Canto III

Edmund Waller (1606–1687) · 1645–1668

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 92 lines · from Poetical Works

The bloody fight, successless toil,And how the fishes sack'd the isle.

The boat which, on the first assault did go,Struck with a harping-iron the younger foe;Who, when he felt his side so rudely gored,Loud as the sea that nourished him he roar'd.As a broad bream, to please some curious taste,While yet alive, in boiling water cast,Vex'd with unwonted heat he flings aboutThe scorching brass, and hurls the liquor out;So with the barbed jav'lin stung, he raves,And scourges with his tail the suffering waves.Like Spenser's Talus with his iron flail,He threatens ruin with his pond'rous tail;Dissolving at one stroke the batter'd boat,And down the men fall drenched in the moat;With every fierce encounter they are forcedTo quit their boats, and fare like men unhorsed.

The bigger whale like some huge carrack lay,Which wanteth sea-room with her foes to play;Slowly she swims; and when, provoked, she wouldAdvance her tail, her head salutes the mud;The shallow water doth her force infringe,And renders vain her tail's impetuous swinge;The shining steel her tender sides receive,And there, like bees, they all their weapons leave.

This sees the cub, and does himself opposeBetwixt his cumber'd mother and her foes;With desp'rate courage he receives her wounds,And men and boats his active tail confounds.Their forces join'd, the seas with billows fill,And make a tempest, though the winds be still.Now would the men with half their hopèd preyBe well content, and wish this cub away;Their wish they have: he (to direct his damUnto the gap through which they thither came)Before her swims, and quits the hostile lake,A pris'ner there but for his mother's sake.She, by the rocks compell'd to stay behind,Is by the vastness of her bulk confined.They shout for joy! and now on her aloneTheir fury falls, and all their darts are thrown.Their lances spent, one, bolder than the rest,With his broad sword provoked the sluggish beast;Her oily side devours both blade and haft,And there his steel the bold Bermudan left.Courage the rest from his example take,And now they change the colour of the lake;Blood flows in rivers from her wounded side,As if they would prevent the tardy tide,And raise the flood to that propitious height,As might convey her from this fatal strait.She swims in blood, and blood does spouting throwTo heaven, that heaven men's cruelties might know.Their fixed jav'lins in her side she wears,And on her back a grove of pikes appears;You would have thought, had you the monster seenThus dress'd, she had another island been:Roaring she tears the air with such a noise,As well resembled the conspiring voiceOf routed armies, when the field is won,To reach the ears of her escapèd son.He, though a league removèd from the foe,Hastes to her aid; the pious Trojan so,Neglecting for Creusa's life his own,Repeats the danger of the burning town.The men, amazèd, blush to see the seedOf monsters human piety exceed.Well proves this kindness, what the Grecian sung,That love's bright mother from the ocean sprung.Their courage droops, and hopeless now, they wishFor composition with th'unconquered fish;So she their weapons would restore again,Through rocks they'd hew her passage to the main.But how instructed in each other's mind?Or what commerce can men with monsters find?Not daring to approach their wounded foe,Whom her courageous son protected so,They charge their muskets, and, with hot desireOf fell revenge, renew the fight with fire;Standing aloof, with lead they bruise the scales,And tear the flesh of the incensèd whales.But no success their fierce endeavours found,Nor this way could they give one fatal wound.Now to their fort they are about to sendFor the loud engines which their isle defend;But what those pieces framed to batter walls,Would have effected on those mighty whales,Great Neptune will not have us know, who sendsA tide so high that it relieves his friends.And thus they parted with exchange of harms;Much blood the monsters lost, and they their arms.

Words in this poem

successless a.
Having no success.
isle v. t.
To cause to become an island, or like an island; to surround or encompass; to island.
curious a.
Difficult to please or satisfy; solicitous to be correct; careful; scrupulous; nice; exact. [OF. curios, curius, F. curieux, L. curiosus careful, inquisitive, fr. cura care. See Cure.]
unwonted a.
Not wonted; unaccustomed; unused; not made familiar by practice; as, a child unwonted to strangers.
scorching a.
Burning; parching or shriveling with heat.
talus n.
The astragalus. [L., the ankle, the ankle bone.]
bigger a.
, compar. of Big.
infringe v. t.
To break; to violate; to transgress; to neglect to fulfill or obey; as, to infringe a law or contract. [L. infringere; pref. in- in + frangere to break. See Fraction, and cf. Infract .]
swinge n.
The sweep of anything in motion; a swinging blow; a swing.
betwixt prep.
In the space which separates; between. [OE. betwix, bitwix, rarely bitwixt, AS. betweox, betweohs, betweoh, betwih; pref. be- by + a form fr. AS. twa two. See Between.]
haft n.
A handle; that part of an instrument or vessel taken into the hand, and by which it is held and used; -- said chiefly of a knife, sword, or dagger; the hilt. [AS. hæft; akin to D. & G. heft, Icel. hepti, and to E. Heave, or have. Cf. Heft.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Canto III is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poetical Works of Edmund Waller and Sir John Denham, Project Gutenberg ebook #12322; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Canto III is 92 lines in 4 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 72% of the lines: heroic couplets. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.9 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 16% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 2 AABB--CCDDEEFFGG goA · foeA · goredB · roar'dB · taste · cast · aboutC · outC · ravesD · wavesD · flailE · tailE · boatF · moatF · forcedG · unhorsedG
  2. 3 AABBCCDD layA · playA · wouldB · mudB · infringeC · swingeC · receiveD · leaveD
  3. 4 AA--BBCC--DDEEFF----GGHH--II------JJKK--LLMMNN--OOPPQQRRSSTT--UUVV opposeA · foesA · wounds · confounds · fillB · stillB · preyC · awayC · dam · came · lakeD · sakeD · behindE · confinedE · aloneF · thrownF · rest · beast · haft · left · takeG · lakeG · sideH · tideH · height · strait · throwI · knowI · wears · appears · seen · been · noise · voice · wonJ · sonJ · foeK · soK · own · town · seedL · exceedL · sungM · sprungM · wishN · fishN · again · main · mindO · findO · foeP · soP · desireQ · fireQ · scalesR · whalesR · foundS · woundS · sendT · defendT · walls · whales · sendsU · friendsU · harmsV · armsV
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The bloody fight, successless toil,8·/˘·˘/˘·
And how the fishes sack'd the isle.8···/˘···
The boat which, on the first assault did go,10······˘/··
Struck with a harping-iron the younger foe;10···/˘/·/˘·
Who, when he felt his side so rudely gored,10·······/˘·
Loud as the sea that nourished him he roar'd.10·····/˘···
As a broad bream, to please some curious taste,10·······/˘·
While yet alive, in boiling water cast,10··˘/·/˘/˘·
Vex'd with unwonted heat he flings about10··˘/˘·····
The scorching brass, and hurls the liquor out;10·/˘····/˘·
So with the barbed jav'lin stung, he raves,10····˘·····
And scourges with his tail the suffering waves.10·/˘····/˘·
Like Spenser's Talus with his iron flail,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
He threatens ruin with his pond'rous tail;10·/˘/˘·····
Dissolving at one stroke the batter'd boat,10˘/˘····/˘·
And down the men fall drenched in the moat;10······˘···
With every fierce encounter they are forced10·/˘·˘/˘···
To quit their boats, and fare like men unhorsed.10········˘/
The bigger whale like some huge carrack lay,10·/˘····/˘·
Which wanteth sea-room with her foes to play;10·/˘·······
Slowly she swims; and when, provoked, she would10/˘····˘/··
Advance her tail, her head salutes the mud;10˘/····˘/··
The shallow water doth her force infringe,10·/˘/˘···˘/
And renders vain her tail's impetuous swinge;10·/˘···˘/˘·
The shining steel her tender sides receive,10·/˘··/˘·˘/
And there, like bees, they all their weapons leave.10·······/˘·
This sees the cub, and does himself oppose10······˘/˘/
Betwixt his cumber'd mother and her foes;10˘/···/˘···
With desp'rate courage he receives her wounds,10···/˘·˘/··
And men and boats his active tail confounds.10·····/˘·˘/
Their forces join'd, the seas with billows fill,10·/˘····/˘·
And make a tempest, though the winds be still.10···/˘·····
Now would the men with half their hopèd prey9·········
Be well content, and wish this cub away;10··˘/····˘/
Their wish they have: he (to direct his dam10······˘/··
Unto the gap through which they thither came)10·······/˘·
Before her swims, and quits the hostile lake,10·······/˘·
A pris'ner there but for his mother's sake.10·······/˘·
She, by the rocks compell'd to stay behind,10····˘/····
Is by the vastness of her bulk confined.10···/˘···˘/
They shout for joy! and now on her alone10········˘/
Their fury falls, and all their darts are thrown.10·/˘·······
Their lances spent, one, bolder than the rest,10·/˘··/˘···
With his broad sword provoked the sluggish beast;10····˘/·/˘·
Her oily side devours both blade and haft,10·/˘·˘/····
And there his steel the bold Bermudan left.10··········
Courage the rest from his example take,10/˘····˘/˘·
And now they change the colour of the lake;10·····/˘···
Blood flows in rivers from her wounded side,10···/˘··/˘·
As if they would prevent the tardy tide,10····˘/·/˘·
And raise the flood to that propitious height,10······˘/˘·
As might convey her from this fatal strait.10··˘/···/˘·
She swims in blood, and blood does spouting throw10·······/˘·
To heaven, that heaven men's cruelties might know.10·/·/˘·/˘··
Their fixed jav'lins in her side she wears,10··˘·······
And on her back a grove of pikes appears;10········˘/
You would have thought, had you the monster seen10·······/˘·
Thus dress'd, she had another island been:10····˘/˘/˘·
Roaring she tears the air with such a noise,10/˘········
As well resembled the conspiring voice10··˘/˘·˘/˘·
Of routed armies, when the field is won,10·/˘/˘·····
To reach the ears of her escapèd son.9·········
He, though a league removèd from the foe,9·········
Hastes to her aid; the pious Trojan so,10·····/˘/˘·
Neglecting for Creusa's life his own,9˘/˘······
Repeats the danger of the burning town.10˘/·/˘··/˘·
The men, amazèd, blush to see the seed10··········
Of monsters human piety exceed.10·/˘/˘/˘˘˘/
Well proves this kindness, what the Grecian sung,10···/˘··/˘·
That love's bright mother from the ocean sprung.10···/˘··/˘·
Their courage droops, and hopeless now, they wish10·/˘··/˘···
For composition with th'unconquered fish;10··˘/˘·····
So she their weapons would restore again,10···/˘·˘/˘/
Through rocks they'd hew her passage to the main.10·····/˘···
But how instructed in each other's mind?10··˘/˘··/˘·
Or what commerce can men with monsters find?10··/˘···/˘·
Not daring to approach their wounded foe,10·/˘·˘/·/˘·
Whom her courageous son protected so,10··˘/˘·˘/˘·
They charge their muskets, and, with hot desire11···/˘···˘/˘
Of fell revenge, renew the fight with fire;11··˘/˘/···/˘
Standing aloof, with lead they bruise the scales,10/˘˘/······
And tear the flesh of the incensèd whales.9·········
But no success their fierce endeavours found,10··˘/··˘/˘·
Nor this way could they give one fatal wound.10·······/˘·
Now to their fort they are about to send10··········
For the loud engines which their isle defend;10···/˘···˘/
But what those pieces framed to batter walls,10···/˘··/˘·
Would have effected on those mighty whales,10··˘/˘··/˘·
Great Neptune will not have us know, who sends10·/˘·······
A tide so high that it relieves his friends.10······˘/··
And thus they parted with exchange of harms;10···/˘·˘/··
Much blood the monsters lost, and they their arms.10···/˘·····
Notes from the edition 1

George Gilfillan's notes to the Poetical Works of Edmund Waller and Sir John Denham (1857; Project Gutenberg #12322).

  1. Stanza 4, line 38 'Trojan': Aeneas.

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