Chapter X: On Prayer
LET us raise up our hands from our hearts unto God ;For, to-morrow, we can't raise them up from the sod!When the season of autumn arrives, you behold,That a tree remains leafless, because of the cold.It raises its destitute hands to implore,And does not retire without mercy in store.From the door that has never been shut, don't supposeThat he who has stretched forth his hand, hopeless goes.All practise devotion, the poor supplicate ;At the shrine of the Kind-to-the-poor, come and wait!So that like the nude branch we our hands may sustain,For we can't without means any longer remain.Oh, Lord! let Thy liberal glance on us rest !For the sins of Thy slaves have become manifest!Sin comes from the slaves who humility show,In the hope that the Lord will forgiveness bestow.Oh, Kind One! we're reared by Thy daily supplies !To Thy favour and gifts we're accustomed likewise !When a beggar meets favour and kindness of heart,From the heels of the giver he will not depart.Since we in this world are beloved in Thy view,We have hope of the same in Futurity, too.Esteem and disgrace Thou alone canst bestow !From none will Thy dear one humility know.By Thy honour, oh, God ! do not make me defamed !At the baseness of sin, do not make me ashamed!Make not one like myself tyrannize over me!If I am to be punished, by Thee, let it be!No evil is greater on Earth, I am sure,Than harshness from one, like one's self, to endure.It suffices, that I in Thy presence feel shame,Do not cause me to feel before others, the same!If upon me should settle Thy shadow divine,The rank of the sky would be lower than mine.It will raise up my head should Thou grant me a crown ;Support me, that no one may tumble me down !
Words in this poem
- favour n.
- Kind regard; propitious aspect; countenance; friendly disposition; kindness; good will. [Written also favour.]
- giver n.
- One who gives; a donor; a bestower; a grantor; one who imparts or distributes.
- depart v. i.
- To part; to divide; to separate. [OE. departen to divide, part, depart, F. départir to divide, distribute, se départir to separate one's self, depart; pref. dé- (L. de) + partir to part, depart,]
- futurity n.
- State of being that is yet to come; future state.
- honour n.
- Esteem due or paid to worth; high estimation; respect; consideration; reverence; veneration; manifestation of respect or reverence. [OE. honor, honour, onour, onur, OF. honor, onor, honur, onur, honour, onour, F. honneur, fr. L. honor, honos.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Chapter X: On Prayer is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Saadi, Chapter X: On Prayer, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/10-1.html, id L29760.
Form and metre
Chapter X: On Prayer is 36 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 93%).
See other poems in rhyming couplets, other poems in anapaestic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPPQQRR godA · sodA · beholdB · coldB · imploreC · storeC · supposeD · goesD · supplicateE · waitE · sustainF · remainF · restG · manifestG · showH · bestowH · suppliesI · likewiseI · heartJ · departJ · viewK · tooK · bestowL · knowL · defamedM · ashamedM · meN · beN · sureO · endureO · shameP · sameP · divineQ · mineQ · crownR · downR
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| LET us raise up our hands from our hearts unto God ; | 12 | ····/··/···· |
| For, to-morrow, we can't raise them up from the sod! | 12 | ··/˘········ |
| When the season of autumn arrives, you behold, | 12 | ··/˘·/˘˘/·˘/ |
| That a tree remains leafless, because of the cold. | 12 | ···˘//˘····· |
| It raises its destitute hands to implore, | 11 | ·/˘·/˘···˘/ |
| And does not retire without mercy in store. | 11 | ···˘/··/˘·· |
| From the door that has never been shut, don't suppose | 12 | ·····/˘···˘/ |
| That he who has stretched forth his hand, hopeless goes. | 12 | ·····˘···/˘· |
| All practise devotion, the poor supplicate ; | 11 | ·/˘˘/˘··/˘˘ |
| At the shrine of the Kind-to-the-poor, come and wait! | 12 | ············ |
| So that like the nude branch we our hands may sustain, | 12 | ·······/··˘/ |
| For we can't without means any longer remain. | 12 | ······/˘/˘˘/ |
| Oh, Lord! let Thy liberal glance on us rest ! | 11 | ····/˘˘···· |
| For the sins of Thy slaves have become manifest! | 12 | ·······˘//˘· |
| Sin comes from the slaves who humility show, | 11 | ······˘/˘˘· |
| In the hope that the Lord will forgiveness bestow. | 12 | ·······˘/˘˘/ |
| Oh, Kind One! we're reared by Thy daily supplies ! | 12 | ·····˘··/˘˘/ |
| To Thy favour and gifts we're accustomed likewise ! | 12 | ··/˘···˘/˘/· |
| When a beggar meets favour and kindness of heart, | 12 | ··/˘·/˘·/˘·· |
| From the heels of the giver he will not depart. | 12 | ·····/˘···˘/ |
| Since we in this world are beloved in Thy view, | 12 | ······˘/˘··· |
| We have hope of the same in Futurity, too. | 12 | ·······˘/˘˘· |
| Esteem and disgrace Thou alone canst bestow ! | 11 | ˘/·˘/·˘/·˘/ |
| From none will Thy dear one humility know. | 11 | ······˘/˘˘· |
| By Thy honour, oh, God ! do not make me defamed ! | 12 | ··/˘······˘/ |
| At the baseness of sin, do not make me ashamed! | 12 | ··/˘······˘/ |
| Make not one like myself tyrannize over me! | 12 | ·····//˘˘··· |
| If I am to be punished, by Thee, let it be! | 12 | ·····/˘····· |
| No evil is greater on Earth, I am sure, | 11 | ·/˘·/˘····· |
| Than harshness from one, like one's self, to endure. | 11 | ·/˘······˘/ |
| It suffices, that I in Thy presence feel shame, | 12 | ·˘/˘····/˘·· |
| Do not cause me to feel before others, the same! | 12 | ········/˘·· |
| If upon me should settle Thy shadow divine, | 12 | ·····/˘·/·˘/ |
| The rank of the sky would be lower than mine. | 11 | ·······/˘·· |
| It will raise up my head should Thou grant me a crown ; | 12 | ············ |
| Support me, that no one may tumble me down ! | 11 | ˘/·····/˘·· |
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