The Old Man with the Broken Arm (A Satire on Militarism)
At Hsin-fēng an old man--four-score and eight;The hair on his head and the hair of his eyebrows--white as thenew snow.Leaning on the shoulders of his great-grandchildren, he walks infront of the Inn;With his left arm he leans on their shoulders; his right arm isbroken.I asked the old man how many years had passed since he broke his arm;I also asked the cause of the injury, how and why it happened?The old man said he was born and reared in the District of Hsin-fēng;At the time of his birth--a wise reign; no wars or discords.“Often I listened in the Pear-Tree Garden to the sound of flute andsong;Naught I knew of banner and lance; nothing of arrow or bow.Then came the wars of T’ien-pao and the great levy of men;Of three men in each house,--one man was taken.And those to whom the lot fell, where were they taken to?Five months’ journey, a thousand miles--away to Yün-nan.We heard it said that in Yün-nan there flows the Lu River;As the flowers fall from the pepper-trees, poisonous vapours rise.When the great army waded across, the water seethed like a cauldron;When barely ten had entered the water, two or three were dead.To the north of my village, to the south of my village the sound ofweeping and wailing.Children parting from fathers and mothers; husbands parting fromwives.Everyone says that in expeditions against the Min tribesOf a million men who are sent out, not one returns.I, that am old, was then twenty-four;My name and fore-name were written down in the rolls of the Board ofWar.In the depth of the night not daring to let any one knowI secretly took a huge stone and dashed it against my arm.For drawing the bow and waving the banner now wholly unfit;I knew henceforward I should not be sent to fight in Yün-nan.Bones broken and sinews wounded could not fail to hurt;I was ready enough to bear pain, if only I got back home.My arm--broken ever since; it was sixty years ago.One limb, although destroyed,--whole body safe!But even now on winter nights when the wind and rain blowFrom evening on till day’s dawn I cannot sleep for pain.Not sleeping for painIs a small thing to bear,Compared with the joy of being alive when all the rest are dead.For otherwise, years ago, at the ford of Lu RiverMy body would have died and my soul hovered by the bones that no onegathered.A ghost, I’d have wandered in Yün-nan, always looking for home.Over the graves of ten thousand soldiers, mournfully hovering.”So the old man spoke.And I bid you listen to his wordsHave you not heardThat the Prime Minister of K’ai-yüan, Sung K’ai-fu,Did not reward frontier exploits, lest a spirit of aggression shouldprevail?And have you not heardThat the Prime Minister of T’ien-Pao, Yang Kuo-chungDesiring to win imperial favour, started a frontier war?But long before he could win the war, people had lost their temper;Ask the man with the broken arm in the village of Hsin-fēng?
Words in this poem
- broke v. i.
- To transact business for another. Brome. [See Broker, and cf. Brook.]
- everyone n.
- Everybody; -- commonly separated, every one. [OE. everychon.]
- henceforward adv.
- From this time forward; henceforth.
- ghost n.
- The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
- spoke n.
- The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
- aggression n.
- The first attack, or act of hostility; the first act of injury, or first act leading to a war or a controversy; unprovoked attack; assault; as, a war of aggression.
- yang n.
- The cry of the wild goose; a honk. [Of imitative origin.]
- favour n.
- Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
The Old Man with the Broken Arm (A Satire on Militarism) is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, the Arthur Waley translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
The Old Man with the Broken Arm (A Satire on Militarism) is 60 lines in a single stanza. 83% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 11.9 syllables. 11 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 30% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ---AA-A-------BB-B--B-------C-C------D-D---E--E------------- eight · the · snow · inA · innA · is · brokenA · arm · happened · — · discords · and · song · bow · menB · takenB · to · nanB · river · rise · cauldronB · dead · of · wailing · from · wives · tribes · returns · fourC · of · warC · know · arm · unfit · nan · hurt · home · agoD · safe · blowD · pain · pain · bear · deadE · river · one · gatheredE · home · hovering · spoke · words · heard · fu · should · prevail · heard · chung · war · temper · —
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| At Hsin-fēng an old man--four-score and eight; | 10 | ·········· |
| The hair on his head and the hair of his eyebrows--white as the | 15 | ··········/···· |
| new snow. | 2 | ·· |
| Leaning on the shoulders of his great-grandchildren, he walks in | 15 | /˘··/˘···/·˘··· |
| front of the Inn; | 4 | ···· |
| With his left arm he leans on their shoulders; his right arm is | 14 | ········/˘···· |
| broken. | 2 | /˘ |
| I asked the old man how many years had passed since he broke his arm; | 16 | ······/˘········ |
| I also asked the cause of the injury, how and why it happened? | 17 | ·/˘·····/˘˘····/˘ |
| The old man said he was born and reared in the District of Hsin-fēng; | 16 | ···········/˘··· |
| At the time of his birth--a wise reign; no wars or discords. | 14 | ············/˘ |
| “Often I listened in the Pear-Tree Garden to the sound of flute and | 17 | /˘·/˘····/˘······ |
| song; | 1 | · |
| Naught I knew of banner and lance; nothing of arrow or bow. | 15 | ····/˘··/˘·/˘·· |
| Then came the wars of T’ien-pao and the great levy of men; | 14 | ··········/˘·· |
| Of three men in each house,--one man was taken. | 11 | ·········/˘ |
| And those to whom the lot fell, where were they taken to? | 13 | ··········/˘· |
| Five months’ journey, a thousand miles--away to Yün-nan. | 13 | ··/˘·/˘·˘/··· |
| We heard it said that in Yün-nan there flows the Lu River; | 14 | ············/˘ |
| As the flowers fall from the pepper-trees, poisonous vapours rise. | 16 | ··/˘···/˘·/˘˘/˘· |
| When the great army waded across, the water seethed like a cauldron; | 17 | ···/˘/˘˘/·/˘···/˘ |
| When barely ten had entered the water, two or three were dead. | 15 | ·/˘··/˘·/˘····· |
| To the north of my village, to the south of my village the sound of | 17 | ·····/˘·····/˘··· |
| weeping and wailing. | 5 | /˘·/˘ |
| Children parting from fathers and mothers; husbands parting from | 15 | /˘/˘·/˘·/˘/˘/˘· |
| wives. | 1 | · |
| Everyone says that in expeditions against the Min tribes | 15 | /˘·····˘/˘····· |
| Of a million men who are sent out, not one returns. | 13 | ··/˘·······˘/ |
| I, that am old, was then twenty-four; | 9 | ······/˘· |
| My name and fore-name were written down in the rolls of the Board of | 16 | ······/˘········ |
| War. | 1 | · |
| In the depth of the night not daring to let any one know | 15 | ·······/˘··/˘·· |
| I secretly took a huge stone and dashed it against my arm. | 15 | ·/˘˘··········· |
| For drawing the bow and waving the banner now wholly unfit; | 16 | ·/˘···/˘·/˘·/˘˘/ |
| I knew henceforward I should not be sent to fight in Yün-nan. | 16 | ················ |
| Bones broken and sinews wounded could not fail to hurt; | 13 | ·/˘···/˘····· |
| I was ready enough to bear pain, if only I got back home. | 16 | ··/˘˘/····/˘···· |
| My arm--broken ever since; it was sixty years ago. | 14 | ··/˘/˘···/˘·˘/ |
| One limb, although destroyed,--whole body safe! | 10 | ····˘/·/˘· |
| But even now on winter nights when the wind and rain blow | 14 | ·/˘··/˘······· |
| From evening on till day’s dawn I cannot sleep for pain. | 13 | ·/˘·····/˘··· |
| Not sleeping for pain | 5 | ·/˘·· |
| Is a small thing to bear, | 6 | ······ |
| Compared with the joy of being alive when all the rest are dead. | 16 | ˘/····/˘˘/······ |
| For otherwise, years ago, at the ford of Lu River | 14 | ·/˘··˘/·····/˘ |
| My body would have died and my soul hovered by the bones that no one | 17 | ·/˘······/˘······ |
| gathered. | 2 | /˘ |
| A ghost, I’d have wandered in Yün-nan, always looking for home. | 15 | ····/˘···/·/˘·· |
| Over the graves of ten thousand soldiers, mournfully hovering.” | 16 | ······/˘/˘···/˘˘ |
| So the old man spoke. | 5 | ····· |
| And I bid you listen to his words | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| Have you not heard | 4 | ···· |
| That the Prime Minister of K’ai-yüan, Sung K’ai-fu, | 12 | ···/˘˘······ |
| Did not reward frontier exploits, lest a spirit of aggression should | 17 | ··˘/˘//···/˘·˘/˘· |
| prevail? | 2 | ˘/ |
| And have you not heard | 5 | ····· |
| That the Prime Minister of T’ien-Pao, Yang Kuo-chung | 13 | ···/˘˘····/˘· |
| Desiring to win imperial favour, started a frontier war? | 18 | ˘/˘˘··˘/˘˘/˘/˘·˘/· |
| But long before he could win the war, people had lost their temper; | 16 | ·········/˘···/˘ |
| Ask the man with the broken arm in the village of Hsin-fēng? | 15 | ·····/˘···/˘··· |
Notes from the edition 3
Arthur Waley's notes to A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems (1918; Project Gutenberg #42290).
- Line 15 A.D. 742-755.
- Line 53 713-742.
- Line 57 Cousin of the notorious mistress of Ming-huang, Yang Kuei-fei.
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