Moonset

Carl Sandburg (1878–1967) · 1918

iambic tetrameter · 5 lines · from Cornhuskers

Leaves of poplars pick Japanese prints against the west.Moon sand on the canal doubles the changing pictures.The moon's good-by ends pictures.The west is empty. All else is empty. No moon-talk at all now.Only dark listening to dark.

About this text

Moonset is in the public domain. This text is taken from Cornhuskers, Wikisource; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Carl Sandburg, Moonset, in Cornhuskers (1918), text of Wikisource, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sandburg-cornhuskers/moonset.html, id L29079.

Form and metre

Moonset is 5 lines in a single stanza. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter.

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 -AA-- west · picturesA · picturesA · now · dark
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Leaves of poplars pick Japanese prints against the west.13··/˘··˘/·····
Moon sand on the canal doubles the changing pictures.13····˘//˘·/˘/˘
The moon's good-by ends pictures.7·····/˘
The west is empty. All else is empty. No moon-talk at all now.16···/˘···/˘······
Only dark listening to dark.8/˘·/˘˘··

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