The Birth of Pleasure

Percy Bysshe Shelley (1792–1822) · 1816–1819

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 14 lines · from The Complete Poetical Works, Volume II

At the creation of the EarthPleasure, that divinest birth,From the soil of Heaven did rise,Wrapped in sweet wild melodies--Like an exhalation wreathingTo the sound of air low-breathingThrough Aeolian pines, which makeA shade and shelter to the lakeWhence it rises soft and slow;Her life-breathing [limbs] did flowIn the harmony divineOf an ever-lengthening lineWhich enwrapped her perfect formWith a beauty clear and warm.

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Form and metre

The Birth of Pleasure is 14 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets, 86% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 82%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.4 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 64% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB--CCDDEEFF earthA · birthA · riseB · melodiesB · wreathing · breathing · makeC · lakeC · slowD · flowD · divineE · lineE · formF · warmF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
At the creation of the Earth8··˘/˘···
Pleasure, that divinest birth,7/˘·˘/˘·
From the soil of Heaven did rise,8····/˘··
Wrapped in sweet wild melodies--7····/˘˘
Like an exhalation wreathing8···˘/˘/˘
To the sound of air low-breathing8······/˘
Through Aeolian pines, which make6······
A shade and shelter to the lake8···/˘···
Whence it rises soft and slow;7··/˘···
Her life-breathing [limbs] did flow7··/˘···
In the harmony divine7··/˘˘˘/
Of an ever-lengthening line8··/˘/˘˘·
Which enwrapped her perfect form7····˘/·
With a beauty clear and warm.7··/˘···

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