Climbing a Mountain

Various (about 800), translated by Arthur Waley · 1918

trochaic tetrameter · 10 lines · from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems

High rises the Eastern PeakSoaring up to the blue sky.Among the rocks--an empty hollow,Secret, still, mysterious!Uncarved and unhewn,Screened by nature with a roof of clouds.Times and Seasons, what things are youBringing to my life ceaseless change?I will lodge for ever in this hollowWhere Springs and Autumns unheeded pass.

Words in this poem

ceaseless a.
Without pause or end; incessant.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Climbing a Mountain is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, the Arthur Waley translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Various, Climbing a Mountain, in A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems (1918), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/waley-chinese/climbing-a-mountain.html, id L18791.

Form and metre

Climbing a Mountain is 10 lines in a single stanza. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%). 84% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.9 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 30% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 --A-----A- peak · sky · hollowA · mysterious · unhewn · clouds · you · change · hollowA · pass
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
High rises the Eastern Peak7·/˘·/˘·
Soaring up to the blue sky.7/˘·····
Among the rocks--an empty hollow,9·····/˘/˘
Secret, still, mysterious!7/˘·˘/˘˘
Uncarved and unhewn,5·····
Screened by nature with a roof of clouds.9··/˘·····
Times and Seasons, what things are you8··/˘····
Bringing to my life ceaseless change?8/˘···/˘·
I will lodge for ever in this hollow10····/˘··/˘
Where Springs and Autumns unheeded pass.9···/˘˘/˘·

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