The Willow-Tree

William Makepeace Thackeray (1811–1863) · 1849–1855

iambic trimeter · 54 lines · from Ballads

Know ye the willow-treeWhose gray leaves quiver,Whispering gloomilyTo yon pale river;Lady, at even-tideWander not near it,They say its branches hideA sad, lost spirit?

Once to the willow-treeA maid came fearful,Pale seemed her cheek to be,Her blue eye tearful;Soon as she saw the tree,Her step moved fleeter,No one was there--ah me!No one to meet her!

Quick beat her heart to hearThe far bell's chimeToll from the chapel-towerThe trysting time:But the red sun went downIn golden flame,And though she looked round,Yet no one came!

Presently came the night,Sadly to greet her,--Moon in her silver light,Stars in their glitter;Then sank the moon awayUnder the billow,Still wept the maid alone--There by the willow!

Through the long darkness,By the stream rolling,Hour after hour went onTolling and tolling.Long was the darkness,Lonely and stilly;Shrill came the night-wind,Piercing and chilly.

Shrill blew the morning breeze,Biting and cold,Bleak peers the gray dawnOver the wold.Bleak over moor and streamLooks the grey dawn,Gray, with dishevelled hair,Still stands the willow there--

Domine, Domine!Sing we a litany,--Sing for poor maiden-hearts broken and weary;Domine, Domine!Sing we a litany,Wail we and weep we a wild Miserere!

Words in this poem

tearful a.
Abounding with tears; weeping; shedding tears; as, tearful eyes.
chime n.
The harmonious sound of bells, or of musical instruments. [OE. chimbe, prop., cymbal, OF. cymbe, cymble, in a dialectic form, chymble, F. cymbale, L. cymbalum, fr. Gr. Cymbal.]
trysting n.
An appointment; a tryst. Trysting day, an arranged day of meeting or assembling, as of soldiers, friends, and the like.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
presently adv.
At present; at this time; now.
sadly adv.
Wearily; heavily; firmly.
billow n.
A great wave or surge of the sea or other water, caused usually by violent wind. [Cf. Icel. bylgja billow, Dan. bölge, Sw. bölja; akin to MHG. bulge billow, bag, and to E. bulge. See Bulge.]
stilly a.
Still; quiet; calm.
wold n.
A wood; a forest. [OE. wold, wald, AS. weald, wald, a wood, forest; akin to OFries. & OS. wald, D. woud, G. wald, Icel. völlr, a field, and probably to Gr. va a garden, inclosure.]
domine n.
A name given to a pastor of the Reformed Church. The word is also applied locally in the United States, in colloquial speech, to any clergyman. [See Dominie.]
miserere n.
The psalm usually appointed for penitential acts, being the 50th psalm in the Latin version. It commences with the word miserere. [L., have mercy, fr. misereri to have mercy, fr. miser. See Miser.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Willow-Tree is in the public domain. This text is taken from Ballads, Project Gutenberg ebook #2732; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: William Makepeace Thackeray, The Willow-Tree, in Ballads (1849–1855), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #2732, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/thackeray-ballads/the-willow-tree.html, id L10413.

Form and metre

The Willow-Tree is 54 lines in 7 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 86%). 91% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 5.6 syllables. 20 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -A-ABCBC tree · quiverA · gloomily · riverA · tideB · itC · hideB · spiritC
  2. 2 ABABA-A- treeA · fearfulB · beA · tearfulB · treeA · fleeter · meA · her
  3. 3 -A-A-B-B hear · chimeA · tower · timeA · down · flameB · round · cameB
  4. 4 A-A----- nightA · her · lightA · glitter · away · billow · alone · willow
  5. 5 AB-BAC-C darknessA · rollingB · on · tollingB · darknessA · stillyC · wind · chillyC
  6. 6 -ABA-BCC breeze · coldA · dawnB · woldA · stream · dawnB · hairC · thereC
  7. 7 AB-AB- domineA · litanyB · weary · domineA · litanyB · miserere
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Know ye the willow-tree6···/··
Whose gray leaves quiver,5···/˘
Whispering gloomily6/˘˘/˘˘
To yon pale river;5···/˘
Lady, at even-tide6/˘·/˘·
Wander not near it,5/˘···
They say its branches hide6···/˘·
A sad, lost spirit?5···/˘
Once to the willow-tree6···/··
A maid came fearful,5···/˘
Pale seemed her cheek to be,7··˘····
Her blue eye tearful;5···/˘
Soon as she saw the tree,6······
Her step moved fleeter,5·····
No one was there--ah me!6······
No one to meet her!5·····
Quick beat her heart to hear6······
The far bell's chime4····
Toll from the chapel-tower7···/˘/˘
The trysting time:4·/˘·
But the red sun went down6······
In golden flame,4·/˘·
And though she looked round,5·····
Yet no one came!4····
Presently came the night,6/˘˘···
Sadly to greet her,--5/˘···
Moon in her silver light,6···/˘·
Stars in their glitter;5···/˘
Then sank the moon away6····˘/
Under the billow,5···/˘
Still wept the maid alone--6····˘/
There by the willow!5···/·
Through the long darkness,5···/˘
By the stream rolling,5···/˘
Hour after hour went on8/˘··/˘··
Tolling and tolling.5/˘·/˘
Long was the darkness,5···/˘
Lonely and stilly;5/˘·/˘
Shrill came the night-wind,5·····
Piercing and chilly.5/˘·/˘
Shrill blew the morning breeze,6···/˘·
Biting and cold,4/˘··
Bleak peers the gray dawn5·····
Over the wold.4····
Bleak over moor and stream6······
Looks the grey dawn,4····
Gray, with dishevelled hair,7··˘/˘˘·
Still stands the willow there--6···/··
Domine, Domine!6˘/˘˘/˘
Sing we a litany,--6···/˘˘
Sing for poor maiden-hearts broken and weary;11···/˘·/˘·/˘
Domine, Domine!6˘/˘˘/˘
Sing we a litany,6···/˘˘
Wail we and weep we a wild Miserere!10··········

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