Adventure I: Of Kriemhild, and of her Dream
Many a marvellous story have the ancient singers toldOf heroes and their glory and their travail manifold,Of great feasts splendour-flashing that with weeping and wailingended,Of the thunder of war-waves clashing--in the Lay shall ye hear allblended.
In the Land Burgundian nurtured was a maiden princely of birth;Though ye searched, ye should find none fairer to the uttermost endsof the earth;And her name far-sung was Kriemhild, she was sweeter than speech maytell.Ah, many a valiant champion in battle for her sake fell!There was no man whose pride had warded his breast against love's dartShot from the eyes victorious, from the snare of many a heart:She was lovely beyond all measure that speech or thought may find,Yea, queenly withal and gracious, a glory of womankind.
Three high-born Kings and wealthy guarded and held her dear;Gunther and Gernot, heroes in prowess without a peer,And Giselher the youngest, unmatched in foughten field:Their sister was she and their glory, and her sword were they and hershield.Lords were they of noble lineage, and of courtesy the crown,And their aweless might was matchless, and limitless their renown;And over the Land Burgundian they stretched the sceptred hand,Ere the strange, grim end of their story was told in Etzel's land.In the City of Worms by the Rhine-flood these Kings in their mightabode,And the best in the whole land served them, the proudest knights thatrode,With glory of homage served them through their life's triumphanttide--Till the day when in woeful battle through the Feud of the Queensthey died.And the mother that bare them was Uta, and the treasures of queenswere hers,And their father the old king Dankart, and he made them heritorsOf his realm in the hour of his dying, a champion mighty of old,Who in days of his youth reaped harvest of glory manifold.
As the tale of their goodlihead telleth, such kings were they, thesethree,Strong, fearless lords; and the vassals that bent before them the kneeWere the best of all of whose doings their songs have the minstrelsmade,Stalwart and aweless of spirit, in battle unafraid.For these were Hagen of Troneg, and Dankwart his brother withalThe battle-eager, and Ortwein the warder of Metz's wall;And with these stood Gere and Eckwart, lords of the marches twain,And Volker the Knight Alsatian, the name without a stain;And Rumold the feast-arrayer, a worship-worthy lord;Sindold and Hunold, which ever kept heedful watch and wardFor the state of the palace royal, that all should be ordered well;And with these were there knightly vassals whose tale no bard maytell.Dankwart was their palace-marshal, and beside the feastful boardWaited his nephew Ortwein, of Metz was he overlord;And Sindold bare them the wine-cup, a goodly baron he;And Hunold was chamberlain, perfect in utterest courtesy.But of all their palace-splendour, and their might renowned afar,And the majesty of their worship, and their knightly deeds of war,And the joy that the kingly heroes therein had all their days--No minstrel hath wholly told it, no harp sung all their praise.
Now it fell, in the midst of their glory, that a dream unto Kriemhildappeared:A strong, fair, tameless falcon in a bower of dreams she reared.But before her eyes two eagles swooped upon him and slew--Never a bitterer sorrow the heart of the maiden knew!So she told to her mother the vision; but from Lady Uta's eyesWas it hid, that she could not interpret the dream save in haltingwise:"The falcon reared in thy dream-bower, a princely husband is this--Now God from evil defend him, else swift dark doom shall be his!""What is this that thou talkest of husbands, heart's dearest, mother,to me?In the net of love untangled will I for ever be.Unto my death in the beauty of maidenhood I will abide,That I taste not the manifold sorrows that from love of man betide."But she answered: "Not wholly renounce it, for thy vow hath beenspoken amiss:For if ever on earth thou knowest a heart full-brimmed with bliss,Of the love of a man shall this come; and a fair and happy brideShalt thou be, if a noble baron by God's grace stand by thy side.""Let be, let be vain talking, heart's dearest, mother mine.In many a wife's repentance have I read the warning sign,How love hath sorrow for guerdon when the end of its journey iswon:--I will none of love nor of sorrow, I abide in my bliss alone."
So Kriemhild in pride of her spirit was a rebel to Lord Love's sway;And her heart-peace flowed as a river through many a sunlit day;And she looked upon earls and champions, but none might the heart ofher move:Yet her hour drew near, and the breaking of the glory-dawn of love.For in flight even now was the Falcon, the fulfilment drew nigh andnigherOf the dream half read of her mother--but woe for the vengeance-hireThat she paid to the eagles that slew him, her own blood-brethrenthey!Woe for the sons of women untold whom his death should slay!
Words in this poem 29
- splendour n.
- Great brightness; brilliant luster; brilliancy; as, the splendor ot the sun. B. Jonson. [L. fr. splendere to shine: cf. F. splendeur.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- uttermost a.
- Extreme; utmost; being; in the farthest, greatest, or highest degree; as, the uttermost extent or end. [From Utter, a.; cf. Utmost, and Outermost.]
- valiant a.
- Vigorous in body; strong; powerful; as, a valiant fencer. [OE. valiant, F. vaillant, OF. vaillant, valant, originally p. pr. of OF. & F. valoir to be worth, L. valere to be strong. See Wield, and cf. Avail, Convalesce, ]
- queenly a.
- Like, becoming, or suitable to, a queen. [AS. cwenlic feminine.]
- withal adv.
- With this; with that. [With + all.]
- womankind n.
- The females of the human race; women, collectively.
- prowess n.
- Distinguished bravery; valor; especially, military bravery and skill; gallantry; intrepidity; fearlessness. Chaucer. Sir P. Sidney. [OF. proece, proesce, F. prouesse. See Prow, a.]
- limitless a.
- Having no limits; unbounded; boundless. Davies (Wit's Pilgr.).
- abode n.
- Act of waiting; delay. [OE. abad, abood, fr. abiden to abide. See Abide. For the change of vowel, cf. abode, imp. of abide.]
- rode n.
- Redness; complexion. [See Rud.]
- stalwart a.
- Brave; bold; strong; redoubted; daring; vehement; violent. [OE. stalworth, AS. stælwyrth serviceable, probably originally, good at stealing, or worth stealing or taking, and afterwards extended to other causes of estimat]
- warder n.
- One who wards or keeps; a keeper; a guard.
- twain a.
- Two;- nearly obsolete in common discourse, but used in poetry and burlesque. [OE. twein, tweien, tweyne, AS. twegen, masc. See Two.]
- alsatian a.
- Pertaining to Alsatia.
- arrayer n.
- One who arrays. In some early English statutes, applied to an officer who had care of the soldiers' armor, and who saw them duly accoutered.
- knightly a.
- Of or pertaining to a knight; becoming a knight; chivalrous; as, a knightly combat; a knightly spirit. [AS. cnihtlic boyish.]
- feastful a.
- Festive; festal; joyful; sumptuous; luxurious.
- nephew n.
- A grandson or grandchild, or remoter lineal descendant. [OE. neveu, nevou, nevu, fr. F. neveu, OF. also, nevou, L. nepos; akin to AS. nefa, D. neef, G. neffe, OHG. nevo, Icel. nefi a kinsman, gr. nepat grandson, desce]
- overlord n.
- One who is lord over another or others; a superior lord; a master. Freeman.
- goodly a.
- Pleasant; agreeable; desirable. [OE. godlich, AS. g. See Good, and Like.]
- afar adv.
- At, to, or from a great distance; far away; -- often used with from preceding, or off following; as, he was seen from afar; I saw him afar off. [Pref. a-.(for on or of) + far.]
- tameless a.
- Incapable of being tamed; wild; untamed; untamable. Bp. Hall.
- betide v. t.
- To happen to; to befall; to come to ; as, woe betide the wanderer. [OE. bitiden; pref. bi-, be- + tiden, fr. AS. tidan, to happen, fr. tid time. See Tide.]
- shalt
- 2d per. sing. of Shall.
- guerdon n.
- A reward; requital; recompense; -- used in both a good and a bad sense. [OF. guerdon, guerredon, LL. widerdonum (influenced by L. donum gift, cf. Donation ), fr. OHG. widarl; widar again, against (G. wider wieder) + lon reward, G. lo]
- rebel a.
- Pertaining to rebels or rebellion; acting in revolt; rebellious; as, rebel troops. [F. rebelle, fr. L. rebellis. See Rebel, v. t.]
- sunlit a.
- Lighted by the sun.
- untold a.
- Not told; not related; not revealed; as, untold secrets.
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
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Form and metre
Adventure I: Of Kriemhild, and of her Dream is 97 lines in 6 stanzas. 82% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 12.3 syllables. 11 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 32% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 AA-B-B toldA · manifoldA · wailing · endedB · all · blendedB
- 2 A-A-BBCCDD birthA · ends · earthA · may · tellB · fellB · dartC · heartC · findD · womankindD
- 3 AAB-BCCDD-E-E-FGFG--HH dearA · peerA · fieldB · her · shieldB · crownC · renownC · handD · landD · might · abodeE · that · rodeE · triumphant · tideF · queensG · diedF · queensG · hers · heritors · oldH · manifoldH
- 4 -AA-BBCCDDEEF-FEEA---GG these · threeA · kneeA · minstrels · madeB · unafraidB · withalC · wallC · twainD · stainD · lordE · wardE · wellF · may · tellF · boardE · overlordE · heA · courtesy · afar · war · daysG · praiseG
- 5 -AABBC-CDE-FFGGHDDGGIIEH- kriemhild · appearedA · rearedA · slewB · knewB · eyesC · halting · wiseC · thisD · hisE · mother · meF · beF · abideG · betideG · beenH · amissD · blissD · brideG · sideG · mineI · signI · isE · wonH · alone
- 6 AABBB-CC-AA swayA · dayA · ofB · moveB · loveB · and · nigherC · hireC · brethren · theyA · slayA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| Many a marvellous story have the ancient singers told | 15 | /˘····/˘··/˘/˘· |
| Of heroes and their glory and their travail manifold, | 14 | ·/˘··/˘··˘//˘· |
| Of great feasts splendour-flashing that with weeping and wailing | 14 | ···/˘/˘··/˘·/˘ |
| ended, | 2 | /˘ |
| Of the thunder of war-waves clashing--in the Lay shall ye hear all | 16 | ··/˘···/˘······· |
| blended. | 2 | /˘ |
| In the Land Burgundian nurtured was a maiden princely of birth; | 17 | ···˘/˘˘/˘··/˘/˘·· |
| Though ye searched, ye should find none fairer to the uttermost ends | 15 | ·······/˘··/˘˘· |
| of the earth; | 3 | ··· |
| And her name far-sung was Kriemhild, she was sweeter than speech may | 15 | ··········/˘··· |
| tell. | 1 | · |
| Ah, many a valiant champion in battle for her sake fell! | 16 | ·/˘·/˘/˘˘·/˘···· |
| There was no man whose pride had warded his breast against love's dart | 15 | ·······/˘······ |
| Shot from the eyes victorious, from the snare of many a heart: | 16 | ····˘/˘˘····/˘·· |
| She was lovely beyond all measure that speech or thought may find, | 15 | ··/˘···/˘······ |
| Yea, queenly withal and gracious, a glory of womankind. | 15 | ·/˘˘/·/˘·/˘·/˘˘ |
| Three high-born Kings and wealthy guarded and held her dear; | 13 | ·····/˘/˘···· |
| Gunther and Gernot, heroes in prowess without a peer, | 14 | /˘···/˘·/˘···· |
| And Giselher the youngest, unmatched in foughten field: | 13 | ·····/˘˘/·/˘· |
| Their sister was she and their glory, and her sword were they and her | 16 | ·/˘····/˘······· |
| shield. | 1 | · |
| Lords were they of noble lineage, and of courtesy the crown, | 16 | ····/˘/˘˘··/˘˘·· |
| And their aweless might was matchless, and limitless their renown; | 15 | ··/˘··/˘·/˘˘·˘/ |
| And over the Land Burgundian they stretched the sceptred hand, | 15 | ·····˘/˘˘···/˘· |
| Ere the strange, grim end of their story was told in Etzel's land. | 15 | ·······/˘···/˘· |
| In the City of Worms by the Rhine-flood these Kings in their might | 15 | ··/˘··········· |
| abode, | 2 | ˘/ |
| And the best in the whole land served them, the proudest knights that | 14 | ··········/˘·· |
| rode, | 1 | · |
| With glory of homage served them through their life's triumphant | 14 | ·/˘·/˘·····˘/˘ |
| tide-- | 1 | · |
| Till the day when in woeful battle through the Feud of the Queens | 15 | ·····/˘/˘······ |
| they died. | 2 | ·· |
| And the mother that bare them was Uta, and the treasures of queens | 16 | ··/˘········/˘·· |
| were hers, | 2 | ·· |
| And their father the old king Dankart, and he made them heritors | 16 | ··/˘············ |
| Of his realm in the hour of his dying, a champion mighty of old, | 19 | ·····/˘··/˘·/˘˘/˘·· |
| Who in days of his youth reaped harvest of glory manifold. | 15 | ·······/˘·/˘/˘· |
| As the tale of their goodlihead telleth, such kings were they, these | 15 | ········/˘····· |
| three, | 1 | · |
| Strong, fearless lords; and the vassals that bent before them the knee | 15 | ·/˘···/˘······· |
| Were the best of all of whose doings their songs have the minstrels | 15 | ·······/˘····/˘ |
| made, | 1 | · |
| Stalwart and aweless of spirit, in battle unafraid. | 14 | /˘·/˘·/˘·/˘·˘/ |
| For these were Hagen of Troneg, and Dankwart his brother withal | 16 | ···/˘·······/˘˘/ |
| The battle-eager, and Ortwein the warder of Metz's wall; | 15 | ·/˘/˘·/˘·/˘·/˘· |
| And with these stood Gere and Eckwart, lords of the marches twain, | 14 | ···········/˘· |
| And Volker the Knight Alsatian, the name without a stain; | 14 | ·/˘··˘/˘······ |
| And Rumold the feast-arrayer, a worship-worthy lord; | 14 | ·····˘/˘·/˘/˘· |
| Sindold and Hunold, which ever kept heedful watch and ward | 14 | ······/˘·/˘··· |
| For the state of the palace royal, that all should be ordered well; | 16 | ·····/˘/˘····/˘· |
| And with these were there knightly vassals whose tale no bard may | 14 | ·····/˘/˘····· |
| tell. | 1 | · |
| Dankwart was their palace-marshal, and beside the feastful board | 15 | ····/˘/˘·˘/·/˘· |
| Waited his nephew Ortwein, of Metz was he overlord; | 14 | /˘·/˘/˘····/˘· |
| And Sindold bare them the wine-cup, a goodly baron he; | 14 | ·········/˘/˘· |
| And Hunold was chamberlain, perfect in utterest courtesy. | 16 | ····/˘˘˘/·/˘˘/˘˘ |
| But of all their palace-splendour, and their might renowned afar, | 15 | ····/˘/˘···˘/˘/ |
| And the majesty of their worship, and their knightly deeds of war, | 16 | ··/˘˘··/˘··/˘··· |
| And the joy that the kingly heroes therein had all their days-- | 15 | ·····/˘/˘······ |
| No minstrel hath wholly told it, no harp sung all their praise. | 14 | ·/˘·/˘········ |
| Now it fell, in the midst of their glory, that a dream unto Kriemhild | 17 | ········/˘······· |
| appeared: | 2 | ˘/ |
| A strong, fair, tameless falcon in a bower of dreams she reared. | 15 | ···/˘/˘··/˘···· |
| But before her eyes two eagles swooped upon him and slew-- | 14 | ······/˘······ |
| Never a bitterer sorrow the heart of the maiden knew! | 15 | /˘····/˘····/˘· |
| So she told to her mother the vision; but from Lady Uta's eyes | 17 | ·····/˘·/˘··/˘/˘· |
| Was it hid, that she could not interpret the dream save in halting | 16 | ·······˘/˘····/˘ |
| wise: | 1 | · |
| "The falcon reared in thy dream-bower, a princely husband is this-- | 16 | ·/˘····/˘·/˘/˘·· |
| Now God from evil defend him, else swift dark doom shall be his!" | 15 | ···/˘˘/········ |
| "What is this that thou talkest of husbands, heart's dearest, mother, | 15 | ·····/˘·/˘·/˘/˘ |
| to me? | 2 | ·· |
| In the net of love untangled will I for ever be. | 14 | ·····˘/˘···/˘· |
| Unto my death in the beauty of maidenhood I will abide, | 16 | ······/˘·/˘˘··˘/ |
| That I taste not the manifold sorrows that from love of man betide." | 17 | ·····/˘·/˘·····˘/ |
| But she answered: "Not wholly renounce it, for thy vow hath been | 15 | ··/˘·/˘˘/······ |
| spoken amiss: | 4 | /˘˘/ |
| For if ever on earth thou knowest a heart full-brimmed with bliss, | 15 | ··/˘···/˘······ |
| Of the love of a man shall this come; and a fair and happy bride | 16 | ·············/˘· |
| Shalt thou be, if a noble baron by God's grace stand by thy side." | 16 | ·····/˘/˘······· |
| "Let be, let be vain talking, heart's dearest, mother mine. | 13 | ·····/˘·/˘/˘· |
| In many a wife's repentance have I read the warning sign, | 15 | ·/˘··˘/˘····/˘· |
| How love hath sorrow for guerdon when the end of its journey is | 16 | ···/˘·/˘·····/˘· |
| won:-- | 1 | · |
| I will none of love nor of sorrow, I abide in my bliss alone." | 17 | ·······/˘·˘/···˘/ |
| So Kriemhild in pride of her spirit was a rebel to Lord Love's sway; | 17 | ·······/˘··/˘···· |
| And her heart-peace flowed as a river through many a sunlit day; | 16 | ·······/˘·/˘·/·· |
| And she looked upon earls and champions, but none might the heart of | 16 | ·······/˘˘······ |
| her move: | 2 | ·· |
| Yet her hour drew near, and the breaking of the glory-dawn of love. | 17 | ··/˘····/˘··/˘··· |
| For in flight even now was the Falcon, the fulfilment drew nigh and | 17 | ···/˘···/˘······· |
| nigher | 2 | ·· |
| Of the dream half read of her mother--but woe for the vengeance-hire | 17 | ·······/˘····/˘/˘ |
| That she paid to the eagles that slew him, her own blood-brethren | 15 | ·····/˘······/˘ |
| they! | 1 | · |
| Woe for the sons of women untold whom his death should slay! | 14 | ·····/˘˘/····· |
Notes from the edition 1
Arthur S. Way's notes to his translation (1911; Project Gutenberg #59831).
- Stanza 5, line 24 Siegfried's reason, which critics and translators, from Carlyle downward, have left unexplained, seems to be this:--Siegfried was already known to Brunhild, and was the mightiest man she knew. Hence, if she saw him acting as a mere vassal to Gunther, she would infer that the latter was yet mightier, an impression to be confirmed by his apparent victory in the test; and so her reluctance to abide by the result, which, had she resisted, would have proved insuperable, would be more likely to be overcome.
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