Ballad of the Western Island in the North Country

Various (about 800), translated by Arthur Waley · 1918

iambic hexameter · 32 lines · from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems

“Seeing the plum-tree I thought of the Western IslandAnd I plucked a branch to send to the North Country.I put on my dress of apricot-yellow silkAnd bound up my hair black as the crow’s wing.But which is the road that leads to the Western Island?I’ll ask the man at the ferry by the Bridge of Boats.But the sun is sinking and the orioles flying home:And the wind is blowing and sighing in the walnut-tree.I’ll stand under the tree just beside the gate:I’ll stand by the door and show off my enamelled hair-pins.”She’s opened the gate, but her lover has not come:She’s gone out at the gate to pluck red lotus.As she plucks the lotus on the southern dyke in autumn,The lotus flowers stand higher than a man’s head.She bends down--and plays with the lotus seeds,The lotus seeds are green like the lake-water.She gathers the flowers and puts them into her gown--The lotus-bud that is red all through.She thinks of her lover, her lover that does not come:She looks up and sees the wild geese flying--The Western Island is full of wild geese.To look for her lover she climbs the Blue Tower.The tower is high: she looks, but cannot see:All day she leans on the balcony rails.The rail is twisted into a twelve-fold pattern.She lets fall her hand white like the colour of jade.She rolls up the awning, she sees the wide sky,And the sea-water waving its vacant blue.“The sea shall carry my dreams far away,So that you shall be sorry at last for my sorrow.If the South wind--only knew my thoughtsIt would blow my dreams till they got to the Western Island.”

Words in this poem

awning n.
A rooflike cover, usually of canvas, extended over or before any place as a shelter from the sun, rain, or wind. [Origin uncertain: cf. F. auvent awing, or Pers. awan, awang, anything suspended, or LG. havening a place sheltered from wind and weather, E. haven.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Ballad of the Western Island in the North Country is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Hundred and Seventy Chinese Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #42290, the Arthur Waley translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

Ballad of the Western Island in the North Country is 32 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic hexameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 72%). 86% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 11.8 syllables. 11 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 9% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ------A---A-A---------B---B----- island · country · silk · wing · island · boats · homeA · tree · gate · pins · comeA · lotus · autumnA · head · seeds · water · gown · through · come · flying · geese · tower · seeB · rails · pattern · jade · skyB · blue · away · sorrow · thoughts · island
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic hexameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
“Seeing the plum-tree I thought of the Western Island13/˘·······/˘/˘
And I plucked a branch to send to the North Country.12··········/˘
I put on my dress of apricot-yellow silk12······/˘·/˘·
And bound up my hair black as the crow’s wing.10··········
But which is the road that leads to the Western Island?13·········/˘/˘
I’ll ask the man at the ferry by the Bridge of Boats.13······/˘·····
But the sun is sinking and the orioles flying home:14····/˘··/˘·/˘·
And the wind is blowing and sighing in the walnut-tree.14····/˘·/˘··/··
I’ll stand under the tree just beside the gate:11·······˘/··
I’ll stand by the door and show off my enamelled hair-pins.”14·········˘/˘··
She’s opened the gate, but her lover has not come:12·/˘····/˘···
She’s gone out at the gate to pluck red lotus.11·········/˘
As she plucks the lotus on the southern dyke in autumn,14····/˘··/˘··/˘
The lotus flowers stand higher than a man’s head.12·/˘/˘·/˘····
She bends down--and plays with the lotus seeds,10·······/˘·
The lotus seeds are green like the lake-water.11·/˘······/˘
She gathers the flowers and puts them into her gown--13·/˘·/˘·······
The lotus-bud that is red all through.9·/˘······
She thinks of her lover, her lover that does not come:13····/˘·/˘····
She looks up and sees the wild geese flying--10········/˘
The Western Island is full of wild geese.10·/˘/˘·····
To look for her lover she climbs the Blue Tower.12····/˘····/˘
The tower is high: she looks, but cannot see:11·/˘·····/˘·
All day she leans on the balcony rails.10······/˘˘·
The rail is twisted into a twelve-fold pattern.12···/˘·····/˘
She lets fall her hand white like the colour of jade.12········/˘··
She rolls up the awning, she sees the wide sky,11····/˘·····
And the sea-water waving its vacant blue.11···/˘/˘·/˘·
“The sea shall carry my dreams far away,10···/˘···˘/
So that you shall be sorry at last for my sorrow.13·····/˘····/˘
If the South wind--only knew my thoughts9····/˘···
It would blow my dreams till they got to the Western Island.”14··········/˘/˘

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