At the Long Sault
A prisoner under the stars I lie,With no friend near;To-morrow they lead me forth to die,The stake is ready, the torments set,They will pay in full their deadly debt;But I fear them not! Oh, none could fearOf those who stood by Daulac's side—While he prayed and laughed and sang and foughtIn the very reek of death—and caughtThe martyr passion that flamed from his faceAs he died!
Where he led us we followed glad,For we loved him well;Some there were that held him mad,But we knew that a heavenly rage had placeIn that dauntless soul; the good God spakeTo us through him; we had naught to doSave only obey; and when his eyesFlashed and kindled like storm-swept skies,And his voice like a trumpet thrilled us through,We would have marched with delight for his sakeTo the jaws of hell.
The mists hung blue and still on the streamAt the marge of dawn;The rapids laughed till we saw their teethLike a snarling wolf's fangs glisten and gleam;Sweetly the pine trees underneathThe shadows slept in the moonlight wan;Sweetly beneath the steps of the springThe great, grim forest was blossoming;And we fought, that springs for other menMight blossom again.
Faint, thirst-maddened we prayed and foughtBy night and by day;Eyes glared at us with serpent hate—Yet sometimes a hush fell, and then we heard naughtSave the wind's shrill harping far away,The piping of birds, and the softened callsOf the merry, distant water-falls;Then of other scenes we thought—Of valleys beloved in sunny France,Purple vineyards of song and dance,Hopes and visions roseate;Of many a holy festal morn,And many a dream at vesper bell—But anon the shuddering air was tornBy noises such as the fiends of hellMight make in holding high holiday!Once, so bitter the death-storm hailed,We shrank and quailed.
Daulac sprang out before us then,Shamed in our fears;Glorious was his face to see,The face of one who listens and hearsVoices unearthly, summonings high—Rang his tone like a clarion, "Men,See yonder star in the golden sky,Such a man's duty is to him,A beacon that will not flicker nor dim,Shining through darkness and despair.Almost the martyr's crown is yours!Thinking the price too high to be paid,Will you leave the sacrifice half made?I tell you God will answer the prayerOf the soul that endures!
"Comrades, far in the future I seeA mighty land;Throned among the nations of earth,Noble and happy, calm and free;As a veil were lifted I see her stand,And out of that future a voice to mePromises that our names shall shineOn the page of her story with lustre divineImpelling to visions and deeds of worth.
"Ever thus since the world was begun,When a man hath given up his life,Safety and freedom have been wonBy the holy power of self-sacrifice;For the memory of your mother's kissValiantly stand to the breach again.Comrades, blench not now from the strife,Quit you like men!"
Oh, we rushed to meet at our captain's sideDeath as a bride!All our brave striplings bravely fell.I, less fortunate, slowly cameBack from that din of shot and yellSlowly and gaspingly, to knowA harder fate reserved for meThan that brief, splendid agony.Through many a bitter pang and throeMy spirit must to-morrow goTo seek my comrades; but I bearThe tidings that our desperate standBy the Long Sault has saved our land,And God has answered Daulac's prayer.
Words in this poem 25
- reek n.
- A rick. B. Jonson.
- dauntless a.
- Incapable of being daunted; undaunted; bold; fearless; intrepid.
- marge n.
- Border; margin; edge; verge. [F. marge. See Margin.]
- harping a.
- Pertaining to the harp; as, harping symphonies.
- piping a.
- Playing on a musical pipe. [From Pipe, v.]
- sunny a.
- Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
- roseate a.
- Full of roses; rosy; as, roseate bowers. [Cf. L. roseus, rosatus, prepared from roses. See Roseal, Rose.]
- festal a.
- Of or pertaining to a holiday or a feast; joyous; festive. [L. festum holiday, feast. See feast.]
- morn n.
- The first part of the day; the morning; -- used chiefly in poetry. [OE. morwen, morgen, AS. morgen; akin to D. morgen, OS. morgan, G. morgen, Icel. morginn, morgunn, Sw. morgon, Dan. morgen, Goth. maúrgins. Cf. Morrow, Morning.]
- vesper n.
- The evening star; Hesper; Venus, when seen after sunset; hence, the evening. [L., the evening, the evening star, the west; akin to Gr. west. Cf. Hesperian, Vespers.]
- anon adv.
- Straightway; at once. [OE. anoon, anon, anan, lit., in one (moment), fr. AS. on in + an one. See On and One.]
- glorious a.
- Exhibiting attributes, qualities, or acts that are worthy of or receive glory; noble; praiseworthy; excellent; splendid; illustrious; inspiring admiration; as, glorious deeds. [OF. glorios, glorious, F. glorieux, fr. L. gloriosus. See Glory, n.]
- unearthly a.
- Not terrestrial; supernatural; preternatural; hence, weird; appalling; terrific; as, an unearthly sight or sound.
- clarion n.
- A kind of trumpet, whose note is clear and shrill. [OE. clarioun, OF. clarion, F. clairon, LL. clario, claro; so called from its clear tone, fr. L. clarus clear. See Clear.]
- yonder adv.
- At a distance, but within view. [OE. yonder, ýonder; cf. OD. ginder, Goth. jaindr there. Yond, adv.]
- flicker v. i.
- To flutter; to flap the wings without flying. [OE. flikeren, flekeren, to flutter, AS. flicerian, flicorian, cf. D. flikkeren to sparkle. Flacker.]
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- lustre n.
- A period of five years; a lustrum. [L. lustrum: cf. F. lustre.]
- blench v. t.
- To baffle; to disconcert; to turn away; -- also, to obstruct; to hinder.
- strife n.
- The act of striving; earnest endeavor. [OF. estrif. See Strive.]
- rushed a.
- Abounding or covered with rushes.
- bravely adv.
- In a brave manner; courageously; gallantly; valiantly; splendidly; nobly.
- throe n.
- Extreme pain; violent pang; anguish; agony; especially, one of the pangs of travail in childbirth, or purturition. [OE. , , AS. a threatening, oppression, suffering, perhaps influenced by Icel. a throe, a pang, a longing; cf. AS. to suffer.]
- desperate a.
- Without hope; given to despair; hopeless. [L. desperatus, p. p. of desperare. See Despair, and cf. Desperado.]
- sault n.
- A rapid in some rivers; as, the Sault Ste. Marie. [U.S.] [OF., F. saut, fr. L. saltus See Salt a leap.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
At the Long Sault is in the public domain. This text is taken from The Watchman and Other Poems (New York: Frederick A. Stokes Company, 1917; Toronto: McClelland, Goodchild and Stewart, 1916), Internet Archive; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
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Form and metre
At the Long Sault is 96 lines in 8 stanzas. The metre is iambic pentameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 80%).
See other poems in iambic pentameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABACCBDEE-D lieA · nearB · dieA · setC · debtC · fearB · sideD · foughtE · caughtE · face · diedD
- 2 ABA-CDEEDCB gladA · wellB · madA · place · spakeC · doD · eyesE · skiesE · throughD · sakeC · hellB
- 3 A-BAB-CCDD streamA · dawn · teethB · gleamA · underneathB · wan · springC · blossomingC · menD · againD
- 4 AB-ABCCADDAEFEFBGG foughtA · dayB · hate · naughtA · awayB · callsC · fallsC · thoughtA · franceD · danceD · roseateA · mornE · bellF · tornE · hellF · holidayB · hailedG · quailedG
- 5 ABCBCACDDEFGGEF thenA · fearsB · seeC · hearsB · highC · menA · skyC · himD · dimD · despairE · yoursF · paidG · madeG · prayerE · enduresF
- 6 ABCABADDC seeA · landB · earthC · freeA · standB · meA · shineD · divineD · worthC
- 7 ABA--CBC begunA · lifeB · wonA · sacrifice · kiss · againC · strifeB · menC
- 8 AAB-BC--CCDEED sideA · brideA · fellB · came · yellB · knowC · me · agony · throeC · goC · bearD · standE · landE · prayerD
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic pentameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| A prisoner under the stars I lie, | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| With no friend near; | 4 | ···· |
| To-morrow they lead me forth to die, | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| The stake is ready, the torments set, | 9 | ···/˘·/·· |
| They will pay in full their deadly debt; | 9 | ······/˘· |
| But I fear them not! Oh, none could fear | 9 | ········· |
| Of those who stood by Daulac's side— | 8 | ········ |
| While he prayed and laughed and sang and fought | 9 | ········· |
| In the very reek of death—and caught | 9 | ··/˘····· |
| The martyr passion that flamed from his face | 10 | ·/˘/˘····· |
| As he died! | 3 | ··· |
| Where he led us we followed glad, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| For we loved him well; | 5 | ····· |
| Some there were that held him mad, | 7 | ······· |
| But we knew that a heavenly rage had place | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| In that dauntless soul; the good God spake | 9 | ··/˘····· |
| To us through him; we had naught to do | 9 | ········· |
| Save only obey; and when his eyes | 9 | ·/˘˘/···· |
| Flashed and kindled like storm-swept skies, | 8 | ··/˘···· |
| And his voice like a trumpet thrilled us through, | 10 | ·····/˘··· |
| We would have marched with delight for his sake | 10 | ·····˘/··· |
| To the jaws of hell. | 5 | ····· |
| The mists hung blue and still on the stream | 9 | ········· |
| At the marge of dawn; | 5 | ····· |
| The rapids laughed till we saw their teeth | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| Like a snarling wolf's fangs glisten and gleam; | 10 | ··/˘··/˘·· |
| Sweetly the pine trees underneath | 8 | /˘····˘/ |
| The shadows slept in the moonlight wan; | 9 | ·/····/·· |
| Sweetly beneath the steps of the spring | 9 | /˘······· |
| The great, grim forest was blossoming; | 9 | ···/˘·/˘˘ |
| And we fought, that springs for other men | 9 | ······/˘· |
| Might blossom again. | 5 | ·/˘˘/ |
| Faint, thirst-maddened we prayed and fought | 8 | ··/˘···· |
| By night and by day; | 5 | ····· |
| Eyes glared at us with serpent hate— | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| Yet sometimes a hush fell, and then we heard naught | 11 | ·˘/········ |
| Save the wind's shrill harping far away, | 9 | ····/˘·˘/ |
| The piping of birds, and the softened calls | 10 | ·/˘····/˘· |
| Of the merry, distant water-falls; | 9 | ··/˘/˘/˘· |
| Then of other scenes we thought— | 7 | ··/˘··· |
| Of valleys beloved in sunny France, | 9 | ·/˘˘/·/˘· |
| Purple vineyards of song and dance, | 8 | /˘/˘···· |
| Hopes and visions roseate; | 7 | ··/˘/˘˘ |
| Of many a holy festal morn, | 8 | ·/·/˘/˘· |
| And many a dream at vesper bell— | 8 | ·/···/˘· |
| But anon the shuddering air was torn | 9 | ·˘/·/˘··· |
| By noises such as the fiends of hell | 9 | ·/˘······ |
| Might make in holding high holiday! | 9 | ···/˘·/˘· |
| Once, so bitter the death-storm hailed, | 8 | ··/˘···· |
| We shrank and quailed. | 4 | ···· |
| Daulac sprang out before us then, | 8 | ········ |
| Shamed in our fears; | 5 | ··/˘· |
| Glorious was his face to see, | 8 | /˘˘····· |
| The face of one who listens and hears | 9 | ·····/˘·· |
| Voices unearthly, summonings high— | 8 | /˘˘/˘/˘· |
| Rang his tone like a clarion, "Men, | 8 | ·····/˘· |
| See yonder star in the golden sky, | 9 | ·/˘···/˘· |
| Such a man's duty is to him, | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| A beacon that will not flicker nor dim, | 10 | ·/˘···/˘·· |
| Shining through darkness and despair. | 8 | /˘·/˘·˘/ |
| Almost the martyr's crown is yours! | 8 | /··/˘··· |
| Thinking the price too high to be paid, | 9 | /˘······· |
| Will you leave the sacrifice half made? | 9 | ····/˘··· |
| I tell you God will answer the prayer | 9 | ·····/˘·· |
| Of the soul that endures! | 6 | ····˘/ |
| "Comrades, far in the future I see | 9 | /····/˘·· |
| A mighty land; | 4 | ·/˘· |
| Throned among the nations of earth, | 8 | ····/˘·· |
| Noble and happy, calm and free; | 8 | /˘·/˘··· |
| As a veil were lifted I see her stand, | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| And out of that future a voice to me | 10 | ····/˘···· |
| Promises that our names shall shine | 8 | /˘˘·/··· |
| On the page of her story with lustre divine | 12 | ·····/˘·/˘˘/ |
| Impelling to visions and deeds of worth. | 10 | ˘/˘·/˘···· |
| "Ever thus since the world was begun, | 8 | /·····/˘ |
| When a man hath given up his life, | 8 | ····/··· |
| Safety and freedom have been won | 8 | /˘·/˘··· |
| By the holy power of self-sacrifice; | 10 | ··/˘/··/˘· |
| For the memory of your mother's kiss | 9 | ··/˘··/˘· |
| Valiantly stand to the breach again. | 8 | /˘····˘/ |
| Comrades, blench not now from the strife, | 8 | /······· |
| Quit you like men!" | 4 | ···· |
| Oh, we rushed to meet at our captain's side | 10 | ······//˘· |
| Death as a bride! | 4 | ···· |
| All our brave striplings bravely fell. | 8 | ·/·/˘/˘· |
| I, less fortunate, slowly came | 8 | ··/˘˘/˘· |
| Back from that din of shot and yell | 8 | ········ |
| Slowly and gaspingly, to know | 8 | /˘······ |
| A harder fate reserved for me | 8 | ·/˘·˘/·· |
| Than that brief, splendid agony. | 8 | ···/˘/˘˘ |
| Through many a bitter pang and throe | 8 | ·/·/˘··· |
| My spirit must to-morrow go | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| To seek my comrades; but I bear | 8 | ···/···· |
| The tidings that our desperate stand | 8 | ·/˘·//˘· |
| By the Long Sault has saved our land, | 8 | ······/· |
| And God has answered Daulac's prayer. | 8 | ···/˘··· |
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