Chapter V: Story of the Beggar and his Wife

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 18 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

A fortunate person, whose name was Bakhtyar,]Was exalted in rank and had wealth on a par.He alone possessed money and stores in the place ;All the others were poor and showed grief in their face.A woman presumed with her husband to fight,Because he came home empty-handed at night."Like you," she exclaimed, "there's no poor, blighted thing!Like the wasp, you are only possessed of a sting!From your neighbours some manliness try to acquire !For at any rate, I'm not a wife without hire.Gold and silver and property others possess;Why don't you, like them, smiling Fortune caress?"The pure-hearted man in a woollen robe dressed,Like a drum, brought a cry from his desolate breast :"No power have I over things that exist;With your fingers, the strong hand of Fate do not twist !On my hand of selecting, the Fates placed a bar,Else I'd have created myself a Bakhtyar."

Words in this poem

wealth n.
Weal; welfare; prosperity; good. [OE. welthe, from wele; cf. D. weelde luxury. See Weal prosperity.]
manliness n.
The quality or state of being manly.
caress n.
An act of endearment; any act or expression of affection; an embracing, or touching, with tenderness. [F. caresse, It. carezza, LL. caritia dearness, fr. L. carus dear. See Charity.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter V: Story of the Beggar and his Wife is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter V: Story of the Beggar and his Wife, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/5-9.html, id L29660.

Form and metre

Chapter V: Story of the Beggar and his Wife is 18 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHAA bakhtyarA · parA · placeB · faceB · fightC · nightC · thingD · stingD · acquireE · hireE · possessF · caressF · dressedG · breastG · existH · twistH · barA · bakhtyarA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
A fortunate person, whose name was Bakhtyar,]11·/˘˘/˘·····
Was exalted in rank and had wealth on a par.12·˘/˘········
He alone possessed money and stores in the place ;12·˘/˘//˘·····
All the others were poor and showed grief in their face.12··/˘········
A woman presumed with her husband to fight,11·/˘˘/··/˘··
Because he came home empty-handed at night.11·····/˘/˘··
"Like you," she exclaimed, "there's no poor, blighted thing!11···˘/···/˘·
Like the wasp, you are only possessed of a sting!12·····/˘˘/···
From your neighbours some manliness try to acquire !12··/˘·/˘˘··˘/
For at any rate, I'm not a wife without hire.12··/˘·······/
Gold and silver and property others possess;11··/˘·/˘/˘˘/
Why don't you, like them, smiling Fortune caress?"11·····/˘/˘˘/
The pure-hearted man in a woollen robe dressed,11··/˘···/˘··
Like a drum, brought a cry from his desolate breast :11········/˘·
"No power have I over things that exist;11·/˘······˘/
With your fingers, the strong hand of Fate do not twist !12··/˘········
On my hand of selecting, the Fates placed a bar,12····˘/˘·····
Else I'd have created myself a Bakhtyar."11···˘/˘·/···

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