System

Robert Louis Stevenson (1850–1894) · 1885

iambic tetrameter · AABB · 8 lines · from A Child's Garden of Verses

Every night my prayers I say,And get my dinner every day;And every day that I've been good,I get an orange after food.

The child that is not clean and neat,With lots of toys and things to eat,He is a naughty child, I'm sure--Or else his dear papa is poor.

Words in this poem

naughty a.
Having little or nothing.
papa n.
A child's word for father. [F. papa, L. papa; cf. Gr. Pope.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

System is in the public domain. This text is taken from A Child's Garden of Verses, Project Gutenberg ebook #136; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Robert Louis Stevenson, System, in A Child's Garden of Verses (1885), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #136, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/stevenson-childs-garden/system.html, id L07191.

Form and metre

System is 8 lines in 2 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes AABB. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 90%). 96% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.0 syllables.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB sayA · dayA · goodB · foodB
  2. 2 AABB neatA · eatA · sureB · poorB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Every night my prayers I say,8/˘˘·····
And get my dinner every day;8···/˘/˘·
And every day that I've been good,8·/˘·····
I get an orange after food.8···/˘···
The child that is not clean and neat,8········
With lots of toys and things to eat,8········
He is a naughty child, I'm sure--8···/˘···
Or else his dear papa is poor.8····/˘··

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