Song

John Collings Squire (1884–1958) · 1918

trochaic tetrameter · 16 lines · from Poems: First Series

Eyes like flowers and falling hairSeldom seen, nor ever long,Then I did not know you wereDestined subject for a song:Sharing your unconsciousnessOf your double loveliness,Unaware how fair you were,Peaceful eyes and shadowy hair.

Only, now your beauty fallsSweetly on some other place,Lonely reverie recallsMore than anything your face;Any idle hour may findStealing on my captured mind,Faintly merging from the air,Eyes like flowers and falling hair.

Words in this poem

loveliness n.
The state or quality of being lovely. [From Lovely.]
unaware a.
Not aware; not noticing; giving no heed; thoughtless; inattentive.
reverie n.
A loose or irregular train of thought occurring in musing or mediation; deep musing; daydream. [F. réverie, fr. rêver to dream, rave, be light-headed. Cf. Rave.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Song is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems - First Series, Project Gutenberg ebook #37860; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John Collings Squire, Song, in Poems: First Series (1918), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #37860, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/squire-poems/song-2.html, id L23196.

Form and metre

Song is 16 lines in 2 stanzas of 8 lines each. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABCBDDCA hairA · longB · wereC · songB · unconsciousnessD · lovelinessD · wereC · hairA
  2. 2 ABABCCDD fallsA · placeB · recallsA · faceB · findC · mindC · airD · hairD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Eyes like flowers and falling hair8··/˘·/˘·
Seldom seen, nor ever long,7/˘··/˘·
Then I did not know you were7·······
Destined subject for a song:8/˘˘˘/···
Sharing your unconsciousness7/˘··/˘˘
Of your double loveliness,7··/˘/˘˘
Unaware how fair you were,7·˘/····
Peaceful eyes and shadowy hair.8/˘··/˘˘·
Only, now your beauty falls7/˘··/˘·
Sweetly on some other place,7/˘··/˘·
Lonely reverie recalls7/˘/˘˘˘/
More than anything your face;7··/˘···
Any idle hour may find8/˘/˘/˘··
Stealing on my captured mind,8/˘··/˘˘·
Faintly merging from the air,7/˘/˘···
Eyes like flowers and falling hair.8··/˘·/˘·

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