Dreaming of a Dead Lady

Various (about 800), translated by Arthur Waley · 1918

iambic tetrameter · unrhymed · 10 lines · from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems

“I heard at night your long sighsAnd knew that you were thinking of me.”As she spoke, the doors of Heaven openedAnd our souls conversed and I saw her face.She set me a pillow to rest onAnd she brought me meat and drink.

I stood beside her where she lay,But suddenly woke and she was not there:And none knew how my soul was torn,How the tears fell surging over my breast.

Words in this poem

spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Dreaming of a Dead Lady is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, the Arthur Waley translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Dreaming of a Dead Lady is 10 lines in 2 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.9 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 30% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
“I heard at night your long sighs7·······
And knew that you were thinking of me.”9·····/˘··
As she spoke, the doors of Heaven opened10······/˘/˘
And our souls conversed and I saw her face.11·/˘·˘/·····
She set me a pillow to rest on9····/˘···
And she brought me meat and drink.7·······
I stood beside her where she lay,8··˘/····
But suddenly woke and she was not there:10·/˘˘······
And none knew how my soul was torn,8········
How the tears fell surging over my breast.10····/˘····

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