Loam

Carl Sandburg (1878–1967) · 1918

iambic trimeter · 14 lines · from Cornhuskers

In the loam we sleep,In the cool moist loam,To the lull of years that passAnd the break of stars,

From the loam, then,The soft warm loam,We rise:To shape of rose leaf,Of face and shoulder.

We stand, then,To a whiff of life,Lifted to the silver of the sunOver and out of the loamA day.

Words in this poem

lull v. t.
To cause to rest by soothing influences; to compose; to calm; to soothe; to quiet. [Akin to OD. lullen to sing to sleep, G. lullen, Dan. lulle, Sw. lulla; all of imitative origin. Cf. Loll, Lollard.]
whiff n.
A sudden expulsion of air from the mouth; a quick puff or slight gust, as of air or smoke. [OE. weffe vapor, whiff, probably of imitative origin; cf. Dan. vift a puff, gust, W. chwiff a whiff, puff.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Loam is in the public domain. This text is taken from Cornhuskers, Wikisource; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Carl Sandburg, Loam, in Cornhuskers (1918), text of Wikisource, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sandburg-cornhuskers/loam.html, id L29015.

Form and metre

Loam is 14 lines in 3 stanzas. The metre is iambic trimeter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 88%).

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic trimeter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
In the loam we sleep,5·····
In the cool moist loam,5·····
To the lull of years that pass7·······
And the break of stars,5·····
From the loam, then,4····
The soft warm loam,4····
We rise:2··
To shape of rose leaf,5·····
Of face and shoulder.5···/˘
We stand, then,3···
To a whiff of life,5·····
Lifted to the silver of the sun9/˘··/˘···
Over and out of the loam7·······
A day.2··

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