Ode

Arthur William Edgar O’shaughnessy (1844–1881) · 1844–1881

iambic tetrameter · ABABABAB · 24 lines · from Poems

We are the music-makers,And we are the dreamers of dreams,Wandering by lone sea-breakers,And sitting by desolate streams;World-losers and world-forsakers,On whom the pale moon gleams:Yet we are the movers and shakersOf the world for ever, it seems.

With wonderful deathless dittiesWe build up the world’s great cities,And out of a fabulous storyWe fashion an empire’s glory:One man with a dream, at pleasure,Shall go forth and conquer a crown;And three with a new song’s measureCan trample an empire down.

We, in the ages lyingIn the buried past of the earth,Built Nineveh with our sighing,And Babel itself with our mirth;And o’erthrew them with prophesyingTo the old of the new world’s worth;For each age is a dream that is dying,Or one that is coming to birth.

Words in this poem

lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.
deathless a.
Not subject to death, destruction, or extinction; immortal; undying; imperishable; as, deathless beings; deathless fame.
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
babel n.
The city and tower in the land of Shinar, where the confusion of languages took place. [Heb. Babel, the name of the capital of Babylonia; in Genesis associated with the idea of "confusion"]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Ode is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Oxford Book of English Verse, 1250-1900, Project Gutenberg ebook #66619; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Arthur William Edgar O’shaughnessy, Ode, in Poems (1844–1881), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #66619, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/obev-arthur-william-edgar-oshaughnessy/ode.html, id L16268.

Form and metre

Ode is 24 lines in 3 stanzas of 8 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABABAB, complete in 2 of its 3 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 75%). 87% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.1 syllables. 12 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 25% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABABAB makersA · dreamsB · breakersA · streamsB · forsakersA · gleamsB · shakersA · seemsB
  2. 2 AABBCDCD dittiesA · citiesA · storyB · gloryB · pleasureC · crownD · measureC · downD
  3. 3 ABABABAB lyingA · earthB · sighingA · mirthB · prophesyingA · worthB · dyingA · birthB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
We are the music-makers,7···/˘/˘
And we are the dreamers of dreams,8····/˘··
Wandering by lone sea-breakers,8/˘˘···/˘
And sitting by desolate streams;8·/˘·/˘˘·
World-losers and world-forsakers,8·/˘·····
On whom the pale moon gleams:6······
Yet we are the movers and shakers9····/˘·/˘
Of the world for ever, it seems.8····/˘··
With wonderful deathless ditties8·/˘˘/˘/˘
We build up the world’s great cities,8······/˘
And out of a fabulous story9····/˘˘/˘
We fashion an empire’s glory:9·/˘·/˘˘/˘
One man with a dream, at pleasure,8······/˘
Shall go forth and conquer a crown;8····/˘··
And three with a new song’s measure8······/˘
Can trample an empire down.8·/˘·/˘˘·
We, in the ages lying7···/˘/˘
In the buried past of the earth,8··/˘····
Built Nineveh with our sighing,9·/˘˘·/˘/˘
And Babel itself with our mirth;8·/˘˘/·/·
And o’erthrew them with prophesying8········
To the old of the new world’s worth;8········
For each age is a dream that is dying,10········/˘
Or one that is coming to birth.8····/˘··

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