Chapter V: Story of the Father Chastising his Son

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 6 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

With a stick an old man beat his son on the head ;"I am guiltless, oh father ! don't beat me ! " he said ;At the harshness of men I can weep before you ;But if you treat me harshly what then can I do?"The possessor of wisdom to God sends his cry,But does not complain of the Maker on high.

Words in this poem

guiltless a.
Free from guilt; innocent.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter V: Story of the Father Chastising his Son is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter V: Story of the Father Chastising his Son, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/5-8.html, id L29659.

Form and metre

Chapter V: Story of the Father Chastising his Son is 6 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCC headA · saidA · youB · doB · cryC · highC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
With a stick an old man beat his son on the head ;12············
"I am guiltless, oh father ! don't beat me ! " he said ;12··/˘·/˘·····
At the harshness of men I can weep before you ;12··/˘········
But if you treat me harshly what then can I do?"12·····/˘·····
The possessor of wisdom to God sends his cry,12·˘/˘·/˘·····
But does not complain of the Maker on high.11···˘/··/˘··

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