The Redeemer

Siegfried Sassoon (1886–1967) · 1919

iambic pentameter · ABABBCCDD · 36 lines · from The War Poems

Darkness: the rain sluiced down; the mire was deep;It was past twelve on a mid-winter night,When peaceful folk in beds lay snug asleep:There, with much work to do before the light,We lugged our clay-sucked boots as best we mightAlong the trench; sometimes a bullet sang,And droning shells burst with a hollow bang;We were soaked, chilled and wretched, every one.Darkness: the distant wink of a huge gun.

I turned in the black ditch, loathing the storm;A rocket fizzed and burned with blanching flare,And lit the face of what had been a formFloundering in mirk. He stood before me there;I say that he was Christ; stiff in the glare,And leaning forward from his burdening task,Both arms supporting it; his eyes on mineStared from the woeful head that seemed a maskOf mortal pain in Hell's unholy shine.

No thorny crown, only a woollen capHe wore--an English soldier, white and strong,Who loved his time like any simple chap,Good days of work and sport and homely song;Now he has learned that nights are very long,And dawn a watching of the windowed sky.But to the end, unjudging, he'll endureHorror ancf pain, not uncontent to dieThat Lancaster on Lune may stand secure.

He faced me, reeling in his weariness,Shouldering his load of planks, so hard to bear.I say that he was Christ, who wrought to blessAll groping things with freedom bright as air,And with His mercy washed and made them fair.Then the flame sank, and all grew black as pitch,While we began to struggle along the ditch;And some one flung his burden in the muck,Mumbling: "O Christ Almighty, now I'm stuck!"

Words in this poem

folk n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]
chilled a.
Hardened on the surface or edge by chilling; as, chilled iron; a chilled wheel.
flare v. i.
To burn with an unsteady or waving flame; as, the candle flares. [Cf. Norw. flara to blaze, flame, adorn with tinsel, dial. Sw. flasa upp, and E. flash, or flacker.]
mirk a.
Dark; gloomy; murky. Spenser. Mrs. Browning. [See Murky.]
glare v. i.
To shine with a bright, dazzling light. [OE. glaren, gloren; cf. AS. glær amber, LG. glaren to glow or burn like coals, D. gloren to glimmer; prob. akin to E. glass.]
unholy a.
Not holy; unhallowed; not consecrated; hence, profane; wicked; impious.
homely a.
Belonging to, or having the characteristics of, home; domestic; familiar; intimate. [From Home, n.]
windowed a.
Having windows or openings.
lune n.
Anything in the shape of a half moon. [L. luna moon: cf. F. lune. See Luna.]
mumbling a.
Low; indistinct; inarticulate.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Redeemer is in the public domain. This text is taken from The War Poems of Siegfried Sassoon, Project Gutenberg ebook #45199; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

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Form and metre

The Redeemer is 36 lines in 4 stanzas of 9 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABBCCDD, complete in 2 of its 4 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 95% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 10.0 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 22% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABBCCDD deepA · nightB · asleepA · lightB · mightB · sangC · bangC · oneD · gunD
  2. 2 ABABBCDCD stormA · flareB · formA · thereB · glareB · taskC · mineD · maskC · shineD
  3. 3 ABABBCDCD capA · strongB · chapA · songB · longB · skyC · endureD · dieC · secureD
  4. 4 ABABBCCDD wearinessA · bearB · blessA · airB · fairB · pitchC · ditchC · muckD · stuckD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Darkness: the rain sluiced down; the mire was deep;10/˘········
It was past twelve on a mid-winter night,10·······/˘·
When peaceful folk in beds lay snug asleep:10·/˘·····˘/
There, with much work to do before the light,10··········
We lugged our clay-sucked boots as best we might10··/·······
Along the trench; sometimes a bullet sang,10˘/··˘/·/˘·
And droning shells burst with a hollow bang;10·/˘····/˘·
We were soaked, chilled and wretched, every one.10·····/˘/˘·
Darkness: the distant wink of a huge gun.10/˘·/˘·····
I turned in the black ditch, loathing the storm;10······/˘··
A rocket fizzed and burned with blanching flare,10·/˘····/˘·
And lit the face of what had been a form10··········
Floundering in mirk. He stood before me there;10/˘········
I say that he was Christ; stiff in the glare,10··········
And leaning forward from his burdening task,10·/˘/˘··/˘·
Both arms supporting it; his eyes on mine10··˘/˘·····
Stared from the woeful head that seemed a mask10···/˘·····
Of mortal pain in Hell's unholy shine.10·/˘···˘/˘·
No thorny crown, only a woollen cap10·/˘·/˘·/˘·
He wore--an English soldier, white and strong,10···/˘/˘···
Who loved his time like any simple chap,10·····/˘/˘·
Good days of work and sport and homely song;10·······/˘·
Now he has learned that nights are very long,10·······/˘·
And dawn a watching of the windowed sky.10···/˘··/˘·
But to the end, unjudging, he'll endure10········˘/
Horror ancf pain, not uncontent to die10/˘········
That Lancaster on Lune may stand secure.10·/˘˘····˘/
He faced me, reeling in his weariness,10···/˘··/˘˘
Shouldering his load of planks, so hard to bear.10/˘········
I say that he was Christ, who wrought to bless10··········
All groping things with freedom bright as air,10·/˘··/˘···
And with His mercy washed and made them fair.10···/˘·····
Then the flame sank, and all grew black as pitch,10··········
While we began to struggle along the ditch;11··˘/·/˘˘/··
And some one flung his burden in the muck,10·····/˘···
Mumbling: "O Christ Almighty, now I'm stuck!"10/˘··˘/˘···

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