Behind the Lines

John Collings Squire (1884–1958) · 1918

alexandrines · ABAB · 8 lines · from Poems: First Series

The wind of evening cried along the darkening trees,Along the darkening trees, heavy with ancient pain,Heavy with ancient pain from faded centuries,From faded centuries.... O foolish thought and vain!

O foolish thought and vain to think the wind could know,To think the wind could know the griefs of men who died,The griefs of men who died and mouldered long ago:"And mouldered long ago," the wind of evening cried.

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Behind the Lines is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems - First Series, Project Gutenberg ebook #37860; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: John Collings Squire, Behind the Lines, in Poems: First Series (1918), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #37860, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/squire-poems/behind-the-lines.html, id L23187.

Form and metre

Behind the Lines is 8 lines in 2 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is alexandrines, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABAB treesA · painB · centuriesA · vainB
  2. 2 ABAB knowA · diedB · agoA · criedB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against alexandrines. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
The wind of evening cried along the darkening trees,12···/˘·˘/·/˘·
Along the darkening trees, heavy with ancient pain,12˘/·/˘·/˘·/˘·
Heavy with ancient pain from faded centuries,12/˘·/˘··/˘/˘˘
From faded centuries.... O foolish thought and vain!12·/˘/˘˘·/˘···
O foolish thought and vain to think the wind could know,12·/˘·········
To think the wind could know the griefs of men who died,12············
The griefs of men who died and mouldered long ago:12·······/˘·˘/
"And mouldered long ago," the wind of evening cried.12·/˘·˘/···/˘·

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