Book I: Elegy the Seventh: A Desperate Expedient
Thou beckonest ever with a face all smiles,Then, God of Love, thou lookest fierce and pale.Unfeeling boy! why waste on me such wiles?What glory if a god o'er man prevails?
Once more thy snares are set. My Delia fliesTo steal a night--with whom I cannot tell.Can I believe when she denies, denies--I, for whose sake she tricked her lord so well?
By me, alas! those cunning ways were shownTo fool her slaves. My skill I now deplore!For me she made excuse to sleep alone,Or silenced the shrill hinges of her door.
"Twas I prescribed what remedies to useIf mutual passion somewhat fiercely play;If there were tell-tale bite or rosy bruise,I showed what simples take the scars away.
Hear me! fond husband of the false and fair,Make me thy guest, and she shall chastely go!When she makes talk with men I shall take care,Nor shall she at the wine her bosom show.
I shall take care she does not nod or smileTo any other, nor her hand imbueWith his fast-flowing wine, that her swift guileMay scribble on the board their rendez-vous.
When she goes out, beware! And if she hieTo Bona Dea, where no males may be,Straight to the sacred altars follow I,Who only trust her if my eyes can see.
Oh! oft I pressed that soft hand I adore,Feigning with some rare ring or seal to play,And plied thee with strong wine till thou didst snore,While I, with wine and water, won the day.
I wronged thee, aye! But 'twas not what I meant.Forgive, for I confess. 'Twas Cupid's spellO'er-swayed me. Who can foil a god's intent?Now have I courage all my deeds to tell.
Yes, it was I, unblushing I declare.At whom thy watch-dog all night long did bay:--But some-one else now stands insistent there,Or peers about him and then walks away.
He seems to pass. But soon will backward fareAlone, and, coughing, at the threshold hide.What skill hath stolen love! Beware, beware!Thy boat is drifting on a treacherous tide.
What worth a lovely wife, if others buyThy treasure, if thy stoutest bolt betrays,If in thy very arms she breathes a sighFor absent joy, and feigns a slight malaise?
Give her in charge to me! I will not spareA master's whip. Her chain shall constant be.While thou mayst go abroad and have no careWho trims his curls, or flaunts his toga free.
Whatever beaux accost her, all is well!Not the least hint of scandal shall be made.For I will send them far away, to tellIn some quite distant street their amorous trade.
All this a god decrees; a sibyl wiseIn prophet-song did this to me proclaim;Who when Bellona kindles in her eyes,Fears neither twisted scourge nor scorching flame.
Then with a battle-axe herself will scarHer own wild arms, and sprinkle on the groundBlood, for Bellona's emblems of wild war,Swift-flowing from the bosom's gaping wound.
A barb of iron rankles in her breast,As thus she chants the god's command to all:"Oh, spare a beauty by true love possessed,Lest some vast after-woe upon thee fall!
"For shouldst thou win her, all thy power will fail,As from this wound flows forth the fatal gore,Or as these ashes cast upon the gale,Are scattered far and kindled never more."
And, O my Delia, the fierce prophetessTold dreadful things that on thy head should fall:--I know not what they were--but none the lessI pray my darling may escape them all.
Not for thyself do I forgive thee, no!'Tis thy sweet mother all my wrath disarms,--That precious creature, who would come and go,And lead thee through the darkness to my arms.
Though great the peril, oft the silent dameWould join our hands together, and all nightWait watching on the threshold till I came,Nor ever failed to know my steps aright.
Long be thy life! dear, kind and faithful heart!Would it were possible my life's whole yearWere at the friendly hearth-stone where thou art!'Tis for thy sake I hold thy daughter dear.
Be what she will, she is not less thy child.Oh, teach her to be chaste! Though well she knowsNo free-born fillet binds her tresses wildNor Roman stole around her ankles flows!
My lot is servile too. Whate'er I seeOf beauty brings her to my fevered eye.If I should be accused of crime, or beDragged up the steep street, by the hair, to die:--
Even then there were no fear that I should layRude hands on thee my sweet! for if o'erswayedBy such blind frenzy in an evil day,I should bewail the hour my hands were made.
Yet would I have thee chaste and constant be,Not with a fearful but a faithful heart;And that in thy fond breast the love of meBurn but more fondly when we live apart.
She who was never faithful to a friendWill come to age and misery, and windWith tremulous ringer from her distaff's endThe ever-twisting wool; and she will bind
Upon her moving looms the finished thread,Or clean and pick the long skeins white as snow.And all her fickle gallants when they wed,Will say, "That old one well deserves her woe."
Venus from heaven will note her flowing tear:"I smile not on the faithless," she will say.Her curse on others fall! O, Delia dear!Let us teach true love to grow old and gray!
Words in this poem 22
- deplore v. t.
- To feel or to express deep and poignant grief for; to bewail; to lament; to mourn; to sorrow over. [L. deplorare; de- + plorare to cry out, wail, lament; prob. akin to pluere to rain, and to E. flow: cf. F. déplorer. Cf. Flow.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- chastely adv.
- In a chaste manner; with purity.
- beware v. t.
- To avoid; to take care of; to have a care for.
- adore v. t.
- To worship with profound reverence; to pay divine honors to; to honor as deity or as divine. [OE. aouren, anouren, adoren, OF. aorer, adorer, F. adorer, fr. L. adorare; ad + orare to speak, pray, os, oris, mouth. In OE. confused with honor, the French pr]
- didst
- , the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
- snore v. i.
- To breathe with a rough, hoarse, nasal voice in sleep. [OE. snoren, AS. snora a snoring; akin to LG. snoren, snorken, snurken, to snore, D. snorken, G. schnarchen to snore, schnarren to rattle, MHG. snarren, Sw. snar]
- unblushing a.
- Not blushing; shameless.
- insistent a.
- Standing or resting on something; as, an insistent wall. Sir H. [L. insistens, -entis, p. pr. of insistere.]
- malaise n.
- An indefinite feeling of uneasiness, or of being sick or ill at ease. [F., fr. mal ill + aise ease.]
- scandal n.
- Offense caused or experienced; reproach or reprobation called forth by what is regarded as wrong, criminal, heinous, or flagrant: opprobrium or disgrace. [F. scandale, fr. L. scandalum, Gr. scandle, OF. escandle. See Slander.]
- sibyl n.
- A woman supposed to be endowed with a spirit of prophecy.
- bellona n.
- The goddess of war. [L., from bellum war.]
- scourge n.
- A lash; a strap or cord; especially, a lash used to inflict pain or punishment; an instrument of punishment or discipline; a whip. [F. escourgée, fr. L. excoriata (sc. scutica) a stripped off (lash or whip), fr. excoriate to strip, to skin. See Excoriate.]
- scorching a.
- Burning; parching or shriveling with heat.
- prophetess n.
- A female prophet. [Cf. F. prophétesse, L. prophetissa.]
- dreadful a.
- Full of dread or terror; fearful.
- dame n.
- A mistress of a family, who is a lady; a womam in authority; especially, a lady. [F. dame, LL. domna, fr. L. domina mistress, lady, fem. of dominus master, ruler, lord; akin to domare to tame, subdue. See Tame, and cf. Dam mother, Dan, Danger]
- aright adv.
- Rightly; correctly; in a right way or form; without mistake or crime; as, to worship God aright. [Pref. a- + right.]
- stole n.
- A long, loose garment reaching to the feet. [AS. stole, L. stola, Gr. stall. See Stall.]
- fondly adv.
- Foolishly. Verstegan (1673).
- ringer n.
- One who, or that which, rings; especially, one who rings chimes on bells.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Book I: Elegy the Seventh: A Desperate Expedient is 116 lines in 29 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABAB, complete in 26 of its 29 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 2 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 28% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 A-A- smilesA · pale · wilesA · prevails
- 2 ABAB fliesA · tellB · deniesA · wellB
- 3 ABAB shownA · deploreB · aloneA · doorB
- 4 ABAB useA · playB · bruiseA · awayB
- 5 ABAB fairA · goB · careA · showB
- 6 ABAB smileA · imbueB · guileA · vousB
- 7 -AAA hie · beA · iA · seeA
- 8 ABAB adoreA · playB · snoreA · dayB
- 9 ABAB meantA · spellB · intentA · tellB
- 10 ABAB declareA · bayB · thereA · awayB
- 11 ABAB fareA · hideB · bewareA · tideB
- 12 ABAB buyA · betraysB · sighA · malaiseB
- 13 ABAB spareA · beB · careA · freeB
- 14 ABAB wellA · madeB · tellA · tradeB
- 15 ABAB wiseA · proclaimB · eyesA · flameB
- 16 -A-A scar · groundA · war · woundA
- 17 ABAB breastA · allB · possessedA · fallB
- 18 ABAB failA · goreB · galeA · moreB
- 19 ABAB prophetessA · fallB · lessA · allB
- 20 ABAB noA · disarmsB · goA · armsB
- 21 ABAB dameA · nightB · cameA · arightB
- 22 ABAB heartA · yearB · artA · dearB
- 23 ABAB childA · knowsB · wildA · flowsB
- 24 ABAB seeA · eyeB · beA · dieB
- 25 ABAB layA · o'erswayedB · dayA · madeB
- 26 ABAB beA · heartB · meA · apartB
- 27 ABAB friendA · windB · endA · bindB
- 28 ABAB threadA · snowB · wedA · woeB
- 29 ABAB tearA · sayB · dearA · grayB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Thou beckonest ever with a face all smiles, | 10 | ·/˘˘/····· |
| Then, God of Love, thou lookest fierce and pale. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Unfeeling boy! why waste on me such wiles? | 10 | ˘/˘······· |
| What glory if a god o'er man prevails? | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| Once more thy snares are set. My Delia flies | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| To steal a night--with whom I cannot tell. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Can I believe when she denies, denies-- | 10 | ··˘/··˘/˘/ |
| I, for whose sake she tricked her lord so well? | 10 | ·········· |
| By me, alas! those cunning ways were shown | 10 | ··˘/·/˘··· |
| To fool her slaves. My skill I now deplore! | 10 | ········˘/ |
| For me she made excuse to sleep alone, | 10 | ····˘/··˘/ |
| Or silenced the shrill hinges of her door. | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| "Twas I prescribed what remedies to use | 10 | ··˘/·/˘˘·· |
| If mutual passion somewhat fiercely play; | 10 | ·/˘/˘///˘· |
| If there were tell-tale bite or rosy bruise, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| I showed what simples take the scars away. | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| Hear me! fond husband of the false and fair, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Make me thy guest, and she shall chastely go! | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| When she makes talk with men I shall take care, | 10 | ·········· |
| Nor shall she at the wine her bosom show. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| I shall take care she does not nod or smile | 10 | ·········· |
| To any other, nor her hand imbue | 10 | ·/˘/˘···˘/ |
| With his fast-flowing wine, that her swift guile | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| May scribble on the board their rendez-vous. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| When she goes out, beware! And if she hie | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| To Bona Dea, where no males may be, | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| Straight to the sacred altars follow I, | 10 | ···/˘/˘/˘· |
| Who only trust her if my eyes can see. | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Oh! oft I pressed that soft hand I adore, | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Feigning with some rare ring or seal to play, | 10 | /˘········ |
| And plied thee with strong wine till thou didst snore, | 10 | ·········· |
| While I, with wine and water, won the day. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| I wronged thee, aye! But 'twas not what I meant. | 10 | ·········· |
| Forgive, for I confess. 'Twas Cupid's spell | 10 | ˘/··˘/·/˘· |
| O'er-swayed me. Who can foil a god's intent? | 10 | ········˘/ |
| Now have I courage all my deeds to tell. | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Yes, it was I, unblushing I declare. | 10 | ····˘/˘·˘/ |
| At whom thy watch-dog all night long did bay:-- | 10 | ·········· |
| But some-one else now stands insistent there, | 10 | ······˘/˘· |
| Or peers about him and then walks away. | 10 | ········˘/ |
| He seems to pass. But soon will backward fare | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Alone, and, coughing, at the threshold hide. | 10 | ˘/·/˘··/·· |
| What skill hath stolen love! Beware, beware! | 10 | ···/˘·˘/˘/ |
| Thy boat is drifting on a treacherous tide. | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| What worth a lovely wife, if others buy | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Thy treasure, if thy stoutest bolt betrays, | 10 | ·/˘··/˘·˘/ |
| If in thy very arms she breathes a sigh | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| For absent joy, and feigns a slight malaise? | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| Give her in charge to me! I will not spare | 10 | ·········· |
| A master's whip. Her chain shall constant be. | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| While thou mayst go abroad and have no care | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Who trims his curls, or flaunts his toga free. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Whatever beaux accost her, all is well! | 10 | ·/˘·˘/···· |
| Not the least hint of scandal shall be made. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| For I will send them far away, to tell | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| In some quite distant street their amorous trade. | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| All this a god decrees; a sibyl wise | 10 | ····˘/·/˘· |
| In prophet-song did this to me proclaim; | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| Who when Bellona kindles in her eyes, | 10 | ··˘/˘/˘··· |
| Fears neither twisted scourge nor scorching flame. | 10 | ·/˘/˘··/˘· |
| Then with a battle-axe herself will scar | 10 | ···/˘·˘/·· |
| Her own wild arms, and sprinkle on the ground | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Blood, for Bellona's emblems of wild war, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Swift-flowing from the bosom's gaping wound. | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| A barb of iron rankles in her breast, | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| As thus she chants the god's command to all: | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| "Oh, spare a beauty by true love possessed, | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| Lest some vast after-woe upon thee fall! | 10 | ·········· |
| "For shouldst thou win her, all thy power will fail, | 10 | ·······/·· |
| As from this wound flows forth the fatal gore, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Or as these ashes cast upon the gale, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Are scattered far and kindled never more." | 10 | ·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| And, O my Delia, the fierce prophetess | 10 | ···/˘··/˘˘ |
| Told dreadful things that on thy head should fall:-- | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| I know not what they were--but none the less | 10 | ·········· |
| I pray my darling may escape them all. | 10 | ···/˘·˘/·· |
| Not for thyself do I forgive thee, no! | 10 | ··˘/··˘/·· |
| 'Tis thy sweet mother all my wrath disarms,-- | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| That precious creature, who would come and go, | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| And lead thee through the darkness to my arms. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Though great the peril, oft the silent dame | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Would join our hands together, and all night | 10 | ··/·˘/˘··· |
| Wait watching on the threshold till I came, | 10 | ·/˘··/···· |
| Nor ever failed to know my steps aright. | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| Long be thy life! dear, kind and faithful heart! | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Would it were possible my life's whole year | 10 | ···/˘˘···· |
| Were at the friendly hearth-stone where thou art! | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| 'Tis for thy sake I hold thy daughter dear. | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Be what she will, she is not less thy child. | 10 | ·········· |
| Oh, teach her to be chaste! Though well she knows | 10 | ·········· |
| No free-born fillet binds her tresses wild | 10 | ···˘/··/˘· |
| Nor Roman stole around her ankles flows! | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| My lot is servile too. Whate'er I see | 11 | ···/˘·˘˘/·· |
| Of beauty brings her to my fevered eye. | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| If I should be accused of crime, or be | 10 | ····˘/···· |
| Dragged up the steep street, by the hair, to die:-- | 10 | ·········· |
| Even then there were no fear that I should lay | 10 | /········· |
| Rude hands on thee my sweet! for if o'erswayed | 10 | ·········˘ |
| By such blind frenzy in an evil day, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| I should bewail the hour my hands were made. | 10 | ··˘/·/···· |
| Yet would I have thee chaste and constant be, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Not with a fearful but a faithful heart; | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| And that in thy fond breast the love of me | 10 | ·········· |
| Burn but more fondly when we live apart. | 10 | ···/˘···˘/ |
| She who was never faithful to a friend | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Will come to age and misery, and wind | 10 | ·····/˘˘·· |
| With tremulous ringer from her distaff's end | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| The ever-twisting wool; and she will bind | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| Upon her moving looms the finished thread, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Or clean and pick the long skeins white as snow. | 10 | ·········· |
| And all her fickle gallants when they wed, | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Will say, "That old one well deserves her woe." | 10 | ······˘/·· |
| Venus from heaven will note her flowing tear: | 10 | /˘·/···/˘· |
| "I smile not on the faithless," she will say. | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Her curse on others fall! O, Delia dear! | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Let us teach true love to grow old and gray! | 10 | ·········· |
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