Hamthesmol: The Ballad of Hamther
Great the evils | once that grew,With the dawning sad | of the sorrow of elves;In early morn | awake for menThe evils that grief | to each shall bring.
Not now, nor yet | of yesterday was it,Long the time | that since hath lapsed,So that little there is | that is half as old,Since Guthrun, daughter | of Gjuki, whettedHer sons so young | to Svanhild’s vengeance.
“The sister ye had | was Svanhild called,And her did Jormunrek | trample with horses,White and black | on the battle-way,Gray, road-wonted, | the steeds of the Goths.
“Lonely am I | as the forest aspen,Of kindred bare | as the fir of its boughs,My joys are all lost | as the leaves of the treeWhen the scather of twigs | from the warm day turns.”
Then Hamther spake forth, | the high of heart:“Small praise didst thou, Guthrun, | to Hogni’s deed giveWhen they wakened thy Sigurth | from out of his sleep,Thou didst sit on the bed | while his slayers laughed.
“Thy bed-covers white | with blood were redFrom his wounds, and with gore | of thy husband were wet;So Sigurth was slain, | by his corpse didst thou sit,And of gladness didst think not: | ’twas Gunnar’s doing.
“Thou wouldst strike at Atli | by the slaying of ErpAnd the killing of Eitil; | thine own grief was worse;So should each one wield | the wound-biting swordThat another it slays | but smites not himself.”
Then did Sorli speak out, | for wise was he ever:“With my mother I never | a quarrel will make;Full little in speaking | methinks ye both lack;What askest thou, Guthrun, | that will give thee no tears?
“For thy brothers dost weep, | and thy boys so sweet,Thy kinsmen in birth | on the battlefield slain;Now, Guthrun, as well | for us both shalt thou weep,We sit doomed on our steeds, | and far hence shall we die.”
Then the fame-glad one— | on the steps she was—The slender-fingered, | spake with her son:“Ye shall danger have | if counsel ye heed not;By two heroes alone | shall two hundred of GothsBe bound or be slain | in the lofty-walled burg.”
From the courtyard they fared, | and fury they breathed;The youths swiftly went | o’er the mountain wet,On their Hunnish steeds, | death’s vengeance to have.
So answered them | their half-brother then:“So well may I | my kinsmen aidAs help one foot | from the other has.”
Then Erp spake forth, | his words were few,As haughty he sat | on his horse’s back:“To the timid ’tis ill | the way to tell.”A bastard they | the bold one called.
From their sheaths they drew | their shining swords,Their blades, to the giantess | joy to give;By a third they lessened | the might that was theirs,The fighter young | to earth they felled.
On their road they fared | and an ill way found,And their sister’s son | on a tree they saw,On the wind-cold wolf-tree | west of the hall,And cranes’-bait crawled; | none would care to linger.
In the hall was din, | the men drank deep,And the horses’ hoofs | could no one hear,Till the warrior hardy | sounded his horn.
Men came and the tale | to Jormunrek toldHow warriors helmed | without they beheld:“Take counsel wise, | for brave ones are come,Of mighty men | thou the sister didst murder.”
Then Jormunrek laughed, | his hand laid on his beard,His arms, for with wine | he was warlike, he called for;He shook his brown locks, | on his white shield he looked,And raised high the cup | of gold in his hand.
“Happy, methinks, | were I to beholdHamther and Sorli | here in my hall;The men would I bind | with strings of bows,And Gjuki’s heirs | on the gallows hang.”
Then did Hamther speak forth, | the haughty of heart:“Thou soughtest, Jormunrek, | us to see,Sons of one mother | seeking thy dwelling;Thou seest thy hands, | thy feet thou beholdest,Jormunrek, flung | in the fire so hot.”
Then roared the king, | of the race of the gods,Bold in his armor, | as roars a bear:“Stone ye the men | that steel will bite not,Sword nor spear, | the sons of Jonak.”
“Ill didst win, brother, | when the bag thou didst open,Oft from that bag | came baleful counsel;Heart hast thou, Hamther, | if knowledge thou hadst!A man without wisdom | is lacking in much.”
“His head were now off | if Erp were living,The brother so keen | whom we killed on our road,The warrior noble,— | ’twas the Norns that drove meThe hero to slay | who in fight should be holy.
“In fashion of wolves | it befits us notAmongst ourselves to strive,Like the hounds of the Norns, | that nourished wereIn greed mid wastes so grim.
“We have greatly fought, | o’er the Goths do we standBy our blades laid low, | like eagles on branches;Great our fame though we die | today or tomorrow;None outlives the night | when the Norns have spoken.”
2. Some editors regard lines 1–2 as interpolated, while others questionline 3. Guthrun, etc.: regarding the marriage of Jonak and Guthrun(daughter of Gjuki, sister of Gunnar and Hogni, and widow first ofSigurth and then of Atli), and the sons of this marriage, Hamther and
a —as in “alone”ā —as in “father”e —as in “men”ē —as a in “fate”i —as in “is”ī —as in “machine”o —as in “on”ō —as in “old”ö —as in German “öffnen”ȫ —as in German “schön”ǭ —as aw in “law”u —as ou in “would”ū —as ou in “wound”y —as i in “is” } Both with a slightȳ —as ee in “free” } sound of German üæ —as e in “men”ǣ —as a in “fate”ei —as ey in “they”ey —as in “they”au —as ou in “out”ai —as i in “fine”
Guth″-rūn-ar-kvith′-a II (On′-nur, en Forn′-a), the Second (Old) Lay ofGuthrun, 230, 255, 325, 407, 410–412, 416, 419, 450–465, 467, 476, 493,
Helg″-a-kvith′-a Hjor″-varths-son′-ar, the Lay of Helgi the Son ofHjorvarth, 14, 189, 269–290, 292, 293, 295, 298, 300, 302, 304, 309,
Helg″-a-kvith′-a Hund″-ings-ban′-a I (en Fyr′-ri), the First Lay ofHelgi Hundingsbane, 14, 160, 215, 221, 273, 276, 281, 287, 290–308,
Helg″-a-kvith′-a Hund″-ings-ban′-a II (On′-nur), the Second Lay ofHelgi Hundingsbane, 95, 272, 288, 289, 294, 296, 298, 306, 309–331,
Words in this poem 22
- morn n.
- The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- lapsed a.
- Having slipped downward, backward, or away; having lost position, privilege, etc., by neglect; -- restricted to figurative uses.
- didst
- , the 2d pers. sing. imp. of Do.
- corpse n.
- A human body in general, whether living or dead; -- sometimes contemptuosly. [OF. cors (sometimes written corps), F. corps, L. corpus; akin to AS. hrif womb. See Midriff, and cf. Corse, Corselet, Corps, Cuerpo.]
- wield v. t.
- To govern; to rule; to keep, or have in charge; also, to possess. [OE. welden to govern, to have power over, to possess, AS. geweldan, gewyldan, from wealdan; akin to OS. waldan, OFries. walda, G. walten, OHG. waltan, Icel. val]
- methinks v.
- It seems to me; I think. See Me. [AS. þyncan to seem, me þynceedh, me þuhte, OE. me thinketh, me thoughte; akin to G. dünken to seem, denken to think, and E. think. See Me, and Think.]
- shalt
- 2d per. sing. of Shall.
- burg n.
- A fortified town. [AS. burh, burg, cf. LL. burgus. See 1st Borough.]
- went n.
- Course; way; path; journey; direction.
- haughty a.
- High; lofty; bold. [OE. hautein, F. hautain, fr. haut high, OF. also halt, fr. L. altus. See Altitude.]
- giantess n.
- A woman of extraordinary size.
- fighter n.
- One who fights; a combatant; a warrior. [AS. feohtere.]
- drank n.
- Wild oats, or darnel grass. See Drake a plant. [Cf. 3d Drake.]
- helmed a.
- Covered with a helmet.
- shook v. t.
- To pack, as staves, in a shook.
- hast
- , 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
- drove n.
- A collection of cattle driven, or cattle collected for driving; a number of animals, as oxen, sheep, or swine, driven in a body. [AS. draf, fr. drifan to drive. See Drive.]
- amongst prep.
- Mixed or mingled; surrounded by. [OE. amongist, amonges, amonge, among, AS. onmang, ongemang, gemang, in a crowd or mixture. For the ending -st see Amidst. See Mingle.]
- greed n.
- An eager desire or longing; greediness; as, a greed of gain. [Akin to Goth. grdus hunger, Icel. graedhr. sq. root34. See Greedy.]
- tomorrow adv.
- On the day after the present day; on the next day; on the morrow. [Prep. to + morrow.]
- interpolated a.
- Inserted in, or added to, the original; introduced; foisted in; changed by the insertion of new or spurious matter.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Hamthesmol: The Ballad of Hamther is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Poetic Edda, Project Gutenberg ebook #73533, the Henry Adams Bellows translation; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
Hamthesmol: The Ballad of Hamther is 133 lines in 31 verse paragraphs. It is unrhymed, as far as the pronouncing dictionary can tell. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 73%). 93% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 9.5 syllables. 19 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 19% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic pentameter, other poems in blank verse.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 17 AA-- toldA · beheldA · come · murder
- 27 --AB-----C----CABDD-- alone · father · menA · fateB · is · machine · on · old · öffnen · — · law · would · wound · slight · — · menA · fateB · theyD · theyD · out · fine
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Great the evils | once that grew, | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| With the dawning sad | of the sorrow of elves; | 11 | ··/˘···/˘·· |
| In early morn | awake for men | 8 | ·/˘·˘/·· |
| The evils that grief | to each shall bring. | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| Not now, nor yet | of yesterday was it, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| Long the time | that since hath lapsed, | 7 | ······· |
| So that little there is | that is half as old, | 11 | ··/˘······· |
| Since Guthrun, daughter | of Gjuki, whetted | 10 | ···/˘···/˘ |
| Her sons so young | to Svanhild’s vengeance. | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| “The sister ye had | was Svanhild called, | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| And her did Jormunrek | trample with horses, | 11 | ······/˘·/˘ |
| White and black | on the battle-way, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Gray, road-wonted, | the steeds of the Goths. | 9 | ··/˘····· |
| “Lonely am I | as the forest aspen, | 10 | /˘····/˘/˘ |
| Of kindred bare | as the fir of its boughs, | 10 | ·/˘······· |
| My joys are all lost | as the leaves of the tree | 11 | ··········· |
| When the scather of twigs | from the warm day turns.” | 11 | ··········· |
| Then Hamther spake forth, | the high of heart: | 9 | ········· |
| “Small praise didst thou, Guthrun, | to Hogni’s deed give | 11 | ··········· |
| When they wakened thy Sigurth | from out of his sleep, | 12 | ··/˘········ |
| Thou didst sit on the bed | while his slayers laughed. | 11 | ········/˘· |
| “Thy bed-covers white | with blood were red | 9 | ··/˘····· |
| From his wounds, and with gore | of thy husband were wet; | 12 | ········/˘·· |
| So Sigurth was slain, | by his corpse didst thou sit, | 11 | ··········· |
| And of gladness didst think not: | ’twas Gunnar’s doing. | 12 | ··/˘····/˘/˘ |
| “Thou wouldst strike at Atli | by the slaying of Erp | 12 | ········/˘·· |
| And the killing of Eitil; | thine own grief was worse; | 12 | ··/˘········ |
| So should each one wield | the wound-biting sword | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| That another it slays | but smites not himself.” | 11 | ·˘/˘·····˘/ |
| Then did Sorli speak out, | for wise was he ever: | 12 | ··········/˘ |
| “With my mother I never | a quarrel will make; | 12 | ··/˘·/˘·/˘·· |
| Full little in speaking | methinks ye both lack; | 11 | ·/˘·/˘˘/··· |
| What askest thou, Guthrun, | that will give thee no tears? | 12 | ············ |
| “For thy brothers dost weep, | and thy boys so sweet, | 11 | ··/˘······· |
| Thy kinsmen in birth | on the battlefield slain; | 11 | ·······/˘·· |
| Now, Guthrun, as well | for us both shalt thou weep, | 11 | ··········· |
| We sit doomed on our steeds, | and far hence shall we die.” | 13 | ····/˘······· |
| Then the fame-glad one— | on the steps she was— | 10 | ·········· |
| The slender-fingered, | spake with her son: | 9 | ·/˘/˘···· |
| “Ye shall danger have | if counsel ye heed not; | 11 | ··/˘··/˘··· |
| By two heroes alone | shall two hundred of Goths | 12 | ··/˘˘/··/˘·· |
| Be bound or be slain | in the lofty-walled burg.” | 11 | ·······/˘·· |
| From the courtyard they fared, | and fury they breathed; | 11 | ··/····/˘·· |
| The youths swiftly went | o’er the mountain wet, | 10 | ··/˘···/˘· |
| On their Hunnish steeds, | death’s vengeance to have. | 10 | ······/˘·· |
| So answered them | their half-brother then: | 9 | ·/˘···/˘· |
| “So well may I | my kinsmen aid | 8 | ········ |
| As help one foot | from the other has.” | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Then Erp spake forth, | his words were few, | 8 | ········ |
| As haughty he sat | on his horse’s back: | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| “To the timid ’tis ill | the way to tell.” | 10 | ··/˘······ |
| A bastard they | the bold one called. | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| From their sheaths they drew | their shining swords, | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Their blades, to the giantess | joy to give; | 10 | ····/˘˘··· |
| By a third they lessened | the might that was theirs, | 11 | ····/˘····· |
| The fighter young | to earth they felled. | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| On their road they fared | and an ill way found, | 10 | ·········· |
| And their sister’s son | on a tree they saw, | 10 | ··/˘······ |
| On the wind-cold wolf-tree | west of the hall, | 10 | ·········· |
| And cranes’-bait crawled; | none would care to linger. | 10 | ········/˘ |
| In the hall was din, | the men drank deep, | 9 | ········· |
| And the horses’ hoofs | could no one hear, | 9 | ··/˘····· |
| Till the warrior hardy | sounded his horn. | 11 | ··/˘˘/˘/˘·· |
| Men came and the tale | to Jormunrek told | 10 | ·········· |
| How warriors helmed | without they beheld: | 10 | ·/˘˘····˘/ |
| “Take counsel wise, | for brave ones are come, | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| Of mighty men | thou the sister didst murder.” | 11 | ·/˘···/˘·/˘ |
| Then Jormunrek laughed, | his hand laid on his beard, | 11 | ··········· |
| His arms, for with wine | he was warlike, he called for; | 12 | ·······/···· |
| He shook his brown locks, | on his white shield he looked, | 11 | ··········· |
| And raised high the cup | of gold in his hand. | 10 | ·········· |
| “Happy, methinks, | were I to behold | 9 | /˘˘/···˘/ |
| Hamther and Sorli | here in my hall; | 9 | ········· |
| The men would I bind | with strings of bows, | 9 | ········· |
| And Gjuki’s heirs | on the gallows hang.” | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Then did Hamther speak forth, | the haughty of heart: | 11 | ·······/˘·· |
| “Thou soughtest, Jormunrek, | us to see, | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| Sons of one mother | seeking thy dwelling; | 10 | ···/˘/˘·/˘ |
| Thou seest thy hands, | thy feet thou beholdest, | 10 | ·······˘/˘ |
| Jormunrek, flung | in the fire so hot.” | 10 | ······/˘·· |
| Then roared the king, | of the race of the gods, | 10 | ·········· |
| Bold in his armor, | as roars a bear: | 9 | ···/˘···· |
| “Stone ye the men | that steel will bite not, | 9 | ········· |
| Sword nor spear, | the sons of Jonak.” | 8 | ········ |
| “Ill didst win, brother, | when the bag thou didst open, | 12 | ···/˘·····/˘ |
| Oft from that bag | came baleful counsel; | 9 | ·····/˘/˘ |
| Heart hast thou, Hamther, | if knowledge thou hadst! | 10 | ······/˘·· |
| A man without wisdom | is lacking in much.” | 11 | ····/˘·/˘·· |
| “His head were now off | if Erp were living, | 10 | ········/˘ |
| The brother so keen | whom we killed on our road, | 12 | ·/˘······/˘· |
| The warrior noble,— | ’twas the Norns that drove me | 12 | ·/˘˘/˘······ |
| The hero to slay | who in fight should be holy. | 12 | ·/˘·······/˘ |
| “In fashion of wolves | it befits us not | 10 | ·/˘···˘/·· |
| Amongst ourselves to strive, | 7 | ··˘˘/·· |
| Like the hounds of the Norns, | that nourished were | 10 | ·······/˘· |
| In greed mid wastes so grim. | 6 | ······ |
| “We have greatly fought, | o’er the Goths do we stand | 11 | ··/˘······· |
| By our blades laid low, | like eagles on branches; | 12 | ·/˘····/˘·/˘ |
| Great our fame though we die | today or tomorrow; | 13 | ·/˘····˘/·˘/· |
| None outlives the night | when the Norns have spoken.” | 11 | ··/······/˘ |
| 2. Some editors regard lines 1–2 as interpolated, while others question | 18 | ·/˘˘˘/···/˘·˘·/˘/˘ |
| line 3. Guthrun, etc.: regarding the marriage of Jonak and Guthrun | 19 | ····/˘˘˘/˘·/˘······ |
| (daughter of Gjuki, sister of Gunnar and Hogni, and widow first of | 18 | /˘···/˘·/˘····/˘·· |
| Sigurth and then of Atli), and the sons of this marriage, Hamther and | 17 | ············/˘··· |
| a —as in “alone” | 5 | ···˘/ |
| ā —as in “father” | 4 | ··/˘ |
| e —as in “men” | 4 | ···· |
| ē —as a in “fate” | 4 | ···· |
| i —as in “is” | 4 | ···· |
| ī —as in “machine” | 4 | ··˘/ |
| o —as in “on” | 4 | ···· |
| ō —as in “old” | 3 | ··· |
| ö —as in German “öffnen” | 5 | ··/˘· |
| ȫ —as in German “schön” | 5 | ··/˘· |
| ǭ —as aw in “law” | 4 | ···· |
| u —as ou in “would” | 5 | ····· |
| ū —as ou in “wound” | 4 | ···· |
| y —as i in “is” } Both with a slight | 9 | ········· |
| ȳ —as ee in “free” } sound of German ü | 8 | ······/˘ |
| æ —as e in “men” | 4 | ···· |
| ǣ —as a in “fate” | 4 | ···· |
| ei —as ey in “they” | 5 | ····· |
| ey —as in “they” | 4 | ···· |
| au —as ou in “out” | 5 | ····· |
| ai —as i in “fine” | 5 | ····· |
| Guth″-rūn-ar-kvith′-a II (On′-nur, en Forn′-a), the Second (Old) Lay of | 17 | ············/˘··· |
| Guthrun, 230, 255, 325, 407, 410–412, 416, 419, 450–465, 467, 476, 493, | 2 | ·· |
| Helg″-a-kvith′-a Hjor″-varths-son′-ar, the Lay of Helgi the Son of | 16 | ················ |
| Hjorvarth, 14, 189, 269–290, 292, 293, 295, 298, 300, 302, 304, 309, | 2 | ·· |
| Helg″-a-kvith′-a Hund″-ings-ban′-a I (en Fyr′-ri), the First Lay of | 16 | ················ |
| Helgi Hundingsbane, 14, 160, 215, 221, 273, 276, 281, 287, 290–308, | 5 | ····· |
| Helg″-a-kvith′-a Hund″-ings-ban′-a II (On′-nur), the Second Lay of | 16 | ············/˘·· |
| Helgi Hundingsbane, 95, 272, 288, 289, 294, 296, 298, 306, 309–331, | 5 | ····· |
On this poem
Notes from the edition 61
Henry Adams Bellows's notes to his translation (1923; Project Gutenberg #73533).
- Stanza 1 Great the evils | once that grew, With the dawning sad | of the sorrow of elves; In early morn | awake for men The evils that grief | to each shall bring.
- Stanza 1 This stanza looks like a later interpolation from a totally unrelated source. Sorrow of elves: the sun; cf. Alvissmol, 16 and note.
- Stanza 2 Not now, nor yet | of yesterday was it, Long the time | that since hath lapsed, So that little there is | that is half as old, Since Guthrun, daughter | of Gjuki, whetted Her sons so young | to Svanhild’s vengeance.
- Stanza 2 Some editors regard lines 1–2 as interpolated, while others question line 3. Guthrun, etc.: regarding the marriage of Jonak and Guthrun (daughter of Gjuki, sister of Gunnar and Hogni, and widow first of Sigurth and then of Atli), and the sons of this marriage, Hamther and Sorli (but not Erp), cf. Guthrunarhvot, introductory prose and note.
- Stanza 3 “The sister ye had | was Svanhild called, And her did Jormunrek | trample with horses, White and black | on the battle-way, Gray, road-wonted, | the steeds of the Goths.
- Stanza 3 Svanhild and Jormunrek: regarding the manner in which Jormunrek (Ermanarich) married Svanhild, daughter of Sigurth and Guthrun, and afterwards had her trodden to death by horses, cf. Guthrunarhvot, introductory note. Lines 3–4 are identical with lines 5–6 of Guthrunarhvot, 2.
- Stanza 4 “Little the kings | of the folk are ye like, For now ye are living | alone of my race.
- Stanza 4 These two lines may be all that is left of a four-line stanza. The manuscript and many editions combine them with stanza 5, while a few place them after stanza 5 as a separate stanza, reversing the order of the two lines. Kings of the folk: Guthrun’s brothers, Gunnar and Hogni, slain by Atli.
- Stanza 5 “Lonely am I | as the forest aspen, Of kindred bare | as the fir of its boughs, My joys are all lost | as the leaves of the tree When the scather of twigs | from the warm day turns.”
- Stanza 5 Cf. note on stanza 4; the manuscript does not indicate line 1 as beginning a stanza. Scather of twigs: poetic circumlocution for the wind (cf. Skaldskaparmal, chapter 27), though some editors think the phrase here means the sun. Some editors assume a more or less extensive gap between stanzas 5 and 6.
- Stanza 6 Then Hamther spake forth, | the high of heart: “Small praise didst thou, Guthrun, | to Hogni’s deed give When they wakened thy Sigurth | from out of his sleep, Thou didst sit on the bed | while his slayers laughed.
- Stanza 6 Lines 1–3 are nearly identical with lines 1–3 of Guthrunarhvot, 4. On the death of Sigurth cf. Sigurtharkvitha en skamma, 21–24, and Brot, concluding prose. The word thy in line 3 is omitted in the original.
- Stanza 7 “Thy bed-covers white | with blood were red From his wounds, and with gore | of thy husband were wet; So Sigurth was slain, | by his corpse didst thou sit, And of gladness didst think not: | ’twas Gunnar’s doing.
- Stanza 7 Lines 1–2 are nearly identical with lines 4–5 of Guthrunarhvot, 4. The manuscript, followed by many editions, indicates line 3 and not line 1 as beginning a stanza.
- Stanza 8 “Thou wouldst strike at Atli | by the slaying of Erp And the killing of Eitil; | thine own grief was worse; So should each one wield | the wound-biting sword That another it slays | but smites not himself.”
- Stanza 8 Some editors regard this stanza as interpolated. Erp and Eitil: regarding Guthrun’s slaying of her sons by Atli, cf. Atlamol, 72–75. The Erp here referred to is not to be confused with the Erp, son of Jonak, who appears in stanza 13. The whole of stanza 8 is in doubtful shape, and many emendations have been suggested.
- Stanza 9 Then did Sorli speak out, | for wise was he ever: “With my mother I never | a quarrel will make; Full little in speaking | methinks ye both lack; What askest thou, Guthrun, | that will give thee no tears?
- Stanza 10 “For thy brothers dost weep, | and thy boys so sweet, Thy kinsmen in birth | on the battlefield slain; Now, Guthrun, as well | for us both shalt thou weep, We sit doomed on our steeds, | and far hence shall we die.”
- Stanza 10 Some editors assign this speech to Hamther. Brothers: Gunnar and Hogni. Boys: Erp and Eitil.
- Stanza 11 Then the fame-glad one— | on the steps she was— The slender-fingered, | spake with her son: “Ye shall danger have | if counsel ye heed not; . . . . . . . . | . . . . . . . . By two heroes alone | shall two hundred of Goths Be bound or be slain | in the lofty-walled burg.”
- Stanza 11 In the manuscript this stanza follows stanza 21, and some editors take the word here rendered “fame-glad one” (hróþrglǫþ) to be a proper name (Jormunrek’s mother or his concubine). The Volsungasaga, however, indicates that Guthrun at this point “had so fashioned their war-gear that iron would not bite into it, and she bade them to have nought to do with stones or other heavy things, and told them that it would be ill for them if they did not do as she said.” The substance of this counsel may well have been conveyed in a passage lost after line 3, though the manuscript indicates no gap. It is by being stoned that Hamther and Sorli are killed (stanza 26). On the other hand, the second part of line 3 may possibly mean “if silent ye are not,” in which case the advice relates to Hamther’s speech to Jormunrek and Sorli’s reproach to him thereupon (stanzas 25 and 27). Steps: the word in the original is doubtful. Line 3 is thoroughly obscure. Some editors make a separate stanza of lines 3–5, while others question line 5.
- Stanza 12 From the courtyard they fared, | and fury they breathed; The youths swiftly went | o’er the mountain wet, On their Hunnish steeds, | death’s vengeance to have.
- Stanza 12 Many editors assume the loss of a line after line 1. In several editions lines 2–3 are placed after line 2 of stanza 18. Hunnish: the word meant little more than “German”; cf. Guthrunarhvot, 3 and note.
- Stanza 13 On the way they found | the man so wise; . . . . . . . . | . . . . . . . . “What help from the weakling | brown may we have?”
- Stanza 13 In the manuscript these two lines follow stanza 16; some editors insert them in place of lines 2–3 of stanza 11. The manuscript indicates no gap. The man so wise: Erp, here represented as a son of Jonak but not of Guthrun, and hence a half-brother of Hamther and Sorli. There is nothing further to indicate whether or not he was born out of wedlock, as intimated in stanza 16. Some editors assign line 3 to Hamther, and some to Sorli.
- Stanza 14 So answered them | their half-brother then: “So well may I | my kinsmen aid As help one foot | from the other has.”
- Stanza 14 The stanza is obviously defective. Many editors add Erp’s name in line 1, and insert between lines 2 and 3 a line based on stanza 15 and the Volsungasaga paraphrase: “As a flesh-grown hand | another helps.” In the Volsungasaga, after Erp’s death, Hamther stumbles and saves himself from falling with his hand, whereupon he says: “Erp spake truly; I had fallen had I not braced myself with my hand.” Soon thereafter Sorli has a like experience, one foot slipping but the other saving him from a fall. “Then they said that they had done ill to Erp, their brother.”
- Stanza 15 “How may a foot | its fellow aid, Or a flesh-grown hand | another help?”
- Stanza 15 Many editions attach these two lines to stanza 14, while a few assume the loss of two lines.
- Stanza 16 Then Erp spake forth, | his words were few, As haughty he sat | on his horse’s back: “To the timid ’tis ill | the way to tell.” A bastard they | the bold one called.
- Stanza 16 In the manuscript this stanza stands between stanzas 12 and 13. Some editors make line 4 a part of Erp’s speech.
- Stanza 17 From their sheaths they drew | their shining swords, Their blades, to the giantess | joy to give; By a third they lessened | the might that was theirs, The fighter young | to earth they felled.
- Stanza 17 The manuscript does not indicate line 1 as beginning a stanza. The giantess: presumably the reference is to Hel, goddess of the dead, but the phrase is doubtful.
- Stanza 18 Their cloaks they shook, | their swords they sheathed, The high-born men | wrapped their mantles close.
- Stanza 18 In the manuscript these two lines are followed by stanza 19 with no indication of a break. Some editions insert here lines 2–3 of stanza 12, while others assume the loss of two or more lines.
- Stanza 19 On their road they fared | and an ill way found, And their sister’s son | on a tree they saw, On the wind-cold wolf-tree | west of the hall, And cranes’-bait crawled; | none would care to linger.
- Stanza 19 Cf. note on stanza 18. Ill way: very likely the road leading through the gate of Jormunrek’s town at which Svanhild was trampled to death. Sister’s son: many editors change the text to read “stepson,” for the reference is certainly to Randver, son of Jormunrek, hanged by his father on Bikki’s advice (cf. Guthrunarhvot, introductory note). Wolf-tree: the gallows, the wolf being symbolical of outlaws. Cranes’-bait: presumably either snakes or worms, but the passage is doubtful.
- Stanza 20 In the hall was din, | the men drank deep, And the horses’ hoofs | could no one hear, Till the warrior hardy | sounded his horn.
- Stanza 20 Many editors assume the loss of a line after line 3. The warrior: presumably a warder or watchman, but the reference may be to Hamther himself.
- Stanza 21 Men came and the tale | to Jormunrek told How warriors helmed | without they beheld: “Take counsel wise, | for brave ones are come, Of mighty men | thou the sister didst murder.”
- Stanza 21 The word here rendered men (line 1) is missing in the original, involving a metrical error, and various words have been suggested.
- Stanza 22 Then Jormunrek laughed, | his hand laid on his beard, His arms, for with wine | he was warlike, he called for; He shook his brown locks, | on his white shield he looked, And raised high the cup | of gold in his hand.
- Stanza 22 Line 2 in the original is thoroughly obscure; some editors directly reverse the meaning here indicated by giving the line a negative force, while others completely alter the phrase rendered “his arms he called for” into one meaning “he stroked his cheeks.”
- Stanza 23 “Happy, methinks, | were I to behold Hamther and Sorli | here in my hall; The men would I bind | with strings of bows, And Gjuki’s heirs | on the gallows hang.”
- Stanza 23 Gjuki’s heirs: the original has “the well-born of Gjuki,” and some editors have changed the proper name to Guthrun, but the phrase apparently refers to Hamther and Sorli as Gjuki’s grandsons. In the manuscript this stanza is followed by stanza 11, and such editors as have retained this arrangement have had to resort to varied and complex explanations to account for it.
- Stanza 24 In the hall was clamor, | the cups were shattered, Men stood in blood | from the breasts of the Goths.
- Stanza 24 Editors have made various efforts to reconstruct a four-line stanza out of these two lines, in some cases with the help of lines borrowed from the puzzling stanza 11 (cf. note on stanza 23). Line 2 in the original is doubtful.
- Stanza 25 Then did Hamther speak forth, | the haughty of heart: “Thou soughtest, Jormunrek, | us to see, Sons of one mother | seeking thy dwelling; Thou seest thy hands, | thy feet thou beholdest, Jormunrek, flung | in the fire so hot.”
- Stanza 25 Some editors mark line 1 as an interpolation. The manuscript marks line 4 as beginning a new stanza. As in the story told by Jordanes, Hamther and Sorli succeed in wounding Jormunrek (here they cut off his hands and feet), but do not kill him.
- Stanza 26 Then roared the king, | of the race of the gods, Bold in his armor, | as roars a bear: “Stone ye the men | that steel will bite not, Sword nor spear, | the sons of Jonak.” Sorli spake:
- Stanza 26 The manuscript marks line 3, and not line 1, as beginning a stanza. Of the race of the gods: the reference here is apparently to Jormunrek, but in the Volsungasaga the advice to kill Hamther and Sorli with stones, since iron will not wound them (cf. note on stanza 11), comes from Othin, who enters the hall as an old man with one eye.
- Stanza 27 “Ill didst win, brother, | when the bag thou didst open, Oft from that bag | came baleful counsel; Heart hast thou, Hamther, | if knowledge thou hadst! A man without wisdom | is lacking in much.” Hamther spake:
- Stanza 27 In the manuscript this stanza is introduced by the same line as stanza 25: “Then did Hamther speak forth, | the haughty of heart,” but the speaker in this case must be Sorli and not Hamther. Some editors, however, give lines 1–2 to Hamther and lines 3–4 to Sorli. Bag: i.e., Hamther’s mouth; cf. note on stanza 11. The manuscript indicates line 3 as beginning a new stanza.
- Stanza 28 “His head were now off | if Erp were living, The brother so keen | whom we killed on our road, The warrior noble,— | ’twas the Norns that drove me The hero to slay | who in fight should be holy.
- Stanza 28 Most editors regard stanzas 28–30 as a speech by Hamther, but the manuscript does not indicate the speaker, and some editors assign one or two of the stanzas to Sorli. Lines 1–2 are quoted in the Volsungasaga. The manuscript does not indicate line 1 as beginning a stanza. Erp: Hamther means that while the two brothers had succeeded only in wounding Jormunrek, Erp, if he had been with them, would have killed him. Lines 3–4 may be a later interpolation. Norns: the fates; the word used in the original means the goddesses of ill fortune.
- Stanza 29 “In fashion of wolves | it befits us not Amongst ourselves to strive, Like the hounds of the Norns, | that nourished were In greed mid wastes so grim.
- Stanza 29 This is almost certainly an interpolated Ljothahattr stanza, though some editors have tried to expand it into the Fornyrthislag form. Hounds of the Norns: wolves.
- Stanza 30 “We have greatly fought, | o’er the Goths do we stand By our blades laid low, | like eagles on branches; Great our fame though we die | today or tomorrow; None outlives the night | when the Norns have spoken.”
- Stanza 30 Some editors assume a gap after this stanza.
- Stanza 31 Then Sorli beside | the gable sank, And Hamther fell | at the back of the house. This is called the old ballad of Hamther. NOTES
- Stanza 31 Apparently a fragment of a stanza from the “old” Hamthesmol to which the annotator’s concluding prose note refers. Some editors assume the loss of two lines after line 2. Prose. Regarding the “old” Hamthesmol, cf. Guthrunarhvot, introductory note. PRONOUNCING INDEX OF PROPER NAMES Introductory Note The pronunciations indicated in the following index are in many cases, at best, mere approximations, and in some cases the pronunciation of the Old Norse is itself more or less conjectural. For the sake of clarity it has seemed advisable to keep the number of phonetic symbols as small as possible, even though the result is occasional failure to distinguish between closely related sounds. In every instance the object has been to provide the reader with a clearly comprehensible and approximately correct pronunciation, for which reason, particularly in such matters as division of syllables, etymology has frequently been disregarded for the sake of phonetic clearness. For example, when a root syllable ends in a long (double) consonant, the division has arbitrarily been made so as to indicate the sounding of both elements (e.g., Am-ma, not Amm-a). As many proper names occur in the notes but not in the text, and as frequently the more important incidents connected with the names are outlined in notes which would not be indicated by textual references alone, the page numbers include all appearances of proper names in the notes as well as in the text. The following general rules govern the application of the phonetic symbols used in the index, and also indicate the approximate pronunciation of the unmarked vowels and consonants. Vowels. The vowels are pronounced approximately as follows: a —as in “alone” ā —as in “father” e —as in “men” ē —as a in “fate” i —as in “is” ī —as in “machine” o —as in “on” ō —as in “old” ö —as in German “öffnen” ȫ —as in German “schön” ǭ —as aw in “law” u —as ou in “would” ū —as ou in “wound” y —as i in “is” } Both with a slight ȳ —as ee in “free” } sound of German ü æ —as e in “men” ǣ —as a in “fate” ei —as ey in “they” ey —as in “they” au —as ou in “out” ai —as i in “fine” No attempt has been made to differentiate between the short open “o” and the short closed “o,” which for speakers of English closely resemble one another. Consonants. The consonants are pronounced approximately as in English, with the following special points to be noted: G is always hard, as in “get,” never soft, as in “gem;” following “n” it has the same sound as in “si …
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