Builders of Ruins
We build with strength the deep tower-wallThat shall be shattered thus and thus.And fair and great are court and hall,But how fair--this is not for us,Who know the lack that lurks in all.
We know, we know how all too brightThe hues are that our painting wears,And how the marble gleams too white;--We speak in unknown tongues, the yearsInterpret everything aright,
And crown with weeds our pride of towers,And warm our marble through with sun,And break our pavements through with flowers,With an Amen when all is done,Knowing these perfect things of ours.
O days, we ponder, left alone,Like children in their lonely hour,And in our secrets keep your own,As seeds the colour of the flower.To-day they are not all unknown,
The stars that 'twixt the rise and fall,Like relic-seers, shall one by oneStand musing o'er our empty hall;And setting moons shall brood uponThe frescoes of our inward wall.
And when some midsummer shall be,Hither will come some little one(Dusty with bloom of flowers is he),Sit on a ruin i' the late long sun,And think, one foot upon his knee.
And where they wrought, these lives of ours,So many-worded, many-souled,A North-west wind will take the towers,And dark with colour, sunny and cold,Will range alone among the flowers.
And here or there, at our desire,The little clamorous owl shall sitThrough her still time; and we aspireTo make a law (and know not it)Unto the life of a wild briar.
Our purpose is distinct and dear,Though from our open eyes 'tis hidden.Thou, Time-to-come, shalt make it clear,Undoing our work; we are children chiddenWith pity and smiles of many a year.
Who shall allot the praise, and guessWhat part is yours and what is ours?--O years that certainly will blessOur flowers with fruits, our seeds with flowers,With ruin all our perfectness.
Be patient, Time, of our delays,Too happy hopes, and wasted fears,Our faithful ways, our wilful ways,Solace our labours, O our seersThe seasons, and our bards the days;
And make our pause and silence brimWith the shrill children's play, and sweetsOf those pathetic flowers and dim,Of those eternal flowers my KeatsDying felt growing over him.
Words in this poem
- shall v. i.
- To owe; to be under obligation for. [OE. shal, schal, imp. sholde, scholde, AS. scal, sceal, I am obliged, imp. scolde, sceolde, inf. sculan; akin to OS. skulan, pres. skal, imp. skolda, D. zullen,]
- aright adv.
- Rightly; correctly; in a right way or form; without mistake or crime; as, to worship God aright. [Pref. a- + right.]
- amen interj.
- An expression used at the end of prayers, and meaning, So be it. At the end of a creed, it is a solemn asseveration of belief. [L. amen, Gr. am certainly, truly.]
- midsummer n.
- The middle of summer. Shak. Midsummer daisy (Bot.), the oxeye daisy. [AS. midsumor.]
- sunny a.
- Of or pertaining to the sun; proceeding from, or resembling the sun; hence, shining; bright; brilliant; radiant.
- aspire v. t.
- To aspire to; to long for; to try to reach; to mount to.
- briar n.
- A plant with a slender woody stem bearing stout prickles; especially, species of Rosa, Rubus, and Smilax. [OE. brere, brer, AS. brer, brær; cf. Ir. briar prickle, thorn, brier, pin, Gael. preas bush, brier, W. prys, prysg.]
- shalt
- 2d per. sing. of Shall.
- undoing n.
- The reversal of what has been done.
- perfectness n.
- The quality or state of being perfect; perfection.
- solace n.
- Comfort in grief; alleviation of grief or anxiety; also, that which relieves in distress; that which cheers or consoles; relief. [OF. solas, ssoulaz, L. solacium, solatium, fr. solari to comfort, console. Cf. Console, v. t.]
- pathetic a.
- Expressing or showing anger; passionate. [L. patheticus, Gr. pathétique. See Pathos.]
Definitions and etymologies from Webster's Unabridged Dictionary, 1913.
About this text
Builders of Ruins is in the public domain. This text is taken from Poems, Project Gutenberg ebook #1186; the transcription's header, footer and licence were removed and nothing else was changed. You may copy, print and reuse it freely.
Cite as: Alice Meynell, Builders of Ruins, in Poems (1893), text of Project Gutenberg ebook #1186, Laurel, https://laurelpoetry.com/poem/meynell-poems/builders-of-ruins.html, id L12858.
Form and metre
Builders of Ruins is 60 lines in 12 stanzas of 5 lines each. The rhyme scheme is ABABA, complete in 9 of its 12 stanzas. The metre is iambic tetrameter, measured from the stress the words themselves fix (confidence 89%). 88% of its stressed syllables fall where the metre puts the beat. The lines average 8.3 syllables. 14 lines end on an unstressed syllable, a feminine ending. 25% of the lines run on without a stop at the line end.
See other poems in iambic tetrameter.
Measured by Laurel's pipeline, not copied from a handbook: how stress and metre are counted, how rhyme is lettered, how a drifted rhyme is found. Where the dictionary cannot confirm a rhyme the letter is withheld, not guessed.
Rhyme words, stanza by stanza
The word that ends each line, lettered by the rhyme it makes; a dash is a line whose rhyme the dictionary could not confirm.
- 1 ABABA wallA · thusB · hallA · usB · allA
- 2 A-A-A brightA · wears · whiteA · years · arightA
- 3 ABABA towersA · sunB · flowersA · doneB · oursA
- 4 ABABA aloneA · hourB · ownA · flowerB · unknownA
- 5 A-A-A fallA · one · hallA · upon · wallA
- 6 ABABA beA · oneB · heA · sunB · kneeA
- 7 ABABA oursA · souledB · towersA · coldB · flowersA
- 8 AB-BA desireA · sitB · aspire · itB · briarA
- 9 ABABA dearA · hiddenB · clearA · chiddenB · yearA
- 10 ABABA guessA · oursB · blessA · flowersB · perfectnessA
- 11 ABABA delaysA · fearsB · waysA · seersB · daysA
- 12 ABABA brimA · sweetsB · dimA · keatsB · himA
Scansion, line by line
Each line with its syllable count and the stresses the words themselves fix: / stressed, ˘ unstressed, · a syllable the word leaves free and the metre decides. Read against iambic tetrameter. How this is done.
| Line | Syl. | Stress |
|---|---|---|
| We build with strength the deep tower-wall | 8 | ······/· |
| That shall be shattered thus and thus. | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| And fair and great are court and hall, | 8 | ········ |
| But how fair--this is not for us, | 8 | ········ |
| Who know the lack that lurks in all. | 8 | ········ |
| We know, we know how all too bright | 8 | ········ |
| The hues are that our painting wears, | 8 | ····//˘· |
| And how the marble gleams too white;-- | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| We speak in unknown tongues, the years | 8 | ···˘/··· |
| Interpret everything aright, | 8 | ˘/˘/˘·˘/ |
| And crown with weeds our pride of towers, | 9 | ····/··/˘ |
| And warm our marble through with sun, | 8 | ··//˘··· |
| And break our pavements through with flowers, | 9 | ··//˘··/˘ |
| With an Amen when all is done, | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| Knowing these perfect things of ours. | 9 | /˘·˘/··/˘ |
| O days, we ponder, left alone, | 8 | ···/˘·˘/ |
| Like children in their lonely hour, | 9 | ·/˘··/˘/˘ |
| And in our secrets keep your own, | 8 | ··//˘··· |
| As seeds the colour of the flower. | 9 | ···/˘··/˘ |
| To-day they are not all unknown, | 8 | ······˘/ |
| The stars that 'twixt the rise and fall, | 8 | ········ |
| Like relic-seers, shall one by one | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| Stand musing o'er our empty hall; | 8 | ·/˘·//˘· |
| And setting moons shall brood upon | 8 | ·/˘····· |
| The frescoes of our inward wall. | 8 | ·/˘·//˘· |
| And when some midsummer shall be, | 8 | ···//˘·· |
| Hither will come some little one | 8 | /˘···/˘· |
| (Dusty with bloom of flowers is he), | 8 | /˘···/·· |
| Sit on a ruin i' the late long sun, | 9 | ···/····· |
| And think, one foot upon his knee. | 8 | ········ |
| And where they wrought, these lives of ours, | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| So many-worded, many-souled, | 8 | ·/˘/˘/˘· |
| A North-west wind will take the towers, | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| And dark with colour, sunny and cold, | 9 | ···/˘/˘·· |
| Will range alone among the flowers. | 9 | ··˘/···/˘ |
| And here or there, at our desire, | 9 | ·····/˘/˘ |
| The little clamorous owl shall sit | 9 | ·/˘/˘˘··· |
| Through her still time; and we aspire | 8 | ······˘/ |
| To make a law (and know not it) | 8 | ········ |
| Unto the life of a wild briar. | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| Our purpose is distinct and dear, | 8 | //˘·˘/·· |
| Though from our open eyes 'tis hidden. | 9 | ··//˘··/˘ |
| Thou, Time-to-come, shalt make it clear, | 8 | ········ |
| Undoing our work; we are children chidden | 11 | ˘/˘/···/˘·· |
| With pity and smiles of many a year. | 9 | ·/˘···/·· |
| Who shall allot the praise, and guess | 8 | ··˘/···· |
| What part is yours and what is ours?-- | 9 | ·······/˘ |
| O years that certainly will bless | 8 | ···/˘˘·· |
| Our flowers with fruits, our seeds with flowers, | 9 | //··/··/˘ |
| With ruin all our perfectness. | 9 | ·/˘·/˘/˘˘ |
| Be patient, Time, of our delays, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘/ |
| Too happy hopes, and wasted fears, | 8 | ·/˘··/˘· |
| Our faithful ways, our wilful ways, | 8 | //˘·/··· |
| Solace our labours, O our seers | 8 | /˘//˘·/· |
| The seasons, and our bards the days; | 8 | ·/˘·/··· |
| And make our pause and silence brim | 8 | ··/··/˘· |
| With the shrill children's play, and sweets | 8 | ···/˘··· |
| Of those pathetic flowers and dim, | 8 | ··˘/˘/·· |
| Of those eternal flowers my Keats | 8 | ··˘/˘/·· |
| Dying felt growing over him. | 8 | /˘·/˘··· |
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