dare8·/˘·····
Only in whispers tell our care;8/˘·/˘·/·
He that on her his bold hand lays,8········
With Cupid's pointed arrows plays;8·/˘/˘/˘·
They with a touch (they are so keen!)8········
Wound us unshot, and she unseen.8··˘/··˘/
All near approaches threaten death;8··˘/˘/˘·
We may be shipwreck'd by her breath;8········
Love, favour'd once with that sweet gale,8········
Doubles his haste, and fills his sail,8/˘······
Till he arrive where she must prove8··˘/····
The haven, or the rock, of love.8·/˘·····
So we th'Arabian coast do know8········
At distance, when the spices blow;8·/˘··/˘·
By the rich odour taught to steer,8···/˘···
Though neither day nor stars appear.8·/˘···˘/

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