Indian Weavers

Sarojini Naidu (1879–1949) · 1905

iambic pentameter · AABB · 12 lines · from The Golden Threshold

Weavers, weaving at break of day,Why do you weave a garment so gay? . . .Blue as the wing of a halcyon wild,We weave the robes of a new-born child.

Weavers, weaving at fall of night,Why do you weave a garment so bright? . . .Like the plumes of a peacock, purple and green,We weave the marriage-veils of a queen.

Weavers, weaving solemn and still,What do you weave in the moonlight chill? . . .White as a feather and white as a cloud,We weave a dead man's funeral shroud.

About this text

Indian Weavers is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Golden Threshold, with an introduction by Arthur Symons (Hyderabad, 1905; London, John Lane, 1905), Project Gutenberg ebook #680; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.

Cite as: Sarojini Naidu, Indian Weavers, in The Golden Threshold (1905), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #680, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/naidu-golden-threshold/indian-weavers.html, id L27477.

Form and metre

Indian Weavers is 12 lines in 3 stanzas of 4 lines each. Every stanza rhymes AABB. This poem did not settle on a metre of its own; the book it comes from is in iambic pentameter.

See other poems in iambic pentameter.

Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.

Rhyme words, stanza by stanza

The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.

  1. 1 AABB dayA · gayA · wildB · childB
  2. 2 AABB nightA · brightA · greenB · queenB
  3. 3 AABB stillA · chillA · cloudB · shroudB
Scansion, line by line

Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.

LineSyl.Stress
Weavers, weaving at break of day,8/˘/˘····
Why do you weave a garment so gay? . . .9·····/˘··
Blue as the wing of a halcyon wild,10······/˘˘·
We weave the robes of a new-born child.9·········
Weavers, weaving at fall of night,8/˘/˘····
Why do you weave a garment so bright? . . .9·····/˘··
Like the plumes of a peacock, purple and green,11·····/·/˘··
We weave the marriage-veils of a queen.9···/˘····
Weavers, weaving solemn and still,8/˘/˘/˘··
What do you weave in the moonlight chill? . . .9······/··
White as a feather and white as a cloud,10···/˘·····
We weave a dead man's funeral shroud.9·····/˘˘·

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