Chapter VIII: On Thanks
I cANNoT find words to give thanks to the Friend !For to suitably thank Him, I do not pretend.Ev'ry hair on my body's a gift from Him, free ;How can I give thanks for each hair that may be?All praise to the bountiful Maker, I sing !Who caused, out of nothing, His servant to spring!Who with power to praise His great kindness is graced?For His praises are all in His splendour embraced !The Creator who fashioned from clay all mankind,Gives spirit and wisdom and reason and mind ;From the loins of your father as far as the grave,See what presents He from the Unseen to you gave !Since clean He created you, wise and pure stay !For a shame it would be to return foul to clay !Incessantly wipe from a mirror the dust ;For it takes not a polish when eaten by rust!Were you not liquid semen when first you began?From your head cast conceit, if you claim to be man !When you earn by your labour your daily supply,On the strength of your arm do not, therefore, rely!The Lord, oh self-server ! why do you not see?Who can bring into motion your hand, except He?When good by your energy comes into view,To the favour of God, not your efforts, 'tis due.No person has carried the ball off by force;Give thanks unto God! of all favour the source.On foot, you are pow'rless to stand up alone ;Invisible aid ev'ry moment is shown.Was your tongue not from speaking in infancy tied?Through the navel your inside with food was supplied;When they stopped the supply and divided the string,To the breast of the mother your hand had to cling.To a stranger afflicted with sickness by time,They give water to cure from his own native clime.Hence the babe in the belly got nourishment good,And obtained, through the tube of the stomach, his food.The mother's two breasts which to-day he adores,Are likewise two fountains from God's endless stores.A Heav'n are a good mother's bosom and lap ;In the bosom a fountain of milk is the pap.Her life-rearing stature resembles a tree,And the son a choice fruit on her breast, you can see.Do the veins of the nipples not reach to the heart?Of the heart's blood, observe how the milk is a part!His teeth in her blood, like a lancet, he sunk ;Him, the Lord made her love, who her life's blood had drunk.When his arm becomes strong and his teeth stout appear,On her nipples the nurse bitter aloes must smear.To this aloes and milk he is so disinclined,That desire for the sweet nipple fades from his mind.Oh you, too, a penitent child of the way !By Patience your sins in oblivion you lay.
Words in this poem
- thank n.
- A expression of gratitude; an acknowledgment expressive of a sense of favor or kindness received; obligation, claim, or desert, or gratitude; -- now generally used in the plural. [AS. Þanc, Þonc, thanks, favor, thought; akin to OS. thank favor, pleasure, thanks, D. & G. dank thanks, Icel. Þ\'94kk, Dan. tak, Sw. tack, Goth. Þagks thanks; -]
- bountiful a.
- Free in giving; liberal in bestowing gifts and favors.
- graced a.
- Endowed with grace; beautiful; full of graces; honorable.
- splendour n.
- Great brightness; brilliant luster; brilliancy; as, the splendor ot the sun. B. Jonson. [L. fr. splendere to shine: cf. F. splendeur.]
- unseen a.
- Not seen or discovered.
- incessantly adv.
- Unceasingly; continually.
- favour n.
- Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]
- clime n.
- A climate; a tract or region of the earth. See Climate. [L. clima. See Climate.]
- babe n.
- An infant; a young child of either sex; a baby. [Cf. Ir. bab, baban, W. baban, maban.]
- lancet n.
- A surgical instrument of various forms, commonly sharp-pointed and two-edged, used in venesection, and in opening abscesses, etc. [F. lancette, dim. of lance lance. See Lance.]
- oblivion n.
- The act of forgetting, or the state of being forgotten; cessation of remembrance; forgetfulness. [L. oblivio, akin to oblivisci to forget: cf. OF. oblivion.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Chapter VIII: On Thanks is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VIII: On Thanks, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/8-1.html, id L29719.
Form and metre
Chapter VIII: On Thanks is 52 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 94%).
See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in anapaestic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQRRSSTTUUVVWWXXYYZZ friendA · pretendA · freeB · beB · singC · springC · gracedD · embracedD · mankindE · mindE · graveF · gaveF · stayG · clayG · dustH · rustH · beganI · manI · supplyJ · relyJ · seeK · heK · viewL · dueL · forceM · sourceM · aloneN · shownN · tiedO · suppliedO · stringP · clingP · timeQ · climeQ · goodR · foodR · adoresS · storesS · lapT · papT · treeU · seeU · heartV · partV · sunkW · drunkW · appearX · smearX · disinclinedY · mindY · wayZ · layZ
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| I cANNoT find words to give thanks to the Friend ! | 11 | ·/˘········ |
| For to suitably thank Him, I do not pretend. | 12 | ··/˘˘·····˘/ |
| Ev'ry hair on my body's a gift from Him, free ; | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| How can I give thanks for each hair that may be? | 11 | ··········· |
| All praise to the bountiful Maker, I sing ! | 11 | ····/˘˘/˘·· |
| Who caused, out of nothing, His servant to spring! | 12 | ··˘··/˘·/˘·· |
| Who with power to praise His great kindness is graced? | 12 | ··/˘····/˘·· |
| For His praises are all in His splendour embraced ! | 12 | ··/˘····/˘˘/ |
| The Creator who fashioned from clay all mankind, | 12 | ·˘/˘·/˘···// |
| Gives spirit and wisdom and reason and mind ; | 11 | ·/˘·/˘·/˘·· |
| From the loins of your father as far as the grave, | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| See what presents He from the Unseen to you gave ! | 12 | ··/˘···˘/··· |
| Since clean He created you, wise and pure stay ! | 11 | ···˘/˘····· |
| For a shame it would be to return foul to clay ! | 12 | ·······˘/··· |
| Incessantly wipe from a mirror the dust ; | 11 | ˘/˘˘···/˘·· |
| For it takes not a polish when eaten by rust! | 12 | ·····/˘·/˘·· |
| Were you not liquid semen when first you began? | 12 | ···/˘/˘···˘/ |
| From your head cast conceit, if you claim to be man ! | 12 | ····˘/······ |
| When you earn by your labour your daily supply, | 12 | ·····/˘·/˘˘/ |
| On the strength of your arm do not, therefore, rely! | 12 | ··········˘/ |
| The Lord, oh self-server ! why do you not see? | 11 | ····/˘····· |
| Who can bring into motion your hand, except He? | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| When good by your energy comes into view, | 11 | ····/˘˘···· |
| To the favour of God, not your efforts, 'tis due. | 12 | ··/˘····/˘·· |
| No person has carried the ball off by force; | 11 | ·/˘·/˘····· |
| Give thanks unto God! of all favour the source. | 11 | ·······/˘·· |
| On foot, you are pow'rless to stand up alone ; | 11 | ·········˘/ |
| Invisible aid ev'ry moment is shown. | 11 | ˘/˘˘···/˘·· |
| Was your tongue not from speaking in infancy tied? | 12 | ·····/˘·/˘˘· |
| Through the navel your inside with food was supplied; | 12 | ··/˘·˘/···˘/ |
| When they stopped the supply and divided the string, | 12 | ····˘/·˘/˘·· |
| To the breast of the mother your hand had to cling. | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| To a stranger afflicted with sickness by time, | 12 | ··/˘˘/˘·/˘·· |
| They give water to cure from his own native clime. | 12 | ··/˘·····/˘· |
| Hence the babe in the belly got nourishment good, | 12 | ·····/˘·/˘˘· |
| And obtained, through the tube of the stomach, his food. | 12 | ·˘/·····/˘·· |
| The mother's two breasts which to-day he adores, | 11 | ·/˘······˘/ |
| Are likewise two fountains from God's endless stores. | 11 | ·/··/˘··/˘· |
| A Heav'n are a good mother's bosom and lap ; | 11 | ·····/˘/˘·· |
| In the bosom a fountain of milk is the pap. | 12 | ··/˘·/˘····· |
| Her life-rearing stature resembles a tree, | 11 | ··/˘/˘˘/˘·· |
| And the son a choice fruit on her breast, you can see. | 12 | ············ |
| Do the veins of the nipples not reach to the heart? | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| Of the heart's blood, observe how the milk is a part! | 12 | ····˘/······ |
| His teeth in her blood, like a lancet, he sunk ; | 11 | ·······/˘·· |
| Him, the Lord made her love, who her life's blood had drunk. | 12 | ············ |
| When his arm becomes strong and his teeth stout appear, | 12 | ···˘/·····˘/ |
| On her nipples the nurse bitter aloes must smear. | 12 | ··/˘··/˘/··· |
| To this aloes and milk he is so disinclined, | 12 | ··/·······˘/ |
| That desire for the sweet nipple fades from his mind. | 12 | ·˘/···/˘···· |
| Oh you, too, a penitent child of the way ! | 11 | ····/˘˘···· |
| By Patience your sins in oblivion you lay. | 12 | ·/˘···˘/˘˘·· |
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