Song of a Dream

Sarojini Naidu (1879–1949) · 1905

iambic pentameter · heroic couplets · 14 lines · from The Golden Threshold

Once in the dream of a night I stoodLone in the light of a magical wood,Soul-deep in visions that poppy-like sprang;And spirits of Truth were the birds that sang,And spirits of Love were the stars that glowed,And spirits of Peace were the streams that flowedIn that magical wood in the land of sleep.

Lone in the light of that magical grove,I felt the stars of the spirits of LoveGather and gleam round my delicate youth,And I heard the song of the spirits of Truth;To quench my longing I bent me lowBy the streams of the spirits of Peace that flowIn that magical wood in the land of sleep.

Words in this poem

lone n.
A lane. See Loanin.

Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.

About this text

Song of a Dream is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Golden Threshold, with an introduction by Arthur Symons (Hyderabad, 1905; London, John Lane, 1905), Project Gutenberg ebook #680; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Sarojini Naidu, Song of a Dream, in The Golden Threshold (1905), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #680, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/naidu-golden-threshold/song-of-a-dream.html, id L27487.

Form and metre

Song of a Dream is 14 lines in 2 stanzas of 7 lines each. It is in rhyming couplets, 71% of the lines: heroic couplets. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.

See other poems in heroic couplets, other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABBCC- stoodA · woodA · sprangB · sangB · glowedC · flowedC · sleep
  2. 2 --AABB- grove · love · youthA · truthA · lowB · flowB · sleep
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Once in the dream of a night I stood9·········
Lone in the light of a magical wood,10······/˘˘·
Soul-deep in visions that poppy-like sprang;10···/˘·/˘··
And spirits of Truth were the birds that sang,10·/˘·······
And spirits of Love were the stars that glowed,10·/˘·······
And spirits of Peace were the streams that flowed10·/˘·······
In that magical wood in the land of sleep.10··/˘······
Lone in the light of that magical grove,10······/˘˘·
I felt the stars of the spirits of Love10······/˘··
Gather and gleam round my delicate youth,10/˘····/˘˘·
And I heard the song of the spirits of Truth;11·······/˘··
To quench my longing I bent me low9···/˘····
By the streams of the spirits of Peace that flow11·····/˘····
In that magical wood in the land of sleep.10··/˘······

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