Hits and Runs

Carl Sandburg (1878–1967) · 1918

iambic tetrameter · 3 lines · from Cornhuskers

I remember the Chillicothe ball players grappling the Rock Island ball players in a sixteen-inning game ended by darkness.And the shoulders of the Chillicothe players were a red smoke against the sundown and the shoulders of the Rock Island players were a yellow smoke against the sundown.And the umpire's voice was hoarse calling balls and strikes and outs and the umpire's throat fought in the dust for a song.

Words in this poem

sundown n.
The setting of the sun; sunset.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Hits and Runs is in the public domain. This text is taken from Cornhuskers, Wikisource; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Carl Sandburg, Hits and Runs, in Cornhuskers (1918), text of Wikisource, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/sandburg-cornhuskers/hits-and-runs.html, id L29004.

Form and metre

Hits and Runs is 3 lines in a single stanza. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic tetrameter.

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Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I remember the Chillicothe ball players grappling the Rock Island ball players in a sixteen-inning game ended by darkness.32·˘/˘·/˘˘·/˘/˘··/˘·/˘··˘//˘·/˘·/˘
And the shoulders of the Chillicothe players were a red smoke against the sundown and the shoulders of the Rock Island players were a yellow smoke against the sundown.41··/˘··/˘˘/˘·······/···/˘···/˘/˘··/˘····/·
And the umpire's voice was hoarse calling balls and strikes and outs and the umpire's throat fought in the dust for a song.28··/·˘···/˘·······/·˘········

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