Book I: Elegy the Eighth: Messala

Tibullus (55 BC–19 BC), translated by Theodore Chickering Williams · 1905

iambic pentameter · 93 lines · from The Elegies

The Fatal Sisters did this day ordain,Reeling threads no god can rend,Foretelling to this man should bendThe tribes of Acquitaine;And 'neath his legions' yokeTh' impetuous torrent Atur glide subdued.All was accomplished as the Fates bespoke;His triumph then ensued:The Roman youth, exulting from afar,Acclaimed his mighty deeds,And watched the fettered chieftains filing by,While, drawn by snow-white steeds,Messala followed on his ivory car,Laurelled and lifted high!

Not without me this glory and renown!Let Pyrenees my boast attest!Tarbella, little mountain-town,Cold Ocean rolling in the utmost West,Arar, Garonne, and rushing Rhone,Will bear me witness due;And valleys broad the blond Carnutes own,By Liger darkly blue.I saw the Cydnus flow,Winding on in ever-tranquil mood,And from his awful peak, in cloud and snow,Cold Taurus o'er his wild Cilicians' brood.I saw through thronged streets unmolested flyingTh' inviolate white dove of Palestine;I looked on Tyrian towers, by soundless waters lying,Whence Tyrians first were masters of the brine.The flooding Nile I knew;What time hot Sirius glows,And Egypt's thirsty field the covering deluge knows;But whence the wonder flows,O Father Nile! no mortal e'er did view.Along thy bank not any prayer is madeTo Jove for fruitful showers.On thee they call! Or in sepulchral shade,The life-reviving, sky-descended powersOf bright Osiris hail,--While, wildly chanting, the barbaric choir,With timbrels and strange fire,Their Memphian bull bewail.

Osiris did the plough bestow,And first with iron urged the yielding ground.He taught mankind good seed to throwIn furrows all untried;He plucked fair fruits the nameless trees did hide:He first the young vine to its trellis bound,And with his sounding sickle keenShore off the tendrils green.

For him the bursting clusters sweetWere in the wine-press trod;Song followed soon, a prompting of the god,And rhythmic dance of lightly leaping feet.Of Bacchus the o'er-wearied swain receivesDeliverance from all his pains;Bacchus gives comfort when a mortal grieves,And mirth to men in chains.Not to Osiris toils and tears belong,But revels and delightful song;Lightly beckoning loves are thine!Garlands deck thee, god of wine!We hear thee coming, with the flute's refrain,With fruit of ivy on thy forehead bound,Thy saffron vesture streaming to the ground.And thou hast garments, too, of Tyrian stain,When thine ecstatic trainBear forth thy magic ark to mysteries divine.

Immortal guest, our games and pageant share!Smile on the flowing cup, and hailWith us the Genius of this natal day!From whose anointed, rose-entwisted hair,Arabian odors waft away.If thou the festal bless, I will not failTo burn sweet incense unto him and thee,And offerings of Arcadian honey bear.

So grant Messala fortunes ever fair!Of such a sire the children worthy be!Till generations two and threeSurround his venerated chair!See, winding upward through the Latin land,Yon highway past, the Alban citadel,At great Messala's mandate made,In fitted stones and firm-set gravel laid,Thy monument forever more to stand!The mountain-villager thy fame will tell,When through the darkness wending late from Rome,He foots it smoothly home.

O Genius of this natal day,May many a year thy gift declare!Now bright and fair thy pinions soar away,--Return, thou bright and fair!

Words in this poem 25
exulting a.
Rejoicing triumphantly or exceedingly; exultant.
afar adv.
At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
fettered a.
Seeming as if fettered, as the feet pf certain animals which bend backward, and appear unfit for walking.
attest v. t.
To bear witness to; to certify; to affirm to be true or genuine; as, to attest the truth of a writing, a copy of record. [L. attestari; ad + testari to bear witness: cf. F. attester.]
inviolate a.
Not violated; uninjured; unhurt; unbroken. [L. inviolatus. See In- not, and Violate.]
tyrian a.
Of or pertaining to Tyre or its people.
soundless a.
Not capable of being sounded or fathomed; unfathomable.
flooding n.
The filling or covering with water or other fluid; overflow; inundation; the filling anything to excess.
sirius n.
The Dog Star. See Dog Star.
jove n.
The chief divinity of the ancient Romans; Jupiter. [L. Jupiter, gen. Jovis, OL. Jovis, nom. & gen. for Djovis; akin to E. Tuesday. See Tuesday, and cf. Jupiter.]
osiris n.
One of the principal divinities of Egypt, the brother and husband of Isis. He was figured as a mummy wearing the royal cap of Upper Egypt, and was symbolized by the sacred bull, called Apis. Cf.
barbaric a.
Of, or from, barbarian nations; foreign; -- often with reference to barbarous nations of east. [L. barbaricus foreign, barbaric, Gr. .]
memphian a.
Of or pertaining to the ancient city of Memphis in Egypt; hence, Egyptian; as, Memphian darkness.
nameless a.
Without a name; not having been given a name; as, a nameless star.
rhythmic a.
Pertaining to, or of the nature of, rhythm DAy and night I worked my rhythmic thought. Mrs. Browning. [Gr. rhythmicus, F. rhythmique.]
streaming a.
Sending forth streams.
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
pageant n.
A theatrical exhibition; a spectacle. [OE. pagent, pagen, originally, a movable scaffold or stage, hence, what was exhibited on it, fr. LL. pagina, akin to pangere to fasten; cf. L. pagina page, leaf]
natal a.
Of or pertaining to one's birth; accompying or dating from one's birth; native. [L. natalis, fr. natus, p.p. of nasci to be born: cf. F. natal. See Nation, and cf. Noel.]
waft v. t.
To give notice to by waving something; to wave the hand to; to beckon. [Prob. originally imp. & p. p. of wave, v. t. See Wave to waver.]
festal a.
Of or pertaining to a holiday or a feast; joyous; festive. [L. festum holiday, feast. See feast.]
arcadian a.
Of or pertaining to Arcadia; pastoral; ideally rural; as, Arcadian simplicity or scenery. [L. Arcadius, Arcadicus, fr. Arcadia: cf. F. Arcadien, Arcadique.]
sire n.
A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
alban n.
A white crystalline resinous substance extracted from gutta- percha by the action of alcohol or ether. [L. albus white.]
foots n.
The settlings of oil, molasses, etc., at the bottom of a barrel or hogshead. Simmonds.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Book I: Elegy the Eighth: Messala is 93 lines in 7 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.7 syllables. 6 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 14% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBACDCDEFGFEG ordainA · rendB · bendB · acquitaineA · yokeC · subduedD · bespokeC · ensuedD · afarE · deedsF · byG · steedsF · carE · highG
  2. 2 ABABCDCDEFEFGHGHDIIIDJKJKLMML renownA · attestB · townA · westB · rhoneC · dueD · ownC · blueD · flowE · moodF · snowE · broodF · flyingG · palestineH · lyingG · brineH · knewD · glowsI · knowsI · flowsI · viewD · madeJ · showersK · shadeJ · powersK · hailL · choirM · fireM · bewailL
  3. 3 ABACCBDD bestowA · groundB · throwA · untriedC · hideC · boundB · keenD · greenD
  4. 4 ABBACDCDEEFFGHHGGF sweetA · trodB · godB · feetA · receivesC · painsD · grievesC · chainsD · belongE · songE · thineF · wineF · refrainG · boundH · groundH · stainG · trainG · divineF
  5. 5 ABCACB-A shareA · hailB · dayC · hairA · awayC · failB · thee · bearA
  6. 6 ABBACDEECDFF fairA · beB · threeB · chairA · landC · citadelD · madeE · laidE · standC · tellD · romeF · homeF
  7. 7 ABAB dayA · declareB · awayA · fairB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The Fatal Sisters did this day ordain,10·/˘/˘···˘/
Reeling threads no god can rend,7/˘·····
Foretelling to this man should bend8˘/˘·····
The tribes of Acquitaine;6···/˘·
And 'neath his legions' yoke6···/˘·
Th' impetuous torrent Atur glide subdued.10˘/˘/˘···˘/
All was accomplished as the Fates bespoke;10··˘/˘···˘/
His triumph then ensued:6·/˘·˘/
The Roman youth, exulting from afar,10·/˘·˘/˘·˘/
Acclaimed his mighty deeds,6˘/·/˘·
And watched the fettered chieftains filing by,10···/˘/˘/˘·
While, drawn by snow-white steeds,6······
Messala followed on his ivory car,10···/˘··/˘·
Laurelled and lifted high!6/˘·/˘·
Not without me this glory and renown!10·····/˘·˘/
Let Pyrenees my boast attest!8·/˘˘··˘/
Tarbella, little mountain-town,8···/˘/˘·
Cold Ocean rolling in the utmost West,10·/˘/˘··/··
Arar, Garonne, and rushing Rhone,8··˘/·/˘·
Will bear me witness due;6···/˘·
And valleys broad the blond Carnutes own,9·/˘······
By Liger darkly blue.6···/˘·
I saw the Cydnus flow,6······
Winding on in ever-tranquil mood,9/˘··/˘/˘·
And from his awful peak, in cloud and snow,10···/˘·····
Cold Taurus o'er his wild Cilicians' brood.10·/˘·······
I saw through thronged streets unmolested flying11······˘/˘/˘
Th' inviolate white dove of Palestine;10˘/˘˘···/˘·
I looked on Tyrian towers, by soundless waters lying,14···/˘˘/·/˘/˘/˘
Whence Tyrians first were masters of the brine.10·····/˘···
The flooding Nile I knew;6·/˘···
What time hot Sirius glows,7···/˘˘·
And Egypt's thirsty field the covering deluge knows;12·/˘/˘··/˘/˘·
But whence the wonder flows,6···/˘·
O Father Nile! no mortal e'er did view.10·/˘··/˘···
Along thy bank not any prayer is made10˘/···/˘···
To Jove for fruitful showers.7···/˘/˘
On thee they call! Or in sepulchral shade,10······˘/˘·
The life-reviving, sky-descended powers11··˘/˘·˘/˘/˘
Of bright Osiris hail,--6··˘/˘·
While, wildly chanting, the barbaric choir,11·/˘/˘·˘/˘/˘
With timbrels and strange fire,7·····/˘
Their Memphian bull bewail.7·/˘˘·˘/
Osiris did the plough bestow,8˘/˘···˘/
And first with iron urged the yielding ground.10···/˘··/˘·
He taught mankind good seed to throw8··//····
In furrows all untried;6·/˘·˘/
He plucked fair fruits the nameless trees did hide:10·····/˘···
He first the young vine to its trellis bound,10·······/˘·
And with his sounding sickle keen8···/˘/˘·
Shore off the tendrils green.6······
For him the bursting clusters sweet8···/˘/˘·
Were in the wine-press trod;6······
Song followed soon, a prompting of the god,10·/˘··/˘···
And rhythmic dance of lightly leaping feet.10·/˘··/˘/˘·
Of Bacchus the o'er-wearied swain receives10·/˘··/˘·˘/
Deliverance from all his pains;8˘/˘˘····
Bacchus gives comfort when a mortal grieves,10/˘·/˘··/˘·
And mirth to men in chains.6······
Not to Osiris toils and tears belong,10··˘/˘···˘/
But revels and delightful song;8·/˘·˘/˘·
Lightly beckoning loves are thine!8/˘/˘˘···
Garlands deck thee, god of wine!7/˘·····
We hear thee coming, with the flute's refrain,10···/˘···˘/
With fruit of ivy on thy forehead bound,10···/˘··/˘·
Thy saffron vesture streaming to the ground.10·/˘/˘/˘···
And thou hast garments, too, of Tyrian stain,11···/˘··/˘˘·
When thine ecstatic train6··˘/˘·
Bear forth thy magic ark to mysteries divine.11···/˘··/˘˘/
Immortal guest, our games and pageant share!10˘/˘·/··/˘·
Smile on the flowing cup, and hail8···/˘···
With us the Genius of this natal day!10···/˘··/˘·
From whose anointed, rose-entwisted hair,10··˘/˘·····
Arabian odors waft away.9˘/˘˘/˘·˘/
If thou the festal bless, I will not fail10···/˘·····
To burn sweet incense unto him and thee,10···˘/·····
And offerings of Arcadian honey bear.10·/˘··/˘/˘·
So grant Messala fortunes ever fair!10·····/˘/˘·
Of such a sire the children worthy be!10···/·/˘/˘·
Till generations two and three8··˘/˘···
Surround his venerated chair!8˘/·/˘·˘·
See, winding upward through the Latin land,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Yon highway past, the Alban citadel,10·/···/˘/˘·
At great Messala's mandate made,8·····/··
In fitted stones and firm-set gravel laid,10·/˘····/˘·
Thy monument forever more to stand!10·/˘˘˘/˘···
The mountain-villager thy fame will tell,10·/˘/˘˘····
When through the darkness wending late from Rome,10···/˘/˘···
He foots it smoothly home.6···/˘·
O Genius of this natal day,8·/˘··/˘·
May many a year thy gift declare!9·/˘····˘/
Now bright and fair thy pinions soar away,--10·····/˘·˘/
Return, thou bright and fair!6˘/····

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