Chapter IV: Story of Omar, Commander of the Faithful

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 18 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

Saint Omar, I've heard, in a rough, narrow road,On a poor beggar's instep by accident trode.Who he was, the poor beggar distressed did not know,For a sufferer knows not a friend from a foe."You surely are blind !" in a passion, he cried.Saint Omar, the chief of the just, thus replied:"I'm not blind; yet a fault I've committed to-day,Without my intending ; forgive me ! I pray."What judges the chiefs of religion were then,Since they acted like this towards poor, subject men.In the man choosing wisdom, humility's found;The branch bearing fruit bends its head to the ground.Those who practise abasement are happy at last;The heads of the haughty from shame are downcast.If concerning the day of account you have fear,Overlook the defects of those dreading you here !By oppression, oh Brave ! make not subjects repine !For a hand, too, exists that is higher than thine.

Words in this poem

instep n.
The arched middle portion of the human foot next in front of the ankle joint.
trode n.
Tread; footing. [AS. trod, fr. tredan to tread. See Tread.]
sufferer n.
One who suffers; one who endures or undergoes suffering; one who sustains inconvenience or loss; as, sufferers by poverty or sickness; men are sufferers by fire or by losses at sea.
abasement n.
The act of abasing, humbling, or bringing low; the state of being abased or humbled; humiliation. [Cf. F. abaissement.]
haughty a.
High; lofty; bold. [OE. hautein, F. hautain, fr. haut high, OF. also halt, fr. L. altus. See Altitude.]
repine v. i.
To fail; to wane. [Pref. re- + pine to languish.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Chapter IV: Story of Omar, Commander of the Faithful is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter IV: Story of Omar, Commander of the Faithful, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/4-28.html, id L29649.

Form and metre

Chapter IV: Story of Omar, Commander of the Faithful is 18 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in anapaestic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHII roadA · trodeA · knowB · foeB · criedC · repliedC · dayD · prayD · thenE · menE · foundF · groundF · lastG · downcastG · fearH · hereH · repineI · thineI
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Saint Omar, I've heard, in a rough, narrow road,11·/˘·····/˘·
On a poor beggar's instep by accident trode.12···/˘/˘·/˘˘·
Who he was, the poor beggar distressed did not know,12·····/˘˘/···
For a sufferer knows not a friend from a foe.12··/˘˘·······
"You surely are blind !" in a passion, he cried.11·/˘····/˘··
Saint Omar, the chief of the just, thus replied:11·/˘······˘/
"I'm not blind; yet a fault I've committed to-day,12·······˘/˘··
Without my intending ; forgive me ! I pray."11···˘/˘˘/···
What judges the chiefs of religion were then,11·/˘···˘/˘··
Since they acted like this towards poor, subject men.12··/˘·····˘/·
In the man choosing wisdom, humility's found;12···/˘/˘˘/˘˘·
The branch bearing fruit bends its head to the ground.11··/˘·······
Those who practise abasement are happy at last;12··/˘˘/˘·/˘··
The heads of the haughty from shame are downcast.11····/˘···/·
If concerning the day of account you have fear,12·˘/˘···˘/···
Overlook the defects of those dreading you here !12/˘··/˘··/˘··
By oppression, oh Brave ! make not subjects repine !12·˘/˘····/˘˘/
For a hand, too, exists that is higher than thine.12····˘/··/˘··

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