The Queen's Rival

Sarojini Naidu (1879–1949) · 1905

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 54 lines · from The Golden Threshold

QUEEN Gulnaar sat on her ivory bed,Around her countless treasures were spread;

Her chamber walls were richly inlaidWith agate, porphory, onyx and jade;

The tissues that veiled her delicate breast,Glowed with the hues of a lapwing's crest;

But still she gazed in her mirror and sighed"O King, my heart is unsatisfied."

King Feroz bent from his ebony seat:"Is thy least desire unfulfilled, O Sweet?

"Let thy mouth speak and my life be spentTo clear the sky of thy discontent."

"I tire of my beauty, I tire of thisEmpty splendour and shadowless bliss;

"With none to envy and none gainsay,No savour or salt hath my dream or day."

Queen Gulnaar sighed like a murmuring rose:"Give me a rival, O King Feroz."

King Feroz spoke to his Chief Vizier:"Lo! ere to-morrow's dawn be here,

"Send forth my messengers over the sea,To seek seven beautiful brides for me;

"Radiant of feature and regal of mien,Seven handmaids meet for the Persian Queen."

Seven new moon tides at the Vesper call,King Feroz led to Queen Gulnaar's hall

A young queen eyed like the morning star:"I bring thee a rival, O Queen Gulnaar."

But still she gazed in her mirror and sighed:"O King, my heart is unsatisfied."

Seven queens shone round her ivory bed,Like seven soft gems on a silken thread,

Like seven fair lamps in a royal tower,Like seven bright petals of Beauty's flower

Queen Gulnaar sighed like a murmuring rose"Where is my rival, O King Feroz?"

When spring winds wakened the mountain floods,And kindled the flame of the tulip buds,When bees grew loud and the days grew long,And the peach groves thrilled to the oriole's song,

Queen Gulnaar sat on her ivory bed,Decking with jewels her exquisite head;

And still she gazed in her mirror and sighed:"O King, my heart is unsatisfied."

Queen Gulnaar's daughter two spring times old,In blue robes bordered with tassels of gold,

Ran to her knee like a wildwood fay,And plucked from her hand the mirror away.

Quickly she set on her own light curlsHer mother's fillet with fringes of pearls;

Quickly she turned with a child's capriceAnd pressed on the mirror a swift, glad kiss.

Queen Gulnaar laughed like a tremulous rose:"Here is my rival, O King Feroz."

Words in this poem

countless a.
Incapable of being counted; not ascertainable; innumerable.
veiled a.
Covered by, or as by, a veil; hidden.
splendour n.
Great brightness; brilliant luster; brilliancy; as, the splendor ot the sun. B. Jonson. [L. fr. splendere to shine: cf. F. splendeur.]
shadowless a.
Having no shadow.
savour v. t.
To perceive by the smell or the taste; hence, to perceive; to note. B. Jonson.
spoke n.
The radius or ray of a wheel; one of the small bars which are inserted in the hub, or nave, and which serve to support the rim or felly. [OE. spoke, spake, AS, spaca; akin to D. speek, LG. speke, OHG. speihha, G. speiche. sq. root170. Cf. Spike a nail.]
vesper n.
The evening star; Hesper; Venus, when seen after sunset; hence, the evening. [L., the evening, the evening star, the west; akin to Gr. west. Cf. Hesperian, Vespers.]
tulip n.
Any plant of the liliaceous genus Tulipa. Many varieties are cultivated for their beautiful, often variegated flowers. Tulip tree. [F. tulipe, OF. also tulipan, It. tulipano, tulipa, from Turk. tulbend, dulbend, literally, a turban, Per. dulband; -- so called from the resemblance of the form]
wildwood n.
A wild or unfrequented wood. Also used adjectively; as, wildwood flowers; wildwood echoes. Burns.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

The Queen's Rival is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Golden Threshold, with an introduction by Arthur Symons (Hyderabad, 1905; London, John Lane, 1905), Project Gutenberg ebook #680; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Sarojini Naidu, The Queen's Rival, in The Golden Threshold (1905), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #680, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/naidu-golden-threshold/the-queen-s-rival.html, id L27504.

Form and metre

The Queen's Rival is 54 lines in 26 verse paragraphs. It is in rhyming couplets, 81% of the lines: heroic couplets. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AA bedA · spreadA
  2. 2 AA inlaidA · jadeA
  3. 3 AA breastA · crestA
  4. 4 AA sighedA · unsatisfiedA
  5. 5 AA seatA · sweetA
  6. 6 AA spentA · discontentA
  7. 7 AA thisA · blissA
  8. 8 AA gainsayA · dayA
  9. 11 AA seaA · meA
  10. 12 AA mienA · queenA
  11. 13 AA callA · hallA
  12. 14 AA starA · gulnaarA
  13. 15 AA sighedA · unsatisfiedA
  14. 16 AA bedA · threadA
  15. 17 AA towerA · flowerA
  16. 19 AABB floodsA · budsA · longB · songB
  17. 20 AA bedA · headA
  18. 21 AA sighedA · unsatisfiedA
  19. 22 AA oldA · goldA
  20. 23 AA fayA · awayA
  21. 24 AA curlsA · pearlsA
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
QUEEN Gulnaar sat on her ivory bed,10······/˘˘·
Around her countless treasures were spread;9···/˘/˘··
Her chamber walls were richly inlaid9·/˘··/˘/·
With agate, porphory, onyx and jade;10·/˘···/˘··
The tissues that veiled her delicate breast,10·/˘···/˘˘·
Glowed with the hues of a lapwing's crest;10·˘········
But still she gazed in her mirror and sighed10······/˘··
"O King, my heart is unsatisfied."9·····˘/˘·
King Feroz bent from his ebony seat:10······/˘˘·
"Is thy least desire unfulfilled, O Sweet?10···˘/·˘/··
"Let thy mouth speak and my life be spent9·········
To clear the sky of thy discontent."9······˘˘/
"I tire of my beauty, I tire of this10·/··/˘·/··
Empty splendour and shadowless bliss;9/˘/˘·/˘˘·
"With none to envy and none gainsay,9···/˘··/·
No savour or salt hath my dream or day."10·/˘·······
Queen Gulnaar sighed like a murmuring rose:10······/˘˘·
"Give me a rival, O King Feroz."9···/˘····
King Feroz spoke to his Chief Vizier:9·······/˘
"Lo! ere to-morrow's dawn be here,8···/˘···
"Send forth my messengers over the sea,10···/˘˘····
To seek seven beautiful brides for me;10··/˘/˘˘···
"Radiant of feature and regal of mien,10/˘·/˘·/˘··
Seven handmaids meet for the Persian Queen."10/˘·····/˘·
Seven new moon tides at the Vesper call,10/˘·····/˘·
King Feroz led to Queen Gulnaar's hall9·········
A young queen eyed like the morning star:9······/˘·
"I bring thee a rival, O Queen Gulnaar."10····/˘····
But still she gazed in her mirror and sighed:10······/˘··
"O King, my heart is unsatisfied."9·····˘/˘·
Seven queens shone round her ivory bed,10/˘····/˘˘·
Like seven soft gems on a silken thread,10·/˘····/˘·
Like seven fair lamps in a royal tower,11·/˘····/˘/˘
Like seven bright petals of Beauty's flower11·/˘·/˘·/˘/˘
Queen Gulnaar sighed like a murmuring rose10······/˘˘·
"Where is my rival, O King Feroz?"9···/˘····
When spring winds wakened the mountain floods,10···/˘˘·/˘·
And kindled the flame of the tulip buds,10·/˘····/˘·
When bees grew loud and the days grew long,9·········
And the peach groves thrilled to the oriole's song,11·······/˘··
Queen Gulnaar sat on her ivory bed,10······/˘˘·
Decking with jewels her exquisite head;10/˘·/˘·/˘˘·
And still she gazed in her mirror and sighed:10······/˘··
"O King, my heart is unsatisfied."9·····˘/˘·
Queen Gulnaar's daughter two spring times old,9···/˘····
In blue robes bordered with tassels of gold,10···/˘·/˘··
Ran to her knee like a wildwood fay,9······/··
And plucked from her hand the mirror away.10······/˘˘/
Quickly she set on her own light curls9/˘·······
Her mother's fillet with fringes of pearls;10·/˘˘/·/˘··
Quickly she turned with a child's caprice10/˘··˘···˘/
And pressed on the mirror a swift, glad kiss.10····/˘····
Queen Gulnaar laughed like a tremulous rose:10······/˘˘·
"Here is my rival, O King Feroz."9···/˘····

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