One writes, that ‘Other friends remain,’

Alfred Tennyson (1809–1892) · 1850

iambic tetrameter · ABBA · 44 lines · from In Memoriam A.H.H.

One writes, that ‘Other friends remain,’That ‘Loss is common to the race’--And common is the commonplace,And vacant chaff well meant for grain.

That loss is common would not makeMy own less bitter, rather more:Too common! Never morning woreTo evening, but some heart did break.

O father, wheresoe’er thou be,That pledgest now thy gallant son;A shot, ere half thy draught be doneHath still’d the life that beat from thee.

O mother, praying God will saveThy sailor,--while thy head is bow’d,His heavy-shotted hammock-shroudDrops in his vast and wandering grave.

Ye know no more than I who wroughtAt that last hour to please him well;Who mused on all I had to tell,And something written, something thought;

Expecting still his advent home;And ever met him on his wayWith wishes, thinking, here to-day,Or here to-morrow will he come.

O! somewhere, meek unconscious dove,That sittest ranging golden hair;And glad to find thyself so fair,Poor child, that waitest for thy love!

For now her father’s chimney glowsIn expectation of a guest;And thinking ‘this will please him best,’She takes a riband or a rose;

For he will see them on to-night;And with the thought her colour burns;And, having left the glass, she turnsOnce more to set a ringlet right;

And, even when she turn’d, the curseHad fallen, and her future LordWas drown’d in passing thro’ the ford,Or kill’d in falling from his horse.

O, what to her shall be the end?And what to me remains of good?To her, perpetual maidenhood,And unto me, no second friend.

Words in this poem

somewhere adv.
In some place unknown or not specified; in one place or another.
chimney n.
A fireplace or hearth. Sir W. Raleigh.
ringlet n.
A small ring; a small circle; specifically, a fairy ring. [Ring + -let.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

One writes, that ‘Other friends remain,’ is in the public domain. This text is taken from In memoriam, Project Gutenberg ebook #70950; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Alfred Tennyson, One writes, that ‘Other friends remain,’, in In Memoriam A.H.H. (1850), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #70950, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/tennyson-in-memoriam/section-6.html, id L18366.

Form and metre

One writes, that ‘Other friends remain,’ is 44 lines in 11 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABBA. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 94%). 99% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 25% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABBA remainA · raceB · commonplaceB · grainA
  2. 2 ABBA makeA · moreB · woreB · breakA
  3. 3 ABBA beA · sonB · doneB · theeA
  4. 4 ABBA saveA · bow'dB · shroudB · graveA
  5. 5 ABBA wroughtA · wellB · tellB · thoughtA
  6. 6 ABBA homeA · wayB · dayB · comeA
  7. 7 ABBA doveA · hairB · fairB · loveA
  8. 8 ABBA glowsA · guestB · bestB · roseA
  9. 9 ABBA nightA · burnsB · turnsB · rightA
  10. 10 ABBA curseA · lordB · fordB · horseA
  11. 11 ABBA endA · goodB · maidenhoodB · friendA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
One writes, that ‘Other friends remain,’8···/˘·˘/
That ‘Loss is common to the race’--8···/˘···
And common is the commonplace,8·/˘··/˘·
And vacant chaff well meant for grain.8·/˘·····
That loss is common would not make8···/˘···
My own less bitter, rather more:8···/˘/˘·
Too common! Never morning wore8·/˘/˘/˘·
To evening, but some heart did break.8·/˘·····
O father, wheresoe’er thou be,8·/˘·····
That pledgest now thy gallant son;8·/˘··/˘·
A shot, ere half thy draught be done8········
Hath still’d the life that beat from thee.8········
O mother, praying God will save8·/˘/˘···
Thy sailor,--while thy head is bow’d,8·/˘·····
His heavy-shotted hammock-shroud8·/˘/˘/˘·
Drops in his vast and wandering grave.8·····/˘·
Ye know no more than I who wrought8········
At that last hour to please him well;8···/····
Who mused on all I had to tell,8········
And something written, something thought;8·/˘/˘/˘·
Expecting still his advent home;8˘/˘··/··
And ever met him on his way8·/˘·····
With wishes, thinking, here to-day,8·/˘/˘···
Or here to-morrow will he come.8···/˘···
O! somewhere, meek unconscious dove,8·/···/˘·
That sittest ranging golden hair;8·/˘/˘/˘·
And glad to find thyself so fair,8····˘/··
Poor child, that waitest for thy love!8···/˘···
For now her father’s chimney glows8···/˘/˘·
In expectation of a guest;8··˘/˘···
And thinking ‘this will please him best,’8·/˘·····
She takes a riband or a rose;8···/˘···
For he will see them on to-night;8········
And with the thought her colour burns;8·····/˘·
And, having left the glass, she turns8·/˘·····
Once more to set a ringlet right;8·····/˘·
And, even when she turn’d, the curse8·/˘·····
Had fallen, and her future Lord8·/˘··/˘·
Was drown’d in passing thro’ the ford,8···/˘···
Or kill’d in falling from his horse.8···/˘···
O, what to her shall be the end?8········
And what to me remains of good?8····˘/··
To her, perpetual maidenhood,9··˘/˘˘/˘˘
And unto me, no second friend.8·····/˘·

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