Part III: The Hideous Hermit

Alfred Noyes (1880–1958) · 1913

trochaic tetrameter · ABABCDCD · 146 lines · from Collected Poems, Volume One

Ah, what wonders round us roseWhen we dared to pause and look,Curious things that seemed all toes,Goblins from a picture-book;Ants like witches, four feet high,Waving all their skinny arms,Glared at us and wandered by,Muttering their ancestral charms.

Stately forms in green and goldArmour strutted through the glades,Just as Hamlet's ghost, we're told,Mooned among the midnight shades:

Once a sort of devil cameScattering broken trees about,Winged with leather, eyed with flame,--He was but a moth, no doubt.

Here and there, above us clombFeathery clumps of palm on high:Those were ferns, of course, but someReally seemed to touch the sky;Yes; and down one fragrant glade,Listening as we onward stole,Half delighted, half afraid,Dong, we heard the hare-bells toll!

Something told us what that gleamDown the glen was brooding o'er;Something told us in a dreamWhat the bells were tolling for!Something told us there was fear,Horror, peril, on our way!Was it far or was it near?Near, we heard the night-wind say.

Toll, the music reeled and pealedThrough the vast and sombre trees,Where a rosy light revealedDimmer, sweeter mysteries;And, like petals of the rose,Fairy fans in beauty beat,Light in light--ah, what were thoseRhymes we heard the night repeat?

Toll, a dream within a dream,Up an aisle of rose and blue,Up the music's perfumed streamCame the words, and then we knew,

Knew that in that distant glenOnce again the case was tried,Hark!--Who killed Cock Robin, then?And a tiny voice replied,"IkilledCockRobin!"

"I! And who are You, sir, pray?"Growled a voice that froze our marrow:"Who!" we heard the murderer say,"Lord, sir, I'm the famous Sparrow,And this 'ere's my bow and arrow!IkilledCockRobin!"

Then, with one great indrawn breath,Such a sighin' and a sobbin'Rose all round us for the deathOf poor, poor Cock Robin,Oh, we couldn't bear to waitEven to hear the murderer's fate,Which we'd often wished to knowSitting in the fireside glowAnd with hot revengeful looksSearched for in the nursery-books;For the Robin and the WrenAre such friends to mortal men,Such dear friends to mortal men!

Toll; and through the woods once moreStole we, drenched with fragrant dew:Toll; the hare-bell's burden boreDeeper meanings than we knew:Still it told us there was fear,Horror, peril on our way!Was it far or was it near?Near, we heard the night-wind say!

Near; and once or twice we sawSomething like a monstrous eye,Something like a hideous clawSteal between us and the sky:Still we hummed a dauntless tuneTrying to think such things might beGlimpses of the fairy moonHiding in some hairy tree.

Yet around us as we wentThrough the glades of rose and blueSweetness with the horror blentWonder-wild in scent and hue:Here Aladdin's cavern yawned,Jewelled thick with gorgeous dyes;There a head of clover dawnedLike a cloud In eastern skies.

Hills of topaz, lakes of dew,Fairy cliffs of crystal sheenPassed we; and the forest's blueSea of branches tossed between:Once we saw a gryphon makeOne soft iris as it passedLike the curving meteor's wakeO'er the forest, far and fast.

Winged with purple, breathing flame,Crimson-eyed we saw him go,Where--ah! could it be the sameCockchafer we used to know?--Valley-lilies overhead,High aloof in clustered spray,Far through heaven their splendour spread,Glimmering like the Milky Way.

Mammoths father calls "extinct,"Creatures that the cave-men feared,Through that forest walked and blinked,Through that jungle crawled and leered;Beasts no Nimrod ever knew,Woolly bears black and red;Crocodiles, we wondered whoEver dared to see them fed,

Were they lizards? If they were,They could swallow us with ease;But they slumbered quietly thereIn among the mighty trees;Red and silver, blue and green,Played the moonlight on their scales;Golden eyes they had, and leanCrookèd legs with cruel nails.

Yet again, oh, faint and far,Came the shadow of a cry,Like the calling of a starTo its brother in the sky;Like an echo in a caveWhere young mermen sound their shells,Like the wind across a graveBright with scent of lily-bells.

Like a fairy hunter's hornSounding in some purple glenSweet revelly to the mornAnd the fairy quest again:Then, all round it surged a songWe could never understandThough it lingered with us long,And it seemed so sad and grand.

Words in this poem 22
curious a.
Difficult to please or satisfy; solicitous to be correct; careful; scrupulous; nice; exact. [OF. curios, curius, F. curieux, L. curiosus careful, inquisitive, fr. cura care. See Cure.]
skinny a.
Consisting, or chiefly consisting, of skin; wanting flesh.
armour n.
Defensive arms for the body; any clothing or covering worn to protect one's person in battle. [OE. armure, fr. F. armure, OF. armeure, fr. L. armatura. See Armature.]
ghost n.
The spirit; the soul of man. [OE. gast, gost, soul, spirit, AS. gast breath, spirit, soul; akin to OS. g spirit, soul, D. geest, G. geist, and prob. to E. gaze, ghastly.]
mooned a.
Of or resembling the moon; symbolized by the moon.
glade n.
An open passage through a wood; a grassy open or cleared space in a forest. [Prob. of Scand. origin, and akin to glad, a.; cf. also W. golead, goleuad, a lighting, illumination, fr. goleu light, clear, bright, goleu fwlch glade, lit., a ]
stole n.
A long, loose garment reaching to the feet. [AS. stole, L. stola, Gr. stall. See Stall.]
delighted a.
Endowed with delight.
sombre n.
Gloom; obscurity; duskiness; somberness.
fireside n.
A place near the fire or hearth; home; domestic life or retirement.
nursery n.
The act of nursing. [Cf. F. nourricerie.]
dauntless a.
Incapable of being daunted; undaunted; bold; fearless; intrepid.
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
blent p. p.
Blinded. Also (Chaucer), 3d sing. pres. Blindeth.
gorgeous a.
Imposing through splendid or various colors; showy; fine; magnificent. [OF. gorgias beautiful, glorious, vain, luxurious; cf. OF. gorgias ruff, neck handkerchief, and F. gorge throat, and se pengorger to assume airs. Cf. Gorge, n.]
sheen v. i.
To shine; to glisten.
gryphon n.
The griffin vulture.
cockchafer n.
A beetle of the genus Melolontha (esp. M. vulgaris) and allied genera; -- called also May bug, chafer, or dorbeetle. [See Chafer the beetle.]
splendour n.
Great brightness; brilliant luster; brilliancy; as, the splendor ot the sun. B. Jonson. [L. fr. splendere to shine: cf. F. splendeur.]
jungle n.
A dense growth of brushwood, grasses, reeds, vines, etc.; an almost impenetrable thicket of trees, canes, and reedy vegetation, as in India, Africa, Australia, and Brazil. [Hind. jangal desert, forest, jungle; Skr. ja desert.]
wondered a.
Having performed wonders; able to perform wonderful things.
morn n.
The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Part III: The Hideous Hermit is 146 lines in 19 stanzas. The rhyme scheme is ABABCDCD, complete in 10 of its 19 stanzas. The metre is trochaic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 91%).

See other poems in trochaic tetrameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 ABABCDCD roseA · lookB · toesA · bookB · highC · armsD · byC · charmsD
  2. 2 ABAB goldA · gladesB · toldA · shadesB
  3. 3 ABAB cameA · aboutB · flameA · doubtB
  4. 4 -A-ABCBC clomb · highA · some · skyA · gladeB · stoleC · afraidB · tollC
  5. 5 A-A-BCBC gleamA · o'er · dreamA · for · fearB · wayC · nearB · sayC
  6. 6 ABABCDCD pealedA · treesB · revealedA · mysteriesB · roseC · beatD · thoseC · repeatD
  7. 7 ABAB dreamA · blueB · streamA · knewB
  8. 8 ABAB---- glenA · triedB · thenA · repliedB · i · killed · cock · robin
  9. 9 ABABB---- prayA · marrowB · sayA · sparrowB · arrowB · i · killed · cock · robin
  10. 10 ABABCCDDEEFFF breathA · sobbinB · deathA · robinB · waitC · fateC · knowD · glowD · looksE · booksE · wrenF · menF · menF
  11. 11 ABABCDCD moreA · dewB · boreA · knewB · fearC · wayD · nearC · sayD
  12. 12 ABABCDCD sawA · eyeB · clawA · skyB · tuneC · beD · moonC · treeD
  13. 13 ABABCDCD wentA · blueB · blentA · hueB · yawnedC · dyesD · dawnedC · skiesD
  14. 14 ABABCDCD dewA · sheenB · blueA · betweenB · makeC · passedD · wakeC · fastD
  15. 15 ABABCDCD flameA · goB · sameA · knowB · overheadC · sprayD · spreadC · wayD
  16. 16 ABABCDCD extinctA · fearedB · blinkedA · leeredB · knewC · redD · whoC · fedD
  17. 17 -A-ABCBC were · easeA · there · treesA · greenB · scalesC · leanB · nailsC
  18. 18 ABABCDCD farA · cryB · starA · skyB · caveC · shellsD · graveC · bellsD
  19. 19 ABABCDCD hornA · glenB · mornA · againB · songC · understandD · longC · grandD
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against trochaic tetrameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Ah, what wonders round us rose7··/˘···
When we dared to pause and look,7·······
Curious things that seemed all toes,7/˘·····
Goblins from a picture-book;7/˘··/˘·
Ants like witches, four feet high,7··/˘···
Waving all their skinny arms,7/˘··/˘·
Glared at us and wandered by,7····/˘·
Muttering their ancestral charms.7/˘·˘/˘·
Stately forms in green and gold7/˘·····
Armour strutted through the glades,7/˘/˘···
Just as Hamlet's ghost, we're told,7··/˘···
Mooned among the midnight shades:7····/··
Once a sort of devil came7····/˘·
Scattering broken trees about,7/˘/˘···
Winged with leather, eyed with flame,--7··/˘···
He was but a moth, no doubt.7·······
Here and there, above us clomb7·······
Feathery clumps of palm on high:7/˘·····
Those were ferns, of course, but some7·······
Really seemed to touch the sky;7/˘·····
Yes; and down one fragrant glade,7····/˘·
Listening as we onward stole,7/˘··/˘·
Half delighted, half afraid,7·˘/˘·˘/
Dong, we heard the hare-bells toll!7·······
Something told us what that gleam7/˘·····
Down the glen was brooding o'er;7····/˘·
Something told us in a dream7/˘·····
What the bells were tolling for!7····/˘·
Something told us there was fear,7/˘·····
Horror, peril, on our way!7/˘/˘·/·
Was it far or was it near?7·······
Near, we heard the night-wind say.7·······
Toll, the music reeled and pealed7··/˘···
Through the vast and sombre trees,7····/˘·
Where a rosy light revealed7··/˘·˘/
Dimmer, sweeter mysteries;7/˘/˘/˘˘
And, like petals of the rose,7··/˘···
Fairy fans in beauty beat,7/˘··/˘·
Light in light--ah, what were those7·······
Rhymes we heard the night repeat?7·····˘/
Toll, a dream within a dream,7·······
Up an aisle of rose and blue,7·······
Up the music's perfumed stream7··/˘˘/·
Came the words, and then we knew,7·······
Knew that in that distant glen7····/˘·
Once again the case was tried,7·˘/····
Hark!--Who killed Cock Robin, then?7····/˘·
And a tiny voice replied,7··/˘·˘/
"I1·
killed1·
Cock1·
Robin!"2/˘
"I! And who are You, sir, pray?"7·······
Growled a voice that froze our marrow:8·····//˘
"Who!" we heard the murderer say,7····/˘·
"Lord, sir, I'm the famous Sparrow,8····/˘/˘
And this 'ere's my bow and arrow!8······/˘
I1·
killed1·
Cock1·
Robin!"2/˘
Then, with one great indrawn breath,7····/˘·
Such a sighin' and a sobbin'8········
Rose all round us for the death7·······
Of poor, poor Cock Robin,6····/˘
Oh, we couldn't bear to wait7··/˘···
Even to hear the murderer's fate,7/···/˘·
Which we'd often wished to know7··/˘···
Sitting in the fireside glow8/˘··/˘··
And with hot revengeful looks7···˘/˘·
Searched for in the nursery-books;7····/˘·
For the Robin and the Wren7··/˘···
Are such friends to mortal men,7····/˘·
Such dear friends to mortal men!7····/˘·
Toll; and through the woods once more7·······
Stole we, drenched with fragrant dew:7····/˘·
Toll; the hare-bell's burden bore7····/˘·
Deeper meanings than we knew:7/˘/˘···
Still it told us there was fear,7·······
Horror, peril on our way!7/˘/˘·/·
Was it far or was it near?7·······
Near, we heard the night-wind say!7·······
Near; and once or twice we saw7·······
Something like a monstrous eye,7/˘··/˘·
Something like a hideous claw7/˘··/˘·
Steal between us and the sky:7·······
Still we hummed a dauntless tune7····/˘·
Trying to think such things might be8/˘······
Glimpses of the fairy moon7/˘··/˘·
Hiding in some hairy tree.7/˘··/˘·
Yet around us as we went7·······
Through the glades of rose and blue7·······
Sweetness with the horror blent7/˘··/˘·
Wonder-wild in scent and hue:7/˘·····
Here Aladdin's cavern yawned,7·˘/˘/˘·
Jewelled thick with gorgeous dyes;7/˘··/˘·
There a head of clover dawned7····/˘·
Like a cloud In eastern skies.7····/˘·
Hills of topaz, lakes of dew,7··/····
Fairy cliffs of crystal sheen7/˘··/˘·
Passed we; and the forest's blue7····/˘·
Sea of branches tossed between:7··/˘···
Once we saw a gryphon make7····/˘·
One soft iris as it passed7··/˘···
Like the curving meteor's wake7··/˘/˘·
O'er the forest, far and fast.7··/˘···
Winged with purple, breathing flame,7··/˘/˘·
Crimson-eyed we saw him go,7/˘·····
Where--ah! could it be the same7·······
Cockchafer we used to know?--6/˘····
Valley-lilies overhead,7/˘/˘/˘/
High aloof in clustered spray,7·˘/·/˘·
Far through heaven their splendour spread,7··/·/˘·
Glimmering like the Milky Way.7/˘··/˘·
Mammoths father calls "extinct,"7/˘/˘·˘/
Creatures that the cave-men feared,7/˘·····
Through that forest walked and blinked,7··/˘···
Through that jungle crawled and leered;7··/˘···
Beasts no Nimrod ever knew,7··/˘/˘·
Woolly bears black and red;6/˘····
Crocodiles, we wondered who7/˘··/˘·
Ever dared to see them fed,7/˘·····
Were they lizards? If they were,7··/˘···
They could swallow us with ease;7··/˘···
But they slumbered quietly there7··/˘/˘·
In among the mighty trees;7····/˘·
Red and silver, blue and green,7··/˘···
Played the moonlight on their scales;7··/····
Golden eyes they had, and lean7/˘·····
Crookèd legs with cruel nails.6···/˘·
Yet again, oh, faint and far,7·˘/····
Came the shadow of a cry,7··/····
Like the calling of a star7··/˘···
To its brother in the sky;7··/˘···
Like an echo in a cave7··/˘···
Where young mermen sound their shells,7·······
Like the wind across a grave7···˘/··
Bright with scent of lily-bells.7····/˘·
Like a fairy hunter's horn7··/˘/˘·
Sounding in some purple glen7/˘··/˘·
Sweet revelly to the morn7·······
And the fairy quest again:7··/˘·˘/
Then, all round it surged a song7·······
We could never understand7··/˘·˘/
Though it lingered with us long,7··/˘···
And it seemed so sad and grand.7·······

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