Chapter I: Song

Saadi (1210–1291), translated by G. S. Davie · 1882

anapaestic tetrameter · rhyming couplets · 12 lines · from The Garden of Fragrance

Last night I had pleasure in life for a space,For that moon-visaged maiden was in my embrace.On perceiving that sleep had bewildered her head," Oh slumber transported, beloved one !" I said ;"Wash slumber away from your eyes, for a while!Like the nightingale sing ! like the rose-blossom smile !Oh plague of the world ! why thus, sleeping, recline?Come and bring with you some of last night's ruby wine !"Bewildered through sleep, she beheld me and spake :—"You call me a trouble, and say, 'Keep awake!'"In the days of the monarch of luminous mind,None again will the nuisance of wakefulness find.

About this text

Chapter I: Song is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Garden of Fragrance: being a complete translation of the Bostan of Sadi from the original Persian into English verse, by G. S. Davie (London: Kegan Paul, Trench and Co., 1882), Internet Archive, the G. S. Davie translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Saadi, Chapter I: Song, in The Garden of Fragrance (1882), text of Internet Archive, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/saadi-bostan/1-16.html, id L29521.

Form and metre

Chapter I: Song is 12 lines in a single stanza. It is in rhyming couplets. The metre is anapaestic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%).

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDDEEFF spaceA · embraceA · headB · saidB · whileC · smileC · reclineD · wineD · spakeE · awakeE · mindF · findF
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against anapaestic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Last night I had pleasure in life for a space,11····/˘·····
For that moon-visaged maiden was in my embrace.12···/˘/˘···˘/
On perceiving that sleep had bewildered her head,12·˘/˘···˘/˘··
" Oh slumber transported, beloved one !" I said ;11·/˘˘/˘˘/···
"Wash slumber away from your eyes, for a while!11·/˘˘/······
Like the nightingale sing ! like the rose-blossom smile !11··/˘····/˘·
Oh plague of the world ! why thus, sleeping, recline?11·······/˘˘/
Come and bring with you some of last night's ruby wine !"12·········/˘·
Bewildered through sleep, she beheld me and spake :—11˘/˘···˘/···
"You call me a trouble, and say, 'Keep awake!'"11····/˘···˘/
In the days of the monarch of luminous mind,11·····/··/˘·
None again will the nuisance of wakefulness find.13·˘/··/˘······

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