Conversion

Jean Toomer (1894–1967) · 1923

unrhymed · 8 lines · from Cane

African Guardian of Souls,Drunk with rum,Feasting on a strange cassava,Yielding to new words and a weak palabraOf a white-faced sardonic god—Grins, criesAmen,Shouts hosanna.

Words in this poem

sardonic a.
Forced; unnatural; insincere; hence, derisive, mocking, malignant, or bitterly sarcastic; -- applied only to a laugh, smile, or some facial semblance of gayety.
amen interj.
An expression used at the end of prayers, and meaning, So be it. At the end of a creed, it is a solemn asseveration of belief. [L. amen, Gr. am certainly, truly.]
hosanna n.
A Hebrew exclamation of praise to the Lord, or an invocation of blessings. [Gr. hoshi'ah nnasave now, save, we pray, hoshia' to save (Hiphil, a causative form, of yasha') + na, a particle.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Conversion is in the public domain. This text is taken from Cane, Project Gutenberg ebook #60093; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Jean Toomer, Conversion, in Cane (1923), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #60093, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/toomer-cane/conversion.html, id L01568.

Form and metre

Conversion is 8 lines in a single verse paragraph. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. 86% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.9 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 25% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
African Guardian of Souls,8/˘˘/˘˘··
Drunk with rum,3···
Feasting on a strange cassava,8/˘···/˘˘
Yielding to new words and a weak palabra11/˘·········
Of a white-faced sardonic god—9····˘˘/˘·
Grins, cries2··
Amen,2˘/
Shouts hosanna.4·˘/˘

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