Chapter VII: Story of the Slanderer's Reproof

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 12 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

Some resolute men, knowing God in their heart,Were seated, conversing together, apart.One among them began to revile and deride ;And in sland'ring a helpless one, ope'd the door wide.Another addressed him, " Oh prejudiced friend !Did you ever in war with crusaders contend?"He replied, " From behind the four walls that I own ;In my lifetime, a foot to the front I've not shown."The pure-hearted Dervish his answer thus gave:"I have never beheld such an infamous knave !For while infidels sit from his warring secure,Musalmans must his tongue's fiery venom endure !"

Words in this poem

deride v. t.
To laugh at with contempt; to laugh to scorn; to turn to ridicule or make sport of; to mock; to scoff at. [L. deridere, derisum; de- + rid to laugh. See Ridicule.]
lifetime n.
The time that life continues.
dervish n.
A Turkish or Persian monk, especially one who professes extreme poverty and leads an austere life. [Per. derw, fr. OPer. derew to beg, ask alms: cf. F. derviche.]
knave n.
A boy; especially, a boy servant. Wyclif. [OE., boy, servant, knave, AS. cnafa boy, youth; cf. AS. cnapa boy, youth, D. kna, G. knabe boy, knappe esquire, Icel. knapi, Sw. knape esquire, knäfvel knave.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VII: Story of the Slanderer's Reproof is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VII: Story of the Slanderer's Reproof, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/7-19.html, id L29702.

Form and metre

Chapter VII: Story of the Slanderer's Reproof is 12 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 96%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFF heartA · apartA · derideB · wideB · friendC · contendC · ownD · shownD · gaveE · knaveE · secureF · endureF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Some resolute men, knowing God in their heart,11·/˘··/˘····
Were seated, conversing together, apart.11·/˘˘/˘˘/˘˘/
One among them began to revile and deride ;12····˘/·˘/·˘/
And in sland'ring a helpless one, ope'd the door wide.12·····/˘·····
Another addressed him, " Oh prejudiced friend !12˘/˘˘/˘··/˘˘·
Did you ever in war with crusaders contend?"12··/˘···˘/˘˘/
He replied, " From behind the four walls that I own ;12·˘/·········
In my lifetime, a foot to the front I've not shown."12··/·········
The pure-hearted Dervish his answer thus gave:11··/˘/˘·/˘··
"I have never beheld such an infamous knave !12··/˘˘/··/˘˘·
For while infidels sit from his warring secure,12··/˘˘···/˘˘/
Musalmans must his tongue's fiery venom endure !"12······/˘/˘˘/

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