Menalcas
Do you first begin,Good Mopsus, whether minded to sing aughtOf Phyllis and her loves, or Alcon's praise,Or to fling taunts at Codrus. Come, begin,While Tityrus watches o'er the grazing kids.
Nay, then, I will essay what late I carvedOn a green beech-tree's rind, playing by turns,And marking down the notes; then afterwardBid you Amyntas match them if he can.
As limber willow to pale olive yields,As lowly Celtic nard to rose-buds bright,So, to my mind, Amyntas yields to you.But hold awhile, for to the cave we come.
"For Daphnis cruelly slain wept all the Nymphs-Ye hazels, bear them witness, and ye streams-When she, his mother, clasping in her armsThe hapless body of the son she bare,To gods and stars unpitying, poured her plaint.Then, Daphnis, to the cooling streams were noneThat drove the pastured oxen, then no beastDrank of the river, or would the grass-blade touch.Nay, the wild rocks and woods then voiced the roarOf Afric lions mourning for thy death.Daphnis, 'twas thou bad'st yoke to Bacchus' carArmenian tigresses, lead on the pompOf revellers, and with tender foliage wreatheThe bending spear-wands. As to trees the vineIs crown of glory, as to vines the grape,Bulls to the herd, to fruitful fields the corn,So the one glory of thine own art thou.When the Fates took thee hence, then Pales' self,And even Apollo, left the country lone.Where the plump barley-grain so oft we sowed,There but wild oats and barren darnel spring;For tender violet and narcissus brightThistle and prickly thorn uprear their heads.Now, O ye shepherds, strew the ground with leaves,And o'er the fountains draw a shady veil-So Daphnis to his memory bids be done-And rear a tomb, and write thereon this verse:'I, Daphnis in the woods, from hence in fameAm to the stars exalted, guardian onceOf a fair flock, myself more fair than they.'"
So is thy song to me, poet divine,As slumber on the grass to weary limbs,Or to slake thirst from some sweet-bubbling rillIn summer's heat. Nor on the reeds alone,But with thy voice art thou, thrice happy boy,Ranked with thy master, second but to him.Yet will I, too, in turn, as best I may,Sing thee a song, and to the stars upliftThy Daphnis- Daphnis to the stars extol,For me too Daphnis loved.
Words in this poem 16
- aught n.
- Property; possession. [AS. , fr. agan to own, p. p. ahte.]
- nard n.
- An East Indian plant (Nardostachys Jatamansi) of the Valerian family, used from remote ages in Oriental perfumery. [AS., fr. L. nardus, Gr. nêrd, Per. nard, Scr. nalada.]
- awhile adv.
- For a while; for some time; for a short time. [Adj. a + while time, interval.]
- hapless a.
- Without hap or luck; luckless; unfortunate; unlucky; unhappy; as, hapless youth; hapless maid.
- plaint n.
- Audible expression of sorrow; lamentation; complaint; hence, a mournful song; a lament. Chaucer."The Psalmist's mournful plaint." [OE. plainte, pleynte, F. plainte, fr. L. plangere, planctum (plancta, fem. p.p.), to beat, beat the breast, lament. Cf. Complain, Plague, Plangent.]
- cooling a.
- Adapted to cool and refresh; allaying heat.
- drove n.
- A collection of cattle driven, or cattle collected for driving; a number of animals, as oxen, sheep, or swine, driven in a body. [AS. draf, fr. drifan to drive. See Drive.]
- drank n.
- Wild oats, or darnel grass. See Drake a plant. [Cf. 3d Drake.]
- voiced a.
- Furnished with a voice; expressed by the voice.
- lone n.
- A lane. See Loanin.
- narcissus n.
- A genus of endogenous bulbous plants with handsome flowers, having a cup-shaped crown within the six-lobed perianth, and comprising the daffodils and jonquils of several kinds. [L. narcissus, and (personified) Narcissus, Gr. na`rkissos, Na`rkissos, fr. na`rkh torpor, in allusion to the narcotic properties of the flower. Cf. Narcotic.]
- uprear v. t.
- To raise; to erect.
- thereon adv.
- On that or this. [AS. . See There, and On.]
- rill n.
- A very small brook; a streamlet. [Cf. LG. rille a small channel or brook, a furrow, a chamfer, OE. rigol a small brook, F. rigole a trench or furrow for water, W. rhill a row, rhigol a little di]
- uplift v. t.
- To lift or raise aloft; to raise; to elevate; as, to uplift the arm; to uplift a rock.
- extol v. t.
- To place on high; to lift up; to elevate. [L. extollere; ex out + tollere to lift, take up, or raise: cf. OF. extoller. See Tollerate, and cf. Flate.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Menalcas is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Bucolics and Eclogues, Project Gutenberg ebook #230; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Virgil, Menalcas, in The Eclogues (1881), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #230, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/virgil-eclogues/menalcas-2.html, id L25453.
Form and metre
Menalcas is 53 lines in 5 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%).
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 A--A- beginA · aught · praise · beginA · kids
- 4 -----A---B--B------------A-CCC nymphs · streams · arms · bare · plaint · noneA · beast · touch · roar · deathB · car · pomp · wreatheB · vine · grape · corn · thou · self · lone · sowed · spring · bright · heads · leaves · veil · doneA · verse · fameC · onceC · theyC
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Do you first begin, | 5 | ···˘/ |
| Good Mopsus, whether minded to sing aught | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Of Phyllis and her loves, or Alcon's praise, | 10 | ·/˘····˘/· |
| Or to fling taunts at Codrus. Come, begin, | 10 | ········˘/ |
| While Tityrus watches o'er the grazing kids. | 11 | ····/˘··/˘· |
| Nay, then, I will essay what late I carved | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| On a green beech-tree's rind, playing by turns, | 10 | ······/˘·· |
| And marking down the notes; then afterward | 10 | ·/˘····/˘˘ |
| Bid you Amyntas match them if he can. | 10 | ·········· |
| As limber willow to pale olive yields, | 10 | ·/˘/···/˘· |
| As lowly Celtic nard to rose-buds bright, | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| So, to my mind, Amyntas yields to you. | 10 | ·········· |
| But hold awhile, for to the cave we come. | 10 | ··˘/······ |
| "For Daphnis cruelly slain wept all the Nymphs- | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Ye hazels, bear them witness, and ye streams- | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| When she, his mother, clasping in her arms | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| The hapless body of the son she bare, | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| To gods and stars unpitying, poured her plaint. | 10 | ·········· |
| Then, Daphnis, to the cooling streams were none | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| That drove the pastured oxen, then no beast | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Drank of the river, or would the grass-blade touch. | 11 | ···/˘······ |
| Nay, the wild rocks and woods then voiced the roar | 10 | ·········· |
| Of Afric lions mourning for thy death. | 10 | ·/˘/˘/˘··· |
| Daphnis, 'twas thou bad'st yoke to Bacchus' car | 10 | /˘·····/˘· |
| Armenian tigresses, lead on the pomp | 10 | ˘/˘······· |
| Of revellers, and with tender foliage wreathe | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| The bending spear-wands. As to trees the vine | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Is crown of glory, as to vines the grape, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Bulls to the herd, to fruitful fields the corn, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| So the one glory of thine own art thou. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| When the Fates took thee hence, then Pales' self, | 9 | ········· |
| And even Apollo, left the country lone. | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| Where the plump barley-grain so oft we sowed, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| There but wild oats and barren darnel spring; | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| For tender violet and narcissus bright | 10 | ·/˘/˘·˘/˘· |
| Thistle and prickly thorn uprear their heads. | 10 | /˘·/˘·˘/·· |
| Now, O ye shepherds, strew the ground with leaves, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| And o'er the fountains draw a shady veil- | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| So Daphnis to his memory bids be done- | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| And rear a tomb, and write thereon this verse: | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| 'I, Daphnis in the woods, from hence in fame | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Am to the stars exalted, guardian once | 10 | ····˘/˘/˘· |
| Of a fair flock, myself more fair than they.'" | 10 | ·····/···· |
| So is thy song to me, poet divine, | 10 | ······/˘˘/ |
| As slumber on the grass to weary limbs, | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Or to slake thirst from some sweet-bubbling rill | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| In summer's heat. Nor on the reeds alone, | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| But with thy voice art thou, thrice happy boy, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Ranked with thy master, second but to him. | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Yet will I, too, in turn, as best I may, | 10 | ·········· |
| Sing thee a song, and to the stars uplift | 10 | ········/˘ |
| Thy Daphnis- Daphnis to the stars extol, | 10 | ·/˘/˘···˘/ |
| For me too Daphnis loved. | 6 | ···/˘· |
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