Vale!

Winthrop Mackworth Praed (1802–1839) · 1820–1839

iambic tetrameter · octosyllabic couplets · 152 lines · from Poems

Eton, the Monarch of thy prayersE’en now receives his load of cares;Throned in the consecrated choirHe takes the sceptre of his sire,And wears the crown his father wore,And swears the oath his father swore,And therefore sounds of joy resound,Fair Eton, on thy classic ground.A gladder gale is round thee breathed;And on thy mansions thou hast wreathedA thousand lamps, whose various hueWaits but the night to burst to view.Woe to the poets that refuseTo wake and woo their idle Muse,When those glad notes, “God save the King,”From hill, and vale, and hamlet ring!Hark, how the loved inspiring tunePeals forth from every loyal loonWho loves his country, and excelsIn drinking beer or ringing bells!It is a day of shouts and greeting;A day of idleness and eating;And triumph swells in every soul,And mighty beeves are roasted whole,And ale, unbought, is set a-running,And pleasure’s hymn grows rather stunning,And children roll upon the green,And cry, “Confusion to the Queen!”And Sorrow flies, and Labour slumbers:And Clio pours her loudest numbers;And hundreds of that joyous throngWith whom my life hath lingered longGive their glad raptures to the gale,In one united echoing “Hail!”

I took the harp, I smote the string,I strove to soar on Fancy’s wing,And murmur in my sovereign’s praiseThe latest of my boyhood’s lays.Alas! the theme was too divineTo suit so weak a Muse as mine:I saw--I felt it could not be;No song of triumph flows from me;The harp from which those sounds ye askIs all unfit for such a task;And the last echo of its tone,Dear Eton, must be thine alone!

A few short hours, and I am borneFar from the fetters I have worn;A few short hours, and I am free!--And yet I shrink from liberty,And look, and long to give my soulBack to thy cherishing control.Control? Ah no! thy chain was meantFar less for bond than ornament;And though its links are firmly set,I never found them gall me yet.Oh still, through many chequered years,’Mid anxious toils, and hopes, and fears,Still I have doted on thy fame,And only gloried in thy name.How I have loved thee! Thou hast beenMy Hope, my Mistress, and my Queen;I always found thee kind, and thouHast never seen me weep--till now.

I knew that time was fleeting fast,I knew thy pleasures could not last;I knew too well that riper ageMust step upon a busier stage;Yet when around thine ancient towersI passed secure my tranquil hours,Or heard beneath thine aged treesThe drowsy humming of the bees,Or wandered by thy winding stream,I would not check my fancy’s dream;Glad in my transitory bliss,I recked not of an hour like this;And now the truth comes swiftly on,The truth I would not think upon,The last sad thought, so oft delayed,--“These joys are only born to fade.”

Ye Guardians of my earliest days,Ye Patrons of my earliest lays,Custom reminds me, that to youThanks and farewell to-day are due.Thanks and farewell I give you,--not(As some that leave this holy spot)In laboured phrase and polished lieWrought by the forge of flattery,But with a heart that cannot tellThe half of what it feels so well.If I am backward to express,Believe, my love is not the less;Be kind as you are wont, and viewA thousand thanks in one Adieu.My future life shall strive to showI wish to pay the debt I owe;The labours that ye give to MaySeptember’s fruits shall best repay.And you, my friends, who loved to shareWhate’er was mine of sport or care,Antagonists at fives or chess,Friends in the play-ground or the press,I leave ye now; and all that restsOf mutual tastes, and loving breasts,In the lone vision that shall come,Where’er my studies and my home,To cheer my labour and my painAnd make me feel a boy again.

Yes! when at last I sit me down,A scholar, in my cap and gown,--When learned doctrines, dark and deep,Move me to passion or to sleep,--When Clio yields to logic’s wrangles,And Long and Short give place to angles,--When stern Mathesis makes it treasonTo like a rhyme, or scorn a reason--With aching head and weary witYour parted friend shall often sit,Till Fancy’s magic spell hath bound him,And lonely musings flit around him;Then shall ye come with all your wiles,Of gladdening sounds and warming smiles,And nought shall meet his eye or ear,--Yet shall he deem your souls are near.

Others may clothe their valedictionWith all the tinsel charms of fiction;And one may sing of Father Thames,And Naiads with a hundred names,And find a Pindus here, and ownThe College pump a Helicon,And search for gods about the College,Of which old Homer had no knowledge;And one may eloquently tellThe triumphs of the Windsor belle,And sing of Mira’s lips and eyes,In oft-repeated ecstasies.Oh! he hath much and wondrous skillTo paint the looks that wound and kill,As the poor maid is doomed to brook,Unconsciously, her lover’s look,And smiles, and talks, until the poetHears the band play, and does not know it.To speak the plain and simple truth,--I always was a jesting youth,A friend to merriment and fun,No foe to quibble and to pun;Therefore I cannot feign a tear;And, now that I have uttered hereA few unrounded accents, bredMore from the heart than from the head,Honestly felt, and plainly told,My lyre is still, my fancy cold.

Words in this poem 26
sceptre n.
A staff or baton borne by a sovereign, as a ceremonial badge or emblem of authority; a royal mace. [F. sceptre, L. sceptrum, from Gr. shaft. See Shaft, and cf. Scape a stem, shaft.]
sire n.
A lord, master, or other person in authority. See Sir. [F. sire, originally, an older person. See Sir.]
classic a.
Of or relating to the first class or rank, especially in literature or art. [L. classicus relating to the classes of the Roman people, and especially to the frist class; hence, of the first rank, superior, from classis class: cf. F. clas]
gladder n.
One who makes glad.
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
vale n.
A tract of low ground, or of land between hills; a valley. [OE. val, F. val, L. vallis; perhaps akin to Gr. Avalanche, Vail to lower, Valley.]
beeves n.
; plural of Beef, the animal.
stunning a.
Overpowering consciousness; overpowering the senses; especially, overpowering the sense of hearing; confounding with noise.
clio n.
The Muse who presided over history.
boyhood n.
The state of being a boy; the time during which one is a boy. [Boy + -hood.]
doted a.
Stupid; foolish.
gloried a.
Illustrious; honorable; noble. [See Glory.]
laboured a.
Bearing marks of labor and effort; elaborately wrought; not easy or natural; as, labored poetry; a labored style.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.
mathesis n.
Learning; especially, mathematics.
aching a.
That aches; continuously painful. See Ache.
flit a.
Nimble; quick; swift. See Fleet.
deem v. t.
To decide; to judge; to sentence; to condemn. [OE. demen to judge, condemn, AS. d, fr. d doom; akin to OFries. d, OS. ad, D. doemen, OHG. tuommen, Icel. dæma, Sw. dömma, Dan. dömme, Goth. d. See Doom, n., an]
valediction n.
A farewell; a bidding farewell. Donne. [L., valedicere, valedictum, to say farewell; vale farewell (imperative of valere to be strong or well) + dicere to say. See Valiant, Diction.]
helicon n.
A mountain in Boeotia, in Greece, supposed by the Greeks to be the residence of Apollo and the Muses.
eloquently adv.
In an eloquent manner.
windsor n.
A town in Berkshire, England. Windsor bean. (Bot.) See under Bean.
belle n.
A young lady of superior beauty and attractions; a handsome lady, or one who attracts notice in society; a fair lady. [F. belle, fem. of bel, beau, beautiful, fine. See Beau.]
wondrous adv.
In a wonderful or surprising manner or degree; wonderfully. [OE. wonders, adv. (later also adj.). See Wonder, n., and cf. -wards.]
honestly adv.
Honorably; becomingly; decently.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Vale! is 152 lines in 7 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 93% of the lines: octosyllabic couplets. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 97% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.2 syllables. 22 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 26% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

See other poems in octosyllabic couplets, other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDD--EEFFGGHHIIJJKKLLMMNNOOPP prayersA · caresA · choirB · sireB · woreC · sworeC · resoundD · groundD · breathed · wreathed · hueE · viewE · refuseF · museF · kingG · ringG · tuneH · loonH · excelsI · bellsI · greetingJ · eatingJ · soulK · wholeK · runningL · stunningL · greenM · queenM · slumbersN · numbersN · throngO · longO · galeP · hailP
  2. 2 AABBCCDDEEFF stringA · wingA · praiseB · laysB · divineC · mineC · beD · meD · askE · taskE · toneF · aloneF
  3. 3 AA--BBCCDDEEFF--GG borneA · wornA · free · liberty · soulB · controlB · meantC · ornamentC · setD · yetD · yearsE · fearsE · fameF · nameF · been · queen · thouG · nowG
  4. 4 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH fastA · lastA · ageB · stageB · towersC · hoursC · treesD · beesD · streamE · dreamE · blissF · thisF · onG · uponG · delayedH · fadeH
  5. 5 AABBCC--DDEEBBFFGGHHEEIIJJKK daysA · laysA · youB · dueB · notC · spotC · lie · flattery · tellD · wellD · expressE · lessE · viewB · adieuB · showF · oweF · mayG · repayG · shareH · careH · chessE · pressE · restsI · breastsI · comeJ · homeJ · painK · againK
  6. 6 AABBCCDDEEFFGGHH downA · gownA · deepB · sleepB · wranglesC · anglesC · treasonD · reasonD · witE · sitE · himF · himF · wilesG · smilesG · earH · nearH
  7. 7 AA--AABBCCDDEEFFGGHHIIJJKKLL valedictionA · fictionA · thames · names · ownA · heliconA · collegeB · knowledgeB · tellC · belleC · eyesD · ecstasiesD · skillE · killE · brookF · lookF · poetG · itG · truthH · youthH · funI · punI · tearJ · hereJ · bredK · headK · toldL · coldL
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Eton, the Monarch of thy prayers8/˘·/····
E’en now receives his load of cares;8··˘/····
Throned in the consecrated choir9···/˘·˘/˘
He takes the sceptre of his sire,9···/˘··/˘
And wears the crown his father wore,8·····/˘·
And swears the oath his father swore,8·····/˘·
And therefore sounds of joy resound,8·······/
Fair Eton, on thy classic ground.8·/˘··/˘·
A gladder gale is round thee breathed;8·/˘·····
And on thy mansions thou hast wreathed8···/˘···
A thousand lamps, whose various hue8·/˘··/˘·
Waits but the night to burst to view.8········
Woe to the poets that refuse8···/˘·˘/
To wake and woo their idle Muse,8·····/˘·
When those glad notes, “God save the King,”8········
From hill, and vale, and hamlet ring!8·····/˘·
Hark, how the loved inspiring tune8····˘/˘·
Peals forth from every loyal loon8···/˘/˘·
Who loves his country, and excels8···/˘·˘/
In drinking beer or ringing bells!8·/˘··/˘·
It is a day of shouts and greeting;9·······/˘
A day of idleness and eating;9···/˘˘·/˘
And triumph swells in every soul,8·/˘··/˘·
And mighty beeves are roasted whole,8·/˘··/˘·
And ale, unbought, is set a-running,9·······/˘
And pleasure’s hymn grows rather stunning,9·/˘··/˘/˘
And children roll upon the green,8·/˘·····
And cry, “Confusion to the Queen!”8··˘/˘···
And Sorrow flies, and Labour slumbers:9·/˘··/·/˘
And Clio pours her loudest numbers;9·/˘··/˘/˘
And hundreds of that joyous throng8·/˘··/˘·
With whom my life hath lingered long8·····/˘·
Give their glad raptures to the gale,8···/˘···
In one united echoing “Hail!”8··˘/˘/˘·
I took the harp, I smote the string,8········
I strove to soar on Fancy’s wing,8·····/˘·
And murmur in my sovereign’s praise8·/˘··/˘·
The latest of my boyhood’s lays.8·/˘··/··
Alas! the theme was too divine8˘/····˘/
To suit so weak a Muse as mine:8········
I saw--I felt it could not be;8········
No song of triumph flows from me;8···/˘···
The harp from which those sounds ye ask8········
Is all unfit for such a task;8··˘/····
And the last echo of its tone,8···/˘···
Dear Eton, must be thine alone!8·/˘···˘/
A few short hours, and I am borne8···/····
Far from the fetters I have worn;8···/˘···
A few short hours, and I am free!--8···/····
And yet I shrink from liberty,8·····/˘˘
And look, and long to give my soul8········
Back to thy cherishing control.8···/˘˘˘/
Control? Ah no! thy chain was meant8˘/······
Far less for bond than ornament;8·····/˘˘
And though its links are firmly set,8·····/˘·
I never found them gall me yet.8·/˘·····
Oh still, through many chequered years,8···/˘···
’Mid anxious toils, and hopes, and fears,8·/˘·····
Still I have doted on thy fame,8···/˘···
And only gloried in thy name.8·/˘/˘···
How I have loved thee! Thou hast been8········
My Hope, my Mistress, and my Queen;8···/˘···
I always found thee kind, and thou8·/······
Hast never seen me weep--till now.8·/˘·····
I knew that time was fleeting fast,8·····/˘·
I knew thy pleasures could not last;8···/˘···
I knew too well that riper age8········
Must step upon a busier stage;8·····/˘·
Yet when around thine ancient towers9·····/˘/˘
I passed secure my tranquil hours,9··˘/·/˘/˘
Or heard beneath thine aged trees7·······
The drowsy humming of the bees,8·/˘/˘···
Or wandered by thy winding stream,8·/˘··/˘·
I would not check my fancy’s dream;8·····/˘·
Glad in my transitory bliss,8···/˘·˘·
I recked not of an hour like this;8·····/··
And now the truth comes swiftly on,8·····/˘·
The truth I would not think upon,8········
The last sad thought, so oft delayed,--8······˘/
“These joys are only born to fade.”8···/˘···
Ye Guardians of my earliest days,8·/˘··/˘·
Ye Patrons of my earliest lays,8·/˘··/˘·
Custom reminds me, that to you8/˘˘/····
Thanks and farewell to-day are due.8···/····
Thanks and farewell I give you,--not8···/····
(As some that leave this holy spot)8·····/˘·
In laboured phrase and polished lie8·/˘··/˘·
Wrought by the forge of flattery,8·····/˘˘
But with a heart that cannot tell8·····/˘·
The half of what it feels so well.8········
If I am backward to express,8···/˘·˘/
Believe, my love is not the less;8˘/······
Be kind as you are wont, and view8········
A thousand thanks in one Adieu.8·/˘···˘/
My future life shall strive to show8·/˘·····
I wish to pay the debt I owe;8········
The labours that ye give to May8·/˘·····
September’s fruits shall best repay.8˘/˘···˘/
And you, my friends, who loved to share8········
Whate’er was mine of sport or care,9˘˘/······
Antagonists at fives or chess,8˘/˘˘····
Friends in the play-ground or the press,8········
I leave ye now; and all that rests8········
Of mutual tastes, and loving breasts,8·/˘··/˘·
In the lone vision that shall come,8···/˘···
Where’er my studies and my home,9˘˘/·/˘···
To cheer my labour and my pain8···/····
And make me feel a boy again.8······˘/
Yes! when at last I sit me down,8········
A scholar, in my cap and gown,--8·/˘·····
When learned doctrines, dark and deep,8··˘/˘···
Move me to passion or to sleep,--8···/˘···
When Clio yields to logic’s wrangles,9·/˘··/˘/˘
And Long and Short give place to angles,--9·······/˘
When stern Mathesis makes it treason9··˘/˘··/˘
To like a rhyme, or scorn a reason--9·······/˘
With aching head and weary wit8·/˘··/˘·
Your parted friend shall often sit,8·/˘··/˘·
Till Fancy’s magic spell hath bound him,9·/˘/˘····
And lonely musings flit around him;9·/˘/˘····
Then shall ye come with all your wiles,8········
Of gladdening sounds and warming smiles,8·/˘··/˘·
And nought shall meet his eye or ear,--8········
Yet shall he deem your souls are near.8········
Others may clothe their valediction9/˘·······
With all the tinsel charms of fiction;9···/˘··/˘
And one may sing of Father Thames,8·····/˘·
And Naiads with a hundred names,8····/˘˘·
And find a Pindus here, and own8········
The College pump a Helicon,8·/˘··/˘·
And search for gods about the College,9·······/˘
Of which old Homer had no knowledge;9···/˘··/˘
And one may eloquently tell8···/˘˘˘·
The triumphs of the Windsor belle,8·/˘··/˘·
And sing of Mira’s lips and eyes,8···/˘···
In oft-repeated ecstasies.8··˘/˘/˘˘
Oh! he hath much and wondrous skill8·····/˘·
To paint the looks that wound and kill,8········
As the poor maid is doomed to brook,8········
Unconsciously, her lover’s look,8·/˘˘·/˘·
And smiles, and talks, until the poet9·······/˘
Hears the band play, and does not know it.9·········
To speak the plain and simple truth,--8·····/˘·
I always was a jesting youth,8·/···/˘·
A friend to merriment and fun,8···/˘˘··
No foe to quibble and to pun;8···/˘···
Therefore I cannot feign a tear;8···/˘···
And, now that I have uttered here8·····/˘·
A few unrounded accents, bred8·····/˘·
More from the heart than from the head,8········
Honestly felt, and plainly told,8/˘˘··/˘·
My lyre is still, my fancy cold.8·····/˘·

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