Adventure XVIII: How Kriemhild would not return to the Lowland with Siegmund

Anonymous (about 1200), translated by Arthur S. Way · 1911

rhyming couplets · 128 lines · from The Lay of the Nibelung Men

Then went the old King Siegmund where Kriemhild sat in her woe,And he spake to the Queen: "To our own land homeward now let us go.Guests are we all-unwelcome, I trow well, here by the Rhine.Come with us, Kriemhild belovèd, to our country, thine and mine.That thy kin in the land Burgundian have so evil entreated usIn slaying thy noble husband by murder most treacherous,It shall not be remembered against thee: my love shall cherish thylife,For the sake of my son and the noble child he hath left to his wife.That Siegfried gave to thee ever, that lord of the noble soul.The crown shalt thou wear, and the kingdom shall bow beneath thysway.Thee shall the vassals of Siegfried with willing heart obey,"Then the word to the squires was given, "Home ride we ere eventide!"Out of the field they gathered in haste the steeds they should ride.To dwell mid their deadly foemen was now to their souls as gall.For the journey prepared was raiment of the dames and the handmaidsall.

But now when the old King Siegmund was at point to ride away,Drew nigh the kinsmen of Kriemhild to plead with her and to prayThat still she would stay with her mother in the land of Burgundy.Made answer the joyless-hearted: "Now nay, it can never be!How could I endure it, that ever I should look upon him with mineeyesWho hath dealt with me, the hapless, in such despiteful wise?"But the young Prince Giselher answered: "Sister belovèd, nowBy a child's true love I adjure thee, abide with thy mother thou!For them which have darkened thy spirit, for them which have woundedthine heart,No need hast thou of their service; in all that is mine thou hastpart."But she to the knight made answer: "How can it be? Ah no!If I look on the face of Hagen, I must die for utter woe.""Now nay, O sister belovèd, from this will I guard thee well.With Giselher thy brother here sheltered shalt thou dwell.My love for the death of thy dear lord shall atone in very deed."And the joyless made answer: "Kriemhild thereof hath bitter need!"Now when in such loving fashion pleaded with her the lad,Their prayers unto his supplication did Uta and Gernot add.Yea, all her loyal kinsfolk entreated her there to stay."Among all the people of Siegfried no kinsman thou hast," said they."They be all unto thee as strangers, as aliens," Gernot said."Though the living may love thee, the strongest must needs at thelast lie dead.Bethink thee thereof, dear sister: to thine heart speak comfortably.Here tarry with thine own kinsfolk: so shall it be well with thee."

So she gave to her brother the promise, to abide with them in theland.Now by this were the horses gathered for the men of Siegmund's band;And all to the land of the Niblungs were ready to ride away,And laden upon the horses was the good knights' war-array.Then unto the bower of Kriemhild went grey-haired Siegmund the King,And he spake to the Lady: "The warriors of Siegfried's followingStand waiting beside their horses. Forth and away let us ride.The hours unto me are bitter while with Burgundy's folk I abide."But the Lady Kriemhild made answer: "My kinsmen have wrought on mywill,Even my nearest and dearest, here to abide with them still.None in the land of the Niblungs, say they, of my blood can I find."Then sore aggrieved was Siegmund that such should be Kriemhild'smind.And answered and spake the old King: "Lest any deceive thee beware.Thou before all my kinsfolk the royal crown shalt wear,Yea, wear it by right of kingship, even as heretofore.For this shalt thou nowise suffer, that thy lord is beside thee nomore.Nay, forth with us do thou journey unto thine home and thy child;Let him not be an orphan, his father dead, his mother exiled.When thy son is grown unto manhood, thy comfort shall he be then:Till then shalt thou have true service of many valiant men."

But she answered: "My dear lord Siegmund, with thee I may not ride.Nay, here with mine own must I tarry, what issue soever betide.In my grief and my wrong to my kinsfolk for comfort and help must Ilook."When this was told them, the tidings ill could the good knightsbrook.With one voice cried they against it: "Our plight may we surelydeploreThat on us hath affliction lighted now as never before!If here in the land Burgundian thou with our foes wilt abide,Never have heroes ridden to an eviller festal-tide!"But she answered: "In God's good keeping shall ye fearlessly journeyhome.I will get for you trusty escort for your warding until ye be comeUnto your own dear country. Good knights, farewell each one.Unto your love and compassion I commend my little son."

So when they knew of a surety that they could not in any wise shakeHer purpose, the men of Siegfried into bitter weeping brake.Ah, with what deep heart-anguish King Siegmund took farewellOf Kriemhild! Renewal of sorrow on the childless father fell."A curse on that festal high-day!" the King in bitterness cried:"Never to king and his dear ones did such foul fortune betideAs here upon us hath fallen--and that at a feast, good sooth!In Burgundy here shall they see us never again, of a truth!"Then in fierce anger shouted the thanes of Siegfried's band:"Nay, once more yet may we journey unto this accursèd land,If we find, if we prove of a surety who laid our dear lord low.Amidst his friends have they won them deadly foes enow!"For the last time kissed he Kriemhild. He spake in sorrow's despair,When he saw her steadfastly purposed to abide with her people there:"Now ride we forth all joyless, as home to our people we go!Now first my depth of affliction and all my sorrow I know!"

So rode they without all escort from Worms on Rhine away.Well might they go all-fearless: so stern of mood were they,That if haply foemen in malice had set upon them then,Their heads had their own hands warded, those aweless Niblung men.No leave would they take of any: they shook off the dust of theirfeet.Yet Giselher and Gernot full lovingly came to greetThe old king at his departing; for they sorrowed in his heart-pain,And thereof did they give clear witness, those valiant heroes twain.For to Siegmund spake Prince Gernot exceeding courteously:"Now God in Heaven be witness, of the death of Siegfried am IWholly and utterly guiltless! Never I heard this said,That any bare him malice. From mine heart do I mourn for thy dead."Then Giselher the young prince provided them escort fair.So led he unvexed of any the hearts overburdened with care,Even the King and his good knights, back to their Netherland home.Ah, with how little rejoicing their kinsmen beheld them come!

Touching all that befell them thereafter the old song holdeth itspeace:But at Worms was the plaining of Kriemhild heard without surceaseThat her heart and her wounded spirit had no comforter,Save one, the loving and faithful, her brother Giselher.But there sat Brunhild the lovely enthroned in her arrogant pride.Little she recked of Kriemhild as from depths of despair she cried.Never in kindness or pity she stooped to the stricken again.But the years stole on, till Kriemhild wrung her heart too with pain.

Words in this poem 44
went n.
Course; way; path; journey; direction.
homeward a.
Being in the direction of home; as, the homeward way.
trow v. i.
To believe; to trust; to think or suppose. [OE. trowen, AS.treówan to trust, believe, fr. treów trust, treówe true, faithful. See True.]
shall v. i.
To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
shalt
2d per. sing. of Shall.
eventide n.
The time of evening; evening. [AS. æfentid. See Tide.]
dwell v. i.
To delay; to linger. [OE. dwellen, dwelien, to err, linger, AS. dwellan to deceive, hinder, delay, dwelian to err; akin to Icel. dvelja to delay, tarry, Sw. dväljas to dwell, Dan. dv]
burgundy n.
An old province of France (in the eastern central part).
joyless a.
Not having joy; not causing joy; unenjoyable.
hapless a.
Without hap or luck; luckless; unfortunate; unlucky; unhappy; as, hapless youth; hapless maid.
despiteful a.
Full of despite; expressing malice or contemptuous hate; malicious. [See Despite, and cf. Spiteful.]
adjure v. t.
To charge, bind, or command, solemnly, as if under oath, or under the penalty of a curse; to appeal to in the most solemn or impressive manner; to entreat earnestly. [L. adjurare, adjurdium, to swear to; later, to adjure: cf. F. adjurer. See Jury.]
hast
, 2d pers. sing. pres. of. Fave, contr. of havest.
atone v. t.
To set at one; to reduce to concord; to reconcile, as parties at variance; to appease.
kinsfolk n.
Relatives; kindred; kin; persons of the same family or closely or closely related families.
kinsman n.
A man of the same race or family; one related by blood.
needs adv.
Of necessity; necessarily; indispensably; -- often with must, and equivalent to of need. [Orig. gen. of need, used as an adverb. Cf. - wards.]
comfortably adv.
In a comfortable or comforting manner.
folk n.
In Anglo-Saxon times, the people of a group of townships or villages; a community; a tribe. [AS. folc; akin to D. volk, OS. & OHG. folk, G. volk, Icel. f, Sw. & Dan. folk, Lith. pulkas crowd, and perh. to E. follow.]
beware v. t.
To avoid; to take care of; to have a care for.
kingship n.
The state, office, or dignity of a king; royalty. Landor.
nowise adv.
Not in any manner or degree; in no way; noways. [For in no wise. See Wise, n.]
valiant a.
Vigorous in body; strong; powerful; as, a valiant fencer. [OE. valiant, F. vaillant, OF. vaillant, valant, originally p. pr. of OF. & F. valoir to be worth, L. valere to be strong. See Wield, and cf. Avail, Convalesce, ]
betide v. t.
To happen to; to befall; to come to ; as, woe betide the wanderer. [OE. bitiden; pref. bi-, be- + tiden, fr. AS. tidan, to happen, fr. tid time. See Tide.]
plight v. t.
To weave; to braid; to fold; to plait. [OE. pliten; probably through Old French, fr. LL. plectare, L. plectere. See Plait, Ply.]
deplore v. t.
To feel or to express deep and poignant grief for; to bewail; to lament; to mourn; to sorrow over. [L. deplorare; de- + plorare to cry out, wail, lament; prob. akin to pluere to rain, and to E. flow: cf. F. déplorer. Cf. Flow.]
festal a.
Of or pertaining to a holiday or a feast; joyous; festive. [L. festum holiday, feast. See feast.]
sooth a.
True; faithful; trustworthy. [OE. soth, AS. s, for san; akin to OS. s, OHG. sand, Icel. sannr, Sw. sann, Dan. sand, Skr. sat, sant, real, genuine, present, being; properly p. pr. from a root]
amidst prep.
In the midst or middle of; surrounded or encompassed by; among. [OE. amidde, amiddes, on midden, AS. on middan, in the middle, fr. midde the middle. The s is an adverbial ending, originally marking the genitive; the t is a la]
enow
A form of Enough.
steadfastly adv.
In a steadfast manner; firmly.
rode n.
Redness; complexion. [See Rud.]
haply adv.
By hap, chance, luck, or accident; perhaps; it may be.
shook v. t.
To pack, as staves, in a shook.
lovingly adv.
With love; affectionately.
sorrowed a.
Accompanied with sorrow; sorrowful.
twain a.
Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]
guiltless a.
Free from guilt; innocent.
thereafter adv.
After that; afterward. [AS. th\'d6ræfter after that. See There, and After.]
plaining a.
Complaining. Bryant.
surcease v. t.
To cause to cease; to end.
comforter n.
One who administers comfort or consolation.
stricken p. p.
Struck; smitten; wounded; as, the stricken deer.
stole n.
A long, loose garment reaching to the feet. [AS. stole, L. stola, Gr. stall. See Stall.]

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

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Form and metre

Adventure XVIII: How Kriemhild would not return to the Lowland with Siegmund is 128 lines in 7 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 52% of the lines. 80% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 13.4 syllables. 10 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 23% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.

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Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCCDEE-DFFGGH-H woeA · goA · rhineB · mineB · usC · treacherousC · thyD · lifeE · wifeE · soul · thyD · swayF · obeyF · eventideG · rideG · gallH · handmaids · allH
  2. 2 AA-B-CCDD-E-EFFGGHHIIAAJBJ-B awayA · prayA · burgundy · beB · mine · eyesC · wiseC · nowD · thouD · wounded · heartE · hast · partE · noF · woeF · wellG · dwellG · deedH · needH · ladI · addI · stayA · theyA · saidJ · theB · deadJ · comfortably · theeB
  3. 3 -AABBCCDD-EEF-FGGH-HIIJJ the · landA · bandA · awayB · arrayB · kingC · followingC · rideD · abideD · my · willE · stillE · findF · kriemhild's · mindF · bewareG · wearG · heretoforeH · no · moreH · childI · exiledI · thenJ · menJ
  4. 4 AA-B-B-CCAA-DDEE rideA · betideA · i · lookB · knights · brookB · surely · deploreC · beforeC · abideA · tideA · journey · homeD · comeD · oneE · sonE
  5. 5 AABBCCDDEEF-GGFF shakeA · brakeA · farewellB · fellB · criedC · betideC · soothD · truthD · bandE · landE · lowF · enow · despairG · thereG · goF · knowF
  6. 6 AABBCDDEE--FFCCGG awayA · theyA · thenB · menB · theirC · feetD · greetD · painE · twainE · courteously · i · saidF · deadF · fairC · careC · homeG · comeG
  7. 7 -AA--BBCC its · peaceA · surceaseA · comforter · giselher · prideB · criedB · againC · painC
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Then went the old King Siegmund where Kriemhild sat in her woe,14·····/˘·······
And he spake to the Queen: "To our own land homeward now let us go.17·······/˘··/˘····
Guests are we all-unwelcome, I trow well, here by the Rhine.14····˘/˘·······
Come with us, Kriemhild belovèd, to our country, thine and mine.15········/˘/˘···
That thy kin in the land Burgundian have so evil entreated us18······˘/˘˘··/˘····
In slaying thy noble husband by murder most treacherous,15·/˘·/˘/˘·/˘·/˘˘
It shall not be remembered against thee: my love shall cherish thy16····˘/˘······/˘·
life,1·
For the sake of my son and the noble child he hath left to his wife.17········/˘·······
That Siegfried gave to thee ever, that lord of the noble soul.15·/····/˘····/˘·
The crown shalt thou wear, and the kingdom shall bow beneath thy14·······/˘·····
sway.1·
Thee shall the vassals of Siegfried with willing heart obey,"14···/˘·/··/˘·˘/
Then the word to the squires was given, "Home ride we ere eventide!"17·····/˘·/˘····/˘˘
Out of the field they gathered in haste the steeds they should ride.14·····/˘·······
To dwell mid their deadly foemen was now to their souls as gall.15····/˘·········
For the journey prepared was raiment of the dames and the handmaids16··/˘˘/·/˘·······
all.1·
But now when the old King Siegmund was at point to ride away,15······/˘·····˘/
Drew nigh the kinsmen of Kriemhild to plead with her and to pray15···············
That still she would stay with her mother in the land of Burgundy.16·······/˘····/˘˘
Made answer the joyless-hearted: "Now nay, it can never be!15·/˘·/˘/˘····/˘·
How could I endure it, that ever I should look upon him with mine17···˘/··/˘········
eyes1·
Who hath dealt with me, the hapless, in such despiteful wise?"14······/˘··˘/˘·
But the young Prince Giselher answered: "Sister belovèd, now14·······/˘/˘···
By a child's true love I adjure thee, abide with thy mother thou!16······˘/·˘/··/˘·
For them which have darkened thy spirit, for them which have wounded15····/˘·/˘····/˘
thine heart,2··
No need hast thou of their service; in all that is mine thou hast15······/˘·······
part."1·
But she to the knight made answer: "How can it be? Ah no!14······/˘······
If I look on the face of Hagen, I must die for utter woe."16·······/˘····/˘·
"Now nay, O sister belovèd, from this will I guard thee well.14···/˘·········
With Giselher thy brother here sheltered shalt thou dwell.13·····/˘·/˘···
My love for the death of thy dear lord shall atone in very deed."16··········˘/·/˘·
And the joyless made answer: "Kriemhild thereof hath bitter need!"15··/˘·/˘·····/˘·
Now when in such loving fashion pleaded with her the lad,14····/˘/˘/˘····
Their prayers unto his supplication did Uta and Gernot add.16················
Yea, all her loyal kinsfolk entreated her there to stay.14···/˘/˘·······
"Among all the people of Siegfried no kinsman thou hast," said they.16····/˘·/··/·····
"They be all unto thee as strangers, as aliens," Gernot said.16·······/˘·/˘˘···
"Though the living may love thee, the strongest must needs at the14··/˘····/˘····
last lie dead.3···
Bethink thee thereof, dear sister: to thine heart speak comfortably.16˘/····/˘····/˘˘˘
Here tarry with thine own kinsfolk: so shall it be well with thee."15·/˘···/˘·······
So she gave to her brother the promise, to abide with them in the17·····/˘·/˘·˘/····
land.1·
Now by this were the horses gathered for the men of Siegmund's band;16·····/˘/˘····/˘·
And all to the land of the Niblungs were ready to ride away,16··········/˘··˘/
And laden upon the horses was the good knights' war-array.15·/˘···/˘·····˘/
Then unto the bower of Kriemhild went grey-haired Siegmund the King,16····/˘······/˘··
And he spake to the Lady: "The warriors of Siegfried's following17·····/˘·/˘˘·/·/˘˘
Stand waiting beside their horses. Forth and away let us ride.15·/˘˘/·/˘··˘/···
The hours unto me are bitter while with Burgundy's folk I abide."18·/˘····/˘··/˘˘··˘/
But the Lady Kriemhild made answer: "My kinsmen have wrought on my16··/˘···/˘·······
will,1·
Even my nearest and dearest, here to abide with them still.15/˘·/˘·/˘··˘/···
None in the land of the Niblungs, say they, of my blood can I find."16················
Then sore aggrieved was Siegmund that such should be Kriemhild's13··˘/·/˘······
mind.1·
And answered and spake the old King: "Lest any deceive thee beware.16·/˘······/˘˘/·˘/
Thou before all my kinsfolk the royal crown shalt wear,13·····/˘·/˘···
Yea, wear it by right of kingship, even as heretofore.14······/˘/˘··˘/
For this shalt thou nowise suffer, that thy lord is beside thee no16····/˘/˘····˘/··
more.1·
Nay, forth with us do thou journey unto thine home and thy child;15······/˘·······
Let him not be an orphan, his father dead, his mother exiled.16·····/˘·/˘··/˘/·
When thy son is grown unto manhood, thy comfort shall he be then:16·······/··/˘····
Till then shalt thou have true service of many valiant men."14······/˘·/˘/˘·
But she answered: "My dear lord Siegmund, with thee I may not ride.15··/˘···/˘······
Nay, here with mine own must I tarry, what issue soever betide.17·······/˘·/˘˘/˘˘/
In my grief and my wrong to my kinsfolk for comfort and help must I17········/˘·/˘····
look."1·
When this was told them, the tidings ill could the good knights13······/˘·····
brook.1·
With one voice cried they against it: "Our plight may we surely15········/˘···/˘
deplore2˘/
That on us hath affliction lighted now as never before!15····˘/˘/˘··/˘··
If here in the land Burgundian thou with our foes wilt abide,17·····˘/˘˘··/˘··˘/
Never have heroes ridden to an eviller festal-tide!"15/˘·/˘/˘·····/˘·
But she answered: "In God's good keeping shall ye fearlessly journey16··/˘···/˘·····/˘
home.1·
I will get for you trusty escort for your warding until ye be come18·····/˘˘/··/˘·····
Unto your own dear country. Good knights, farewell each one.13·····/˘···/··
Unto your love and compassion I commend my little son."15·····˘/˘·˘/·/˘·
So when they knew of a surety that they could not in any wise shake18······/˘˘·····/˘··
Her purpose, the men of Siegfried into bitter weeping brake.15·/˘···/···/˘/˘·
Ah, with what deep heart-anguish King Siegmund took farewell13·····/˘·/˘··/
Of Kriemhild! Renewal of sorrow on the childless father fell.16···˘/˘·/˘··/˘/˘·
"A curse on that festal high-day!" the King in bitterness cried:15····/˘·····/˘˘·
"Never to king and his dear ones did such foul fortune betide15/˘·········/˘˘/
As here upon us hath fallen--and that at a feast, good sooth!15······/˘·······
In Burgundy here shall they see us never again, of a truth!"16·/˘˘·····/˘˘/···
Then in fierce anger shouted the thanes of Siegfried's band:13···/˘/˘···/··
"Nay, once more yet may we journey unto this accursèd land,14······/˘······
If we find, if we prove of a surety who laid our dear lord low.18········/˘˘··/˘···
Amidst his friends have they won them deadly foes enow!"13˘/······/˘·˘/
For the last time kissed he Kriemhild. He spake in sorrow's despair,15···········/˘˘/
When he saw her steadfastly purposed to abide with her people there:17····/·˘/˘·˘/··/˘·
"Now ride we forth all joyless, as home to our people we go!16·····/˘···/˘/˘··
Now first my depth of affliction and all my sorrow I know!"15·····˘/˘···/˘··
So rode they without all escort from Worms on Rhine away.14······˘/····˘/
Well might they go all-fearless: so stern of mood were they,13·····/˘······
That if haply foemen in malice had set upon them then,15··/˘···/˘······
Their heads had their own hands warded, those aweless Niblung men.14······/˘·/˘···
No leave would they take of any: they shook off the dust of their15······/˘·······
feet.1·
Yet Giselher and Gernot full lovingly came to greet14········/˘˘···
The old king at his departing; for they sorrowed in his heart-pain,16·····˘/˘··/˘····
And thereof did they give clear witness, those valiant heroes twain.15·······/˘·/˘/˘·
For to Siegmund spake Prince Gernot exceeding courteously:15··/˘····˘/˘/˘˘˘
"Now God in Heaven be witness, of the death of Siegfried am I16···/˘·/˘····/···
Wholly and utterly guiltless! Never I heard this said,14/˘·/˘˘/˘/˘····
That any bare him malice. From mine heart do I mourn for thy dead."16·/˘··/˘·········
Then Giselher the young prince provided them escort fair.14·······˘/˘·˘/·
So led he unvexed of any the hearts overburdened with care,16······/˘··/˘/˘··
Even the King and his good knights, back to their Netherland home.15/˘·········/˘˘·
Ah, with how little rejoicing their kinsmen beheld them come!15···/˘˘/˘···˘/··
Touching all that befell them thereafter the old song holdeth its16/˘··˘/·˘/˘···/˘·
peace:1·
But at Worms was the plaining of Kriemhild heard without surcease15·····/˘······˘/
That her heart and her wounded spirit had no comforter,14·····/˘/˘··/˘˘
Save one, the loving and faithful, her brother Giselher.14···/˘·/˘·/˘···
But there sat Brunhild the lovely enthroned in her arrogant pride.16······/˘····/˘˘·
Little she recked of Kriemhild as from depths of despair she cried.15/˘·········˘/··
Never in kindness or pity she stooped to the stricken again.16/˘·/˘·/˘····/˘˘/
But the years stole on, till Kriemhild wrung her heart too with pain.14··············

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