The Lament of the Border Widow

Arthur Quiller-Couch (1863–1944) · before 1800

iambic tetrameter · AABB · 28 lines · from The Oxford Book of Ballads

My love he built me a bonny bower,And clad it a’ wi’ lilye flour;A brawer bower ye ne’er did see,Than my true love he built for me.

There came a man, by middle day,He spied his sport, and went away;And brought the King that very night,Who brake my bower, and slew my knight.

He slew my knight, to me sae dear;He slew my knight, and poin’d his gear;My servants all for life did flee,And left me in extremitie.

I sew’d his sheet, making my mane;I watch’d the corpse, myself alane;I watch’d his body, night and day;No living creature came that way.

I took his body on my back,And whiles I gaed, and whiles I sat;I digg’d a grave, and laid him in,And happ’d him with the sod sae green.

But think na ye my heart was sair,When I laid the moul’ on his yellow hair;O think na ye my heart was wae,When I turn’d about, away to gae?

Nae living man I’ll love again,Since that my lovely knight is slain;Wi’ ae lock of his yellow hairI’ll chain my heart for evermair.

Words in this poem

bonny a.
Handsome; beautiful; pretty; attractively lively and graceful. [OE. boni, prob. fr. F. bon, fem. bonne, good, fr. L. bonus good. See Bounty, and cf. Bonus, Boon.]
clad v.
To clothe. Holland.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
corpse n.
A human body in general, whether living or dead; -- sometimes contemptuosly. [OF. cors (sometimes written corps), F. corps, L. corpus; akin to AS. hrif womb. See Midriff, and cf. Corse, Corselet, Corps, Cuerpo.]
whiles conj.
During the time that; while. Chaucer. Fuller.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

The Lament of the Border Widow is 28 lines in 7 stanzas of 4 lines each. The rhyme scheme is AABB, complete in 4 of its 7 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 92%). 100% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.2 syllables. 1 line ends on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending.

See other poems in iambic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB bowerA · flourA · seeB · meB
  2. 2 AABB dayA · awayA · nightB · knightB
  3. 3 AA-- dearA · gearA · flee · extremitie
  4. 4 AABB maneA · alaneA · dayB · wayB
  5. 5 --AA back · sat · inA · greenA
  6. 6 AA-- sairA · hairA · wae · gae
  7. 7 AABB againA · slainA · hairB · evermairB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
My love he built me a bonny bower,9······/˘/
And clad it a’ wi’ lilye flour;9·······/˘
A brawer bower ye ne’er did see,8·/˘/····
Than my true love he built for me.8········
There came a man, by middle day,8·····/˘·
He spied his sport, and went away;8······˘/
And brought the King that very night,8·····/˘·
Who brake my bower, and slew my knight.8···/····
He slew my knight, to me sae dear;8········
He slew my knight, and poin’d his gear;8········
My servants all for life did flee,8·/˘·····
And left me in extremitie.8········
I sew’d his sheet, making my mane;8····/˘··
I watch’d the corpse, myself alane;8·····/˘/
I watch’d his body, night and day;8···/˘···
No living creature came that way.8·/˘/˘···
I took his body on my back,8···/˘···
And whiles I gaed, and whiles I sat;8········
I digg’d a grave, and laid him in,8········
And happ’d him with the sod sae green.8········
But think na ye my heart was sair,8········
When I laid the moul’ on his yellow hair;10·······/˘·
O think na ye my heart was wae,8········
When I turn’d about, away to gae?9·····˘/··
Nae living man I’ll love again,8·/˘···˘/
Since that my lovely knight is slain;8···/˘···
Wi’ ae lock of his yellow hair8·····/˘·
I’ll chain my heart for evermair.8········

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