Book III

Anna Seward (1742–1809) · 1799

iambic tetrameter · AABCCB · 41 lines · from Original Sonnets on Various Subjects

Now had you drank cold Tanais' wave,Whose streams the drear vale slowly lave,A barbarous Scythian's Bride,Your Lover braves the winds severe,That pierce his aching side.

O listen to the howling groves,That labour o'er your proud alcoves,And hear the jarring door!Mark how the star, at eve that rose,Has brightly glaz'd the settled snows,While every leaf is hoar!

Gay Venus hates this cold disdain;--Cease then its rigors to maintain,That sprightly joys impede,Lest the strain'd cord, with which you bindThe freedom of my amorous mind,In rapid whirl recede!

Born of a jocund Tuscan Sire,Did he transmit his ardent fireThat, like Ulysses' Queen,His beauteous Daughter still should proveRelentless to the sighs of Love,With frozen heart and mien?--

If nor blue cheek of shivering Swain,Nor yet his richest gifts obtainYour smile, and soft'ning brow;Nor if a faithless Husband's rageFor a gay Syren of the stage,And broken nuptial vow;

If weak e'en Jealousy should proveTo bend your heart to truer love,Yet pity these my pains,O Nymph, than oaks more hard, and fierceAs snakes, that Afric's thickets pierce,Those terrors of the plains!

When heavy falls the pattering shower,And streaming spouts their torrents pourUpon my shrinking head,Not always shall wild Love commandThese limbs obsequiously to standBeneath your dropping shed.

Words in this poem

drank n.
Wild oats, or darnel grass. See Drake a plant. [Cf. 3d Drake.]
drear n.
Sadness; dismalness.
vale n.
A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
lave v. t.
To lade, dip, or pour out. [OE. laven. See Lavish.]
aching a.
That aches; continuously painful. See Ache.
jarring a.
Shaking; disturbing; discordant. [See Jar.]
hoar v. t.
To become moldy or musty. [AS. harian to grow gray.]
jocund
Merry; cheerful; gay; airy; lively; sportive. [L. jocundus, jucundus, orig., helpful, fr. juvare to help. See Aid.]
sire n.
A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
beauteous a.
Full of beauty; beautiful; very handsome. [Mostly poetic] -- Beau"te*ous*ly, adv. --
relentless a.
Unmoved by appeals for sympathy or forgiveness; insensible to the distresses of others; destitute of tenderness; unrelenting; unyielding; unpitying; as, a prey to relentless despotism.
streaming a.
Sending forth streams.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Book III is in the public domain. This text is taken from Original sonnets on various subjects; and odes paraphrased from Horace, Project Gutenberg ebook #27663; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Anna Seward, Book III, in Original Sonnets on Various Subjects (1799), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #27663, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/seward-sonnets/book-iii.html, id L09838.

Form and metre

Book III is 41 lines in 7 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is AABCCB, complete in 5 of its 7 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.6 syllables. 3 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 24% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AAB-B waveA · laveA · brideB · severe · sideB
  2. 2 AABCCB grovesA · alcovesA · doorB · roseC · snowsC · hoarB
  3. 3 AABCCB disdainA · maintainA · impedeB · bindC · mindC · recedeB
  4. 4 AABCCB sireA · fireA · queenB · proveC · loveC · mienB
  5. 5 AABCCB swainA · obtainA · browB · rageC · stageC · vowB
  6. 6 AABCCB proveA · loveA · painsB · fierceC · pierceC · plainsB
  7. 7 --ABBA shower · pour · headA · commandB · standB · shedA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Now had you drank cold Tanais' wave,8········
Whose streams the drear vale slowly lave,8·····/˘·
A barbarous Scythian's Bride,8·/˘˘/˘˘·
Your Lover braves the winds severe,8·/˘···˘/
That pierce his aching side.6···/˘·
O listen to the howling groves,8·/˘··/˘·
That labour o'er your proud alcoves,8·/˘···/·
And hear the jarring door!6···/˘·
Mark how the star, at eve that rose,8········
Has brightly glaz'd the settled snows,9·/˘··/˘˘·
While every leaf is hoar!7·/˘˘···
Gay Venus hates this cold disdain;--8·/˘···˘/
Cease then its rigors to maintain,8···/˘·˘/
That sprightly joys impede,6·/˘·˘/
Lest the strain'd cord, with which you bind8········
The freedom of my amorous mind,9·/˘··/˘˘·
In rapid whirl recede!6·/˘·˘/
Born of a jocund Tuscan Sire,9···/˘/˘/˘
Did he transmit his ardent fire9··˘/·/˘/˘
That, like Ulysses' Queen,6··˘/˘·
His beauteous Daughter still should prove9·/˘˘/˘···
Relentless to the sighs of Love,8˘/˘·····
With frozen heart and mien?--6·/˘···
If nor blue cheek of shivering Swain,9·····/˘˘·
Nor yet his richest gifts obtain8···/˘·˘/
Your smile, and soft'ning brow;6······
Nor if a faithless Husband's rage8···/˘/˘·
For a gay Syren of the stage,8···/˘···
And broken nuptial vow;6·/˘/˘·
If weak e'en Jealousy should prove8···/˘˘··
To bend your heart to truer love,8·····/˘·
Yet pity these my pains,6·/˘···
O Nymph, than oaks more hard, and fierce8········
As snakes, that Afric's thickets pierce,8·····/˘·
Those terrors of the plains!6·/˘···
When heavy falls the pattering shower,10·/˘··/˘˘/˘
And streaming spouts their torrents pour8·/˘··/˘·
Upon my shrinking head,6···/˘·
Not always shall wild Love command8·/····˘/
These limbs obsequiously to stand9··˘/˘˘˘··
Beneath your dropping shed.6···/˘·

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