Chapter VII: Story of the Holy Man and the Youth

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 8 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

I have heard that among the religious, one hadIn pleasantry joked with a good-looking lad.The other good men, who in solitude dwell,Discussed in his absence his shortcomings well.This story at length with rapidity spread;To the man who was pious they told it; he said :" Do not rend a friend's cover, love-stricken in plight;Good humour's not wrong, nor is backbiting right!"

Words in this poem

dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
plight v. t.
To weave; to braid; to fold; to plait. [OE. pliten; probably through Old French, fr. LL. plectare, L. plectere. See Plait, Ply.]
backbiting n.
Secret slander; detraction.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter VII: Story of the Holy Man and the Youth is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter VII: Story of the Holy Man and the Youth, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/7-17.html, id L29700.

Form and metre

Chapter VII: Story of the Holy Man and the Youth is 8 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 95%).

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Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDD hadA · ladA · dwellB · wellB · spreadC · saidC · plightD · rightD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
I have heard that among the religious, one had12·······˘/˘··
In pleasantry joked with a good-looking lad.11·/˘˘····/˘·
The other good men, who in solitude dwell,11·/˘····/˘··
Discussed in his absence his shortcomings well.11˘/··/˘·/·˘·
This story at length with rapidity spread;11·/˘···˘/˘˘·
To the man who was pious they told it; he said :11·····/·····
" Do not rend a friend's cover, love-stricken in plight;12·····/˘·/˘··
Good humour's not wrong, nor is backbiting right!"11·/˘····/·˘·

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