Maktoob
A shell surprised our post one dayAnd killed a comrade at my side.My heart was sick to see the wayHe suffered as he died.
I dug about the place he fell,And found, no bigger than my thumb,A fragment of the splintered shellIn warm aluminum.
I melted it, and made a mould,And poured it in the opening,And worked it, when the cast was cold,Into a shapely ring.
And when my ring was smooth and bright,Holding it on a rounded stick,For seal, I bade a Turco write'Maktoob' in Arabic.
'Maktoob!' "'Tis written!" . . . So they think,These children of the desert, whoFrom its immense expanses drinkSome of its grandeur too.
Within the book of Destiny,Whose leaves are time, whose cover, space,The day when you shall cease to be,The hour, the mode, the place,
Are marked, they say; and you shall notBy taking thought or using witAlter that certain fate one jot,Postpone or conjure it.
Learn to drive fear, then, from your heart.If you must perish, know, O man,'Tis an inevitable partOf the predestined plan.
And, seeing that through the ebon doorOnce only you may pass, and meetOf those that have gone through beforeThe mighty, the elite ----
Guard that not bowed nor blanched with fearYou enter, but serene, erect,As you would wish most to appearTo those you most respect.
So die as though your funeralUshered you through the doors that ledInto a stately banquet hallWhere heroes banqueted;
And it shall all depend thereinWhether you come as slave or lord,If they acclaim you as their kinOr spurn you from their board.
So, when the order comes: "Attack!"And the assaulting wave deploys,And the heart trembles to look backOn life and all its joys;
Or in a ditch that they seem nearTo find, and round your shallow troughDrop the big shells that you can hearComing a half mile off;
When, not to hear, some try to talk,And some to clean their guns, or sing,And some dig deeper in the chalk --I look upon my ring:
And nerves relax that were most tense,And Death comes whistling down unheard,As I consider all the senseHeld in that mystic word.
And it brings, quieting like balmMy heart whose flutterings have ceased,The resignation and the calmAnd wisdom of the East.
Words in this poem
- bigger a.
- , compar. of Big.
- mould n.
- Crumbling, soft, friable earth; esp., earth containing the remains or constituents of organic matter, and suited to the growth of plants; soil. [OE. molde, AS. molde; akin to D. mul, G. mull, mulm, OHG. molt, molta, Icel. mold, Dan. muld, Sw. mull, Goth. mulda, and E. meal flour. See Meal, and cf. Mole a]
- shapely a.
- Well-formed; having a regular shape; comely; symmetrical. T.
- bade
- A form of the pat tense of Bid.
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- conjure v. t.
- To call on or summon by a sacred name or in solemn manner; to implore earnestly; to adjure. [F. conjurer, fr. L. conjurare to swear together, to conspire; con- + jurare to swear. See Jury.]
- ebon a.
- Consisting of ebony.
- elite n.
- A choice or select body; the flower; as, the élite of society. [F., fr. élire to choose, L. eligere. See Elect.]
- acclaim v. i.
- To shout applause.
- spurn v. t.
- To drive back or away, as with the foot; to kick. [OE. spurnen to kick against, to stumble over, AS. spurnan to kick, offend; akin to spura spur, OS. & OHG. spurnan to kick, Icel. spyrna, L. spernere to despise,]
- unheard a.
- Not heard; not perceived by the ear; as, words unheard by those present.
- resignation n.
- The act of resigning or giving up, as a claim, possession, office, or the like; surrender; as, the resignation of a crown or comission. [F. résignation. See Resign.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Maktoob is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #617; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Alan Seeger, Maktoob, in Poems (1916), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #617, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/seeger-poems/maktoob.html, id L12976.
Form and metre
Maktoob is 68 lines in 17 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes ABAB. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%). 92% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 7.7 syllables. 7 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 38% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABAB dayA · sideB · wayA · diedB
- 2 ABAB fellA · thumbB · shellA · aluminumB
- 3 ABAB mouldA · openingB · coldA · ringB
- 4 ABAB brightA · stickB · writeA · arabicB
- 5 ABAB thinkA · whoB · drinkA · tooB
- 6 ABAB destinyA · spaceB · beA · placeB
- 7 ABAB notA · witB · jotA · itB
- 8 ABAB heartA · manB · partA · planB
- 9 ABAB doorA · meetB · beforeA · eliteB
- 10 ABAB fearA · erectB · appearA · respectB
- 11 ABAB funeralA · ledB · hallA · banquetedB
- 12 ABAB thereinA · lordB · kinA · boardB
- 13 ABAB attackA · deploysB · backA · joysB
- 14 ABAB nearA · troughB · hearA · offB
- 15 ABAB talkA · singB · chalkA · ringB
- 16 ABAB tenseA · unheardB · senseA · wordB
- 17 ABAB balmA · ceasedB · calmA · eastB
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| A shell surprised our post one day | 8 | ··˘//··· |
| And killed a comrade at my side. | 8 | ···/···· |
| My heart was sick to see the way | 8 | ········ |
| He suffered as he died. | 7 | ·/˘˘··· |
| I dug about the place he fell, | 8 | ········ |
| And found, no bigger than my thumb, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| A fragment of the splintered shell | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| In warm aluminum. | 6 | ··˘/˘˘ |
| I melted it, and made a mould, | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| And poured it in the opening, | 8 | ·····/˘˘ |
| And worked it, when the cast was cold, | 8 | ········ |
| Into a shapely ring. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And when my ring was smooth and bright, | 8 | ········ |
| Holding it on a rounded stick, | 8 | /˘···/˘· |
| For seal, I bade a Turco write | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| 'Maktoob' in Arabic. | 6 | ···/˘˘ |
| 'Maktoob!' "'Tis written!" . . . So they think, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| These children of the desert, who | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| From its immense expanses drink | 8 | ··˘/˘/˘· |
| Some of its grandeur too. | 6 | ···˘/· |
| Within the book of Destiny, | 8 | ·····/˘˘ |
| Whose leaves are time, whose cover, space, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| The day when you shall cease to be, | 8 | ········ |
| The hour, the mode, the place, | 7 | ·/˘···· |
| Are marked, they say; and you shall not | 8 | ········ |
| By taking thought or using wit | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Alter that certain fate one jot, | 8 | /˘·/˘··· |
| Postpone or conjure it. | 6 | ˘/·/˘· |
| Learn to drive fear, then, from your heart. | 8 | ········ |
| If you must perish, know, O man, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| 'Tis an inevitable part | 8 | ··˘/˘˘˘· |
| Of the predestined plan. | 7 | ···/˘˘· |
| And, seeing that through the ebon door | 8 | ·/···/˘· |
| Once only you may pass, and meet | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Of those that have gone through before | 8 | ········ |
| The mighty, the elite ---- | 6 | ·/˘·˘/ |
| Guard that not bowed nor blanched with fear | 8 | ········ |
| You enter, but serene, erect, | 8 | ·/˘·˘/˘/ |
| As you would wish most to appear | 8 | ······˘/ |
| To those you most respect. | 6 | ····˘/ |
| So die as though your funeral | 8 | ·····/˘˘ |
| Ushered you through the doors that led | 8 | /˘······ |
| Into a stately banquet hall | 8 | ···/˘/˘· |
| Where heroes banqueted; | 6 | ·/˘/˘˘ |
| And it shall all depend therein | 8 | ····˘/·· |
| Whether you come as slave or lord, | 8 | ········ |
| If they acclaim you as their kin | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| Or spurn you from their board. | 6 | ······ |
| So, when the order comes: "Attack!" | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| And the assaulting wave deploys, | 8 | ··˘/˘·˘/ |
| And the heart trembles to look back | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| On life and all its joys; | 6 | ······ |
| Or in a ditch that they seem near | 8 | ········ |
| To find, and round your shallow trough | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Drop the big shells that you can hear | 8 | ········ |
| Coming a half mile off; | 6 | /˘···· |
| When, not to hear, some try to talk, | 8 | ········ |
| And some to clean their guns, or sing, | 8 | ········ |
| And some dig deeper in the chalk -- | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| I look upon my ring: | 6 | ······ |
| And nerves relax that were most tense, | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| And Death comes whistling down unheard, | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| As I consider all the sense | 8 | ··˘/˘··· |
| Held in that mystic word. | 6 | ···/˘· |
| And it brings, quieting like balm | 8 | ···/˘˘·· |
| My heart whose flutterings have ceased, | 8 | ···/˘˘·· |
| The resignation and the calm | 8 | ··˘/˘··· |
| And wisdom of the East. | 6 | ·/˘··· |
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