Cancelled Passages of Adonais
And ever as he went he swept a lyreOf unaccustomed shape, and ... stringsNow like the ... of impetuous fire,Which shakes the forest with its murmurings,Now like the rush of the aereal wingsOf the enamoured wind among the treen,Whispering unimaginable things,And dying on the streams of dew serene,Which feed the unmown meads with ever-during green.
And the green Paradise which western wavesEmbosom in their ever-wailing sweep,Talking of freedom to their tongueless caves,Or to the spirits which within them keepA record of the wrongs which, though they sleep,Die not, but dream of retribution, heardHis hymns, and echoing them from steep to steep,Kept--
And then came one of sweet and earnest looks,Whose soft smiles to his dark and night-like eyesWere as the clear and ever-living brooksAre to the obscure fountains whence they rise,Showing how pure they are: a ParadiseOf happy truth upon his forehead lowLay, making wisdom lovely, in the guiseOf earth-awakening morn upon the browOf star-deserted heaven, while ocean gleams below.
His song, though very sweet, was low and faint,A simple strain--
A mighty Phantasm, half concealedIn darkness of his own exceeding light,Which clothed his awful presence unrevealed,Charioted on the ... nightOf thunder-smoke, whose skirts were chrysolite.
And like a sudden meteor, which outstripsThe splendour-winged chariot of the sun,... eclipseThe armies of the golden stars, each onePavilioned in its tent of light--all strewnOver the chasms of blue night--
Words in this poem
- went n.
- Course; way; path; journey; direction.
- treen a.
- Made of wood; wooden. [AS. treówen.]
- embosom v. t.
- To take into, or place in, the bosom; to cherish; to foster. [Written also imbosom.]
- tongueless a.
- Having no tongue.
- morn n.
- The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
- splendour n.
- Great brightness; brilliant luster; brilliancy; as, the splendor ot the sun. B. Jonson. [L. fr. splendere to shine: cf. F. splendeur.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Cancelled Passages of Adonais is 39 lines in 6 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 87%). 91% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.3 syllables. 4 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 46% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABABBCBCC lyreA · stringsB · fireA · murmuringsB · wingsB · treenC · thingsB · sereneC · greenC
- 2 ABABB-B- wavesA · sweepB · cavesA · keepB · sleepB · heard · steepB · kept
- 3 ABAB-CB-C looksA · eyesB · brooksA · riseB · paradise · lowC · guiseB · brow · belowC
- 5 ABABB concealedA · lightB · unrevealedA · nightB · chrysoliteB
- 6 ABAB-- outstripsA · sunB · eclipseA · oneB · strewn · night
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| And ever as he went he swept a lyre | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| Of unaccustomed shape, and ... strings | 9 | ··˘/˘˘··· |
| Now like the ... of impetuous fire, | 9 | ····˘/˘/˘ |
| Which shakes the forest with its murmurings, | 10 | ···/˘··/˘˘ |
| Now like the rush of the aereal wings | 9 | ········· |
| Of the enamoured wind among the treen, | 10 | ··˘/˘····· |
| Whispering unimaginable things, | 10 | /˘˘·˘/˘˘˘· |
| And dying on the streams of dew serene, | 10 | ·/˘·····˘/ |
| Which feed the unmown meads with ever-during green. | 11 | ·······//˘· |
| And the green Paradise which western waves | 10 | ···/˘··/˘· |
| Embosom in their ever-wailing sweep, | 10 | ˘/˘··/˘/˘· |
| Talking of freedom to their tongueless caves, | 10 | /˘·/˘··/˘· |
| Or to the spirits which within them keep | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| A record of the wrongs which, though they sleep, | 10 | ·˘/······· |
| Die not, but dream of retribution, heard | 10 | ······˘/˘· |
| His hymns, and echoing them from steep to steep, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| Kept-- | 1 | · |
| And then came one of sweet and earnest looks, | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| Whose soft smiles to his dark and night-like eyes | 10 | ·········· |
| Were as the clear and ever-living brooks | 10 | ·····/˘/˘· |
| Are to the obscure fountains whence they rise, | 10 | ···˘//˘··· |
| Showing how pure they are: a Paradise | 10 | /˘·····/˘· |
| Of happy truth upon his forehead low | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Lay, making wisdom lovely, in the guise | 10 | ·/˘/˘/˘··· |
| Of earth-awakening morn upon the brow | 10 | ··˘/˘····· |
| Of star-deserted heaven, while ocean gleams below. | 11 | ··˘/˘/·/··· |
| His song, though very sweet, was low and faint, | 10 | ···/˘····· |
| A simple strain-- | 4 | ·/˘· |
| A mighty Phantasm, half concealed | 10 | ·/˘·/˘·˘/˘ |
| In darkness of his own exceeding light, | 10 | ·/˘···˘/˘· |
| Which clothed his awful presence unrevealed, | 10 | ···/˘/˘··· |
| Charioted on the ... night | 7 | /˘˘˘··· |
| Of thunder-smoke, whose skirts were chrysolite. | 10 | ·/˘····/˘˘ |
| And like a sudden meteor, which outstrips | 10 | ···/˘/˘·˘/ |
| The splendour-winged chariot of the sun, | 10 | ·/˘·/˘˘··· |
| ... eclipse | 2 | ˘/ |
| The armies of the golden stars, each one | 10 | ·/˘··/˘··· |
| Pavilioned in its tent of light--all strewn | 10 | ˘/˘······· |
| Over the chasms of blue night-- | 8 | ···/˘··· |
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