Fragment 54 with 53, tr. M. J. Walhouse

Sappho (630 BC–570 BC), translated by Various (ed. H. T. Wharton) · 1908

iambic tetrameter · 6 lines · from Sappho: Selected Renderings

Then, as the broad moon rose on high,The maidens stood the altar nigh;And some in graceful measureThe well-loved spot danced round,With lightsome footsteps treadingThe soft and grassy ground.

Words in this poem

lightsome a.
Having light; lighted; not dark or gloomy; bright.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Fragment 54 with 53, tr. M. J. Walhouse is in the public domain. This text is taken from Sappho: Memoir, Text, Selected Renderings, and a Literal Translation (ed. Henry Thornton Wharton, John Lane, 1908, fifth edition), Project Gutenberg ebook #57390, the Various (ed. H. T. Wharton) translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Sappho, Fragment 54 with 53, tr. M. J. Walhouse, in Sappho: Selected Renderings (1908), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #57390, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sappho-wharton/fr-54.html, id L29184.

Form and metre

Fragment 54 with 53, tr. M. J. Walhouse is 6 lines in a single stanza. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 94%).

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA-B-B highA · nighA · measure · roundB · treading · groundB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Then, as the broad moon rose on high,8········
The maidens stood the altar nigh;8·/˘··/˘·
And some in graceful measure7···/˘/˘
The well-loved spot danced round,8···˘··˘·
With lightsome footsteps treading7·/˘/·/˘
The soft and grassy ground.6···/˘·

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